The Lord of Thunder That Devours the Starry Sky

It's so pretty, I'll give it to you with six hearts and one more.

Is the heroine an aunt or someone else? Don't create your own heroine. Lei should be of mixed Indian descent... Hong is a mercenary (killer). How could these two guys be fixed at the Chinese Guard Base? The original work explains it... This guy Lei is still relatively fair and reasonable. In the original work, during the period when Luo Feng swallowed the golden horn (everyone thought he died), Hong was the first to stand up and morally kidnapped Luo Feng and took away the things Luo Feng left at home... I personally hate this guy Hong. I hope the author will never write a kneeling licking mode or a nanny mode, and just be fair and just to Luo Feng who has not yet risen... When the protagonist gets resources, he must never give them away for free. Relatives can still do it. There are several books next door where the protagonist raises the whole world by himself, or Luo Feng was just born in the hospital and the protagonist takes a bunch of people to lick. Come on author 👏

The more I read it, the more I felt that it was written by AI. It talked about time travel, and I knew it was swallowing the starry sky world, but in terms of subsequent performance, it sometimes behaved like it was swallowing locals. You are shocked that the earth is 3 trillion, and you are still amazed that the virtual universe can simulate laws. You sincerely lamented the numerical values ​​of the simulated body, and you sincerely lamented the laws of simulation. Is there anything else you can't lament? You said in the first chapter that after reading it more than 10 times, you might as well change it to remember it roughly. There are no good books with a preface that does not match the follower. I just picked a few of them at random. I don't know how poisonous the back is

Generally speaking, it is very strange, and the plug-ins are very popular, but the protagonist is loved by everyone. I met Ai Chen in the virtual universe, and then they fell in love. Even when I went to buy something, the waitress thought the male protagonist was so handsome and elegant . Also, the protagonist chooses the Heavenly Thunder Chaos Monument (Law of Thunder Time), and when he breaks through the overpass, his opponent is practicing the Golden Sky Law. There is also some space blockade and strangulation, just copy the original work. In the original work, Luo Feng has a Muling Boat, and one is also arranged for the protagonist here. . .

Can you please respect the original work? If there is no wormhole, just buy the Earth. Ten copies will swallow the same people, and nine copies will become the Earth Lord. The key is that the original work said that you can't buy it. Either you will tell others that you have flown thousands of light years, or you will tell others that you have obtained the immortal inheritance... There is really no need to fight against the Earth Lord. Is it to protect the earth, or for the pleasure of becoming a lord? You can completely set up a defense system in the solar system, wait for the Nuolan Mountain adventure team to catch it before it reaches the earth, obtain the wormhole coordinates and flight route, and then buy the earth...

The author tells me a few heroines or a heroine and who they are. Tell me and I'll watch it and I'll get a monthly ticket

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It is outrageous that the enemy who is the most important enemy of the rise and fall of a country currently chooses to hide his strength.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing style is far behind, as are the characters' language and dialogue, as well as various descriptions. There are some shortcomings. The dialogue between the characters is too stiff, like an elementary school essay, and the description of the combat power data is too low-key. For example, when I created the sword technique earlier, I could swing a hundred swords in one second at the human limit. Many people here are already dissatisfied. As a result, in the next section, a leaf falls on the shadow of a knife and is split into two halves. This is a bit overwhelming, and I want to have a little fun. But it will be counterproductive if the writing is poorly written and there is nothing enjoyable about it. The writing style can be improved. In fact, you don't need to think so deliberately about how to say the dialogues of the characters. You can just write them according to how everyone talks normally. They can be short and express the meaning directly. Write the combat power data carefully and think about it as much as possible before sending it out. Write normal language dialogues and write more normal descriptions of combat power data. Everyone seems happy with it. I won't deliberately worry about your combat power. Just the first 10 chapters alone have already attracted a lot of people. The subject matter is good. If I write it well, it can reach more than 9 o'clock, which is a pity.

The author arranges for the heroine Ai Chen to hurry up