Emerald Tower

I personally feel that the novels written by you, the author, are all of the type that you are interested in at first, but the more you read, the less you want to read them. The construction of the novels is very novel, but there are always some disappointing aspects...

After seeing the introduction, I had no desire to continue reading.

The author has always focused on describing the protagonist's strong sense of urgency for the upcoming Blood Moon War. I personally think the main plot is to resist the invasion of foreign enemies and protect the Emerald Grand Duchess. The protagonist himself also said that he would form an elite army, engage in smuggling when he went north, destroy the Gauze spy organization, etc. , And later went all the way south, involving the Earl of Massey, the Marquis of York, the thieves organization, the aristocratic circle of the capital, Earl Merry, the Delta family, the Seymour family, the Mobius Ring, the Pirate Alliance, the Secret Island, etc., A large number of branch lines are messy, there are too many, and it gives me a headache to read

From the evaluation of an old ashe, the book is good. I came here to read it for free for 2 days. I read the first 300 chapters for free and paid for the rest. You can tell by looking at my time and VIP that I support genuine reading.

At that time, the Emerald Tower, Demon King's Nanny, God's Tomb, Douluo Continent, and Long Aotian were all big fires.

Damn it, the dignified deputy leader of the Central Knights expelled the protagonist from the Central Knights just because the protagonist fell into a trance when picking up the parchment. There is no need to do this to increase the difficulty for the protagonist. It's ridiculous.

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Why did this novel give me such a vulgar feeling when I read it?

There is food and grass in the front, but the more you write in the back, the more chaotic it becomes. There are too many branch lines, the holes in the front cannot be filled, and the settings are inconsistent. 1. The dragon-headed giant sword obtained disappeared. 2. Legion talents give experience. I kill bandits at the beginning, but I won't write about it after that. It's all about individuals doing things for experience. 3. The role of the heroine is not reflected at all, and the emotional line is a mess. This setting is really a failure, and even the instructor's role cannot be kept up. 4. Exercise by yourself has no effect at all. It all depends on experience. Do you think it is reasonable? 5. The power system of the three countries written by you is too shallow. The urgency of the so-called Blood Moon War is very contradictory; it is ridiculous that a gambling battle determines the fate of everyone in a family. The three countries check and balance each other. How did Jade survive as weak as him? If you are not suitable for writing about war, don't write these things. It seems very ignorant and naive.

It's a good book. This is my third or fourth read. I don't know why I always like to read this kind of Western book. Maybe it's because I don't have anything, so I want to enjoy their sense of honor and accomplishment