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When he woke up, Fan An traveled to a strange parallel world, before he could sort out his memories. Then he found a woman in white sitting at the head of the bed, sneering miserably: I can't sleep on a moonlit night, I wish Xiu Yan well...
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Official(55)Scraped 22d ago
What did you write?
I am not a great talent, so I cannot judge this book, but after reading it, I decided to become a "Shen Nong" Damn this book is really poisonous. Speaking of the protagonist's IQ and behavior, I really doubt whether the protagonist is really a time traveler who graduated from college. The protagonist's IQ is really disabled. Many things that can maximize benefits are either not done or interrupted unexpectedly, and the things have not been made up. I feel very aggrieved. His behavior is also disgusting. It feels like a naughty kid who suddenly has power and is causing trouble everywhere without any self-awareness. Moreover, there is no one to guide him, and he is unrepentant. What's more, and the most important point is that the protagonist's skills and attack methods are too monotonous. He just uses a knife to cut randomly, without any rules. His skills have always been blur and ghost eyes, two skills common to ordinary ghosts. What about ghost claws? What about possession? What about dreams? What about Miyan? You don't have any of these skills that the lowest level Yin Souls have. Are you trying to lower the profession of Yin Chai and return it to the eighth-grade Yin God? I think your Yin Chai is not as good as the ninth-grade Yin pawn who works as a handyman in the underworld. Also, the protagonist is a shady character, right? What about the soul-binding lock? Where's the ghost stick? Where did he go? That is the most basic equipment for Yin Zai. The job responsibility of Yin Zai is to collect souls, not Zhu Xie. Even if the protagonist does not collect souls, you should also install these basic equipment for the protagonist, right? Don't tell me that the level of these equipment is too high. The high-end equipment you think of as the Soul Hook and the Crying Stick are equipment for seventh-grade impermanent ghosts. Seventh-grade impermanent ghosts are also ghosts, but they are not as high-end as ordinary ghosts. They are designed to recruit those big figures with rich shady virtues. Let's not talk about the Impermanent Ghost. Even the two trash ghosts in Uncle Jiu's movie who can be defeated by ordinary people have soul-binding locks. You, a ghost who can kill even fierce ghosts with one sword, don't even have a soul-binding lock. Isn't it very rubbish? Moreover, he is an eighth-grade Yin God who doesn't even have magical powers. He is still an orthodox Yin God and is not as good as a returning god. Even the Ghost Ghosts of the Yang World have the magical power of channeling ghosts and collecting souls. You, an eighth-grade orthodox Yin God, don't have any magical powers either. Moreover, the plot is also very crude and nothing new. The supporting characters are also mentally retarded. It seems that apart from the villain, there are not many people with high IQs in the book. The same is true for your protagonist. Anyway, I have tried the poison here. This book is really poisonous. This poison can block people's nerves and attack their IQ and common sense. It can even be read as half a sand sculpture.
Let me ask you two little questions.
The first question: Do you want a heroine or no heroine? Second question: Do you prefer one chapter a day with 4,000 words, or two chapters a day with 2,000 words each?
The pig's feet setting and character are so uncomfortable to watch.
This pig's foot is like a fool stepping on a horse. It always feels like it is being led by the plot. How come it has lived two lives? It feels like it has no IQ at all. It can still forget things. How careless? I'm really convinced, it's really uncomfortable to watch.
Why do you feel so delayed?
Other novels have children in three chapters 😂
If you open so many lines and you don't write them, the protagonist will not get down to business. If you only open the lines, his strength will not increase.
I feel like there are too many lines, a little here and there, but the writing is good, but there are too many pitfalls to read.
Why does the text need ten more words?
The book is good
The book is good, but there are too few. Please do your best, author.
short and weak
I can't say it, one chapter a day, it's short and weak, I guess it's useless.
Stop copying. I've already copied several books. Let's innovate on your own.
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Official(55)Scraped 22d ago
What did you write?
I am not a great talent, so I cannot judge this book, but after reading it, I decided to become a "Shen Nong" Damn this book is really poisonous. Speaking of the protagonist's IQ and behavior, I really doubt whether the protagonist is really a time traveler who graduated from college. The protagonist's IQ is really disabled. Many things that can maximize benefits are either not done or interrupted unexpectedly, and the things have not been made up. I feel very aggrieved. His behavior is also disgusting. It feels like a naughty kid who suddenly has power and is causing trouble everywhere without any self-awareness. Moreover, there is no one to guide him, and he is unrepentant. What's more, and the most important point is that the protagonist's skills and attack methods are too monotonous. He just uses a knife to cut randomly, without any rules. His skills have always been blur and ghost eyes, two skills common to ordinary ghosts. What about ghost claws? What about possession? What about dreams? What about Miyan? You don't have any of these skills that the lowest level Yin Souls have. Are you trying to lower the profession of Yin Chai and return it to the eighth-grade Yin God? I think your Yin Chai is not as good as the ninth-grade Yin pawn who works as a handyman in the underworld. Also, the protagonist is a shady character, right? What about the soul-binding lock? Where's the ghost stick? Where did he go? That is the most basic equipment for Yin Zai. The job responsibility of Yin Zai is to collect souls, not Zhu Xie. Even if the protagonist does not collect souls, you should also install these basic equipment for the protagonist, right? Don't tell me that the level of these equipment is too high. The high-end equipment you think of as the Soul Hook and the Crying Stick are equipment for seventh-grade impermanent ghosts. Seventh-grade impermanent ghosts are also ghosts, but they are not as high-end as ordinary ghosts. They are designed to recruit those big figures with rich shady virtues. Let's not talk about the Impermanent Ghost. Even the two trash ghosts in Uncle Jiu's movie who can be defeated by ordinary people have soul-binding locks. You, a ghost who can kill even fierce ghosts with one sword, don't even have a soul-binding lock. Isn't it very rubbish? Moreover, he is an eighth-grade Yin God who doesn't even have magical powers. He is still an orthodox Yin God and is not as good as a returning god. Even the Ghost Ghosts of the Yang World have the magical power of channeling ghosts and collecting souls. You, an eighth-grade orthodox Yin God, don't have any magical powers either. Moreover, the plot is also very crude and nothing new. The supporting characters are also mentally retarded. It seems that apart from the villain, there are not many people with high IQs in the book. The same is true for your protagonist. Anyway, I have tried the poison here. This book is really poisonous. This poison can block people's nerves and attack their IQ and common sense. It can even be read as half a sand sculpture.
Let me ask you two little questions.
The first question: Do you want a heroine or no heroine? Second question: Do you prefer one chapter a day with 4,000 words, or two chapters a day with 2,000 words each?
The pig's feet setting and character are so uncomfortable to watch.
This pig's foot is like a fool stepping on a horse. It always feels like it is being led by the plot. How come it has lived two lives? It feels like it has no IQ at all. It can still forget things. How careless? I'm really convinced, it's really uncomfortable to watch.
Why do you feel so delayed?
Other novels have children in three chapters 😂
If you open so many lines and you don't write them, the protagonist will not get down to business. If you only open the lines, his strength will not increase.
I feel like there are too many lines, a little here and there, but the writing is good, but there are too many pitfalls to read.
Why does the text need ten more words?
The book is good
The book is good, but there are too few. Please do your best, author.
short and weak
I can't say it, one chapter a day, it's short and weak, I guess it's useless.
Stop copying. I've already copied several books. Let's innovate on your own.
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When he woke up, Fan An traveled to a strange parallel world, before he could sort out his memories. Then he found a woman in white sitting at the head of the bed, sneering miserably: I can't sleep on a moonlit night, I wish Xiu Yan well...




This novel is very similar to You Qi, but the writing and plot are still quite different. The character setting of the protagonist is a bit disgusting, but there are not many such novels, so give it a try. Recommendation index:★★☆
















