What Does This Book Have to Do with Yu-gi-oh!

Without memory, the protagonist is simply a high school freshman from the Yu-Gi-Oh anime who can speak Chinese. It doesn't make much sense and provides no sense of immersion.

Dressed in the skin of Yu-Gi-Oh, the character design is completely wrong. In addition, it doesn't take many chapters to start making mistakes, being inconsistent, and it's a mess of writing.

The story you describe should have a center, not just a sentence here and a sentence there. The easiest way is to make an outline for each of your stories. If you want to write about what the protagonist will do in a certain world, you should first clarify the protagonist's goal in this world. What problems will he encounter? How will the protagonist solve it? Then the plot you set up later should push the protagonist towards this goal, rather than thinking about it while writing. This can easily lead to incoherence in the plot. There is also a habit that all authors will commit. They are too ambitious, want to write too much, and cannot keep up with their own abilities. As a result, the final goal is not achieved, but instead there are a lot of problems. Try to keep the article as simple as possible. If you have too many words, your ideas will be messed up. If your ideas are messed up, your article will look very sloppy and messy, giving people a chaotic feeling.

The early plot is good and the brother-killer blends in well; the digital world part is unbearable.

It was good at first, but when it comes to digital, I don't want to watch it anymore. Personally, it's a failure.

Author, can you write about the duel in more detail? Otherwise, I don't feel anything at all. A world has passed and I still don't know what type of deck Honda has. I originally thought it was a Goblin-specialized deck, but you didn't write it down. Instead, you took out a pot. I hope the duel part was written in more detail, so that at least people can feel Honda's growth. I will follow it after it is released Y(^_^)Y

I have gone through a lonely time... I am not as good as aboriginals.

As the title says, it really has nothing to do with Yu-Gi-Oh!

Although it was a bit boring in the early stage, it is still good to watch. [Emot=default,03/]

The writing is quite good, and the three copies are not those bad copies, which is a bonus. It's awesome to be able to write down the rules for talking nonsense in the early stage so reasonably.