Ming Tide: Thousands of Roads Finally Lead to Dawn
About This Novel
My name is Ye Ning. I am a level 80 captain who has been reluctant to break through the main storyline and is still in Chapter 11. I am also a retired traveler and the current commander. One day I was looking at my phone on the side of the road, and a truck appeared out of nowhere, and then-Bang! ! Bang! ! The same old time travel. As a result, a manager named Angelo told me that I sent it to the wrong person, and my mentality was a little depressed. But given the compensation, these can be ignored. I started to survive in Changkong City. Fortunately, I still had the skills at my disposal, at least it wouldn't be in vain. The system is a piece of cake, but relatively reliable. Being able to complain about drinking Coke is not artificially retarded at all. Fight monsters along the way to level up, show off when you are weak, and run away when you are strong. As soon as we arrived, Yu Sanjia drove away in my boat. Alone and messy in the wind...-------------- Xier is a single female protagonist, without a harem. Two protagonists, traveling through multiple worlds, the plot is oriented. This is my first time writing a novel, please bear with me. Updated from time to time.
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Official(29)Scraped 26d ago
Friends, can you borrow your protagonist for a little bit? I want to link it to my extra chapter
Let your favorite wife support you
From a subjective point of view, the early plot is not bad, and there are many shadows of my works. It is really an honor to be loved by a reader for my work. But I would like to give you a small suggestion. It would be better for you to think about the plot settings when coding. In this way, you will find that there are actually many details that can be modified, and it will also be a great logical help for the settings that you want to incorporate other elements. This is advice from an author whose only work has failed. By the way, it's not that dual protagonists can't be written, but it's because dual protagonists are too difficult, which has led many authors to focus on a single protagonist. And the majority of readers are basically accustomed to works with this type of setting, because the most important thing in a novel is to have a sense of immersion. The dual protagonist setting enters the plot from multiple perspectives, which perfectly weakens the sense of immersion a little. If you don't have good plot control skills, your work will basically be gg. My work is a good lesson for others. I have to say that I am also very accustomed to the setting of a single protagonist. It is so perfect that the other protagonist directly becomes a supporting role. I'm pretty self-aware about this, huh (self-deprecating) So that's it, your writing can still be improved. At least I can see that your writing is better than mine. Come on. I'm going to continue writing extra chapters of the big article.
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Happy birthday my country! Have fun everyone!
Has the author also seen the events of time traveling to Honkai Impact III?
It feels a bit similar. They are both dual protagonists.
OK, I can say it's really good (≧∇≦*),
Some sentences are missing some words, and then some sentences have some typos. And the author should work harder and do more, I'm still waiting for your update!
I can't see it! head
Why can't I still see it? Ah ah ah ＼ (`Δ')／
As usual, I will wait for you to come back
When you come back, I hope you will be named on the gold list!
Happy New Year!
The first comment of the year is mine
200 consecutive days of punching in to commemorate!
Wuhu! Check in for two hundred days in a row! As expected of me, Xiao Wuzi O(∩m∩)O
The third day of waiting for updates
Do it once a day, strengthen your faith, check in, check in. ( O Ⅴ O ) ✌️
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Official(29)Scraped 26d ago
Friends, can you borrow your protagonist for a little bit? I want to link it to my extra chapter
Let your favorite wife support you
From a subjective point of view, the early plot is not bad, and there are many shadows of my works. It is really an honor to be loved by a reader for my work. But I would like to give you a small suggestion. It would be better for you to think about the plot settings when coding. In this way, you will find that there are actually many details that can be modified, and it will also be a great logical help for the settings that you want to incorporate other elements. This is advice from an author whose only work has failed. By the way, it's not that dual protagonists can't be written, but it's because dual protagonists are too difficult, which has led many authors to focus on a single protagonist. And the majority of readers are basically accustomed to works with this type of setting, because the most important thing in a novel is to have a sense of immersion. The dual protagonist setting enters the plot from multiple perspectives, which perfectly weakens the sense of immersion a little. If you don't have good plot control skills, your work will basically be gg. My work is a good lesson for others. I have to say that I am also very accustomed to the setting of a single protagonist. It is so perfect that the other protagonist directly becomes a supporting role. I'm pretty self-aware about this, huh (self-deprecating) So that's it, your writing can still be improved. At least I can see that your writing is better than mine. Come on. I'm going to continue writing extra chapters of the big article.
National Day Check-in
Happy birthday my country! Have fun everyone!
Has the author also seen the events of time traveling to Honkai Impact III?
It feels a bit similar. They are both dual protagonists.
OK, I can say it's really good (≧∇≦*),
Some sentences are missing some words, and then some sentences have some typos. And the author should work harder and do more, I'm still waiting for your update!
I can't see it! head
Why can't I still see it? Ah ah ah ＼ (`Δ')／
As usual, I will wait for you to come back
When you come back, I hope you will be named on the gold list!
Happy New Year!
The first comment of the year is mine
200 consecutive days of punching in to commemorate!
Wuhu! Check in for two hundred days in a row! As expected of me, Xiao Wuzi O(∩m∩)O
The third day of waiting for updates
Do it once a day, strengthen your faith, check in, check in. ( O Ⅴ O ) ✌️
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