The Fur General of the Pirate Navy

Author, let me tell you, if you don't update it, I won't read it. If I don't watch it, I can't sleep. I couldn't sleep, so I took a nap during class. When I doze off in class, my grades drop. As soon as my grades dropped, the teacher became worried. Once a teacher is worried, he cannot teach the pillars of the country. If we cannot teach the pillars of the country, the country will fall. Once a country falls, it will be beaten by other countries. Once it is attacked by other countries, there will be World War III. With World War III, there will be biological and chemical weapons. With the use of biological and chemical weapons, there will be poisonous gas in the world. With poison gas, animals will become extinct. If animals become extinct, then vegetables and other things will also have poisonous gas. Animals and vegetables are poisonous, and humans will become extinct unless they eat each other. Once humans become extinct, we will be gone. Author, if you don't want to disappear, please update quickly.

The author insists, don't be a eunuch, you will become stronger if you persist

Even if the starting point of the pirate world is high, it's not that outrageous that special races have physical bonuses. Hell, when Zefa asked him to perform a task, he was only 13 or 14, and he could defeat Doflamingo with three palms! ? This guy is even more awesome than Luffy, and you have to give him a name for the result. Are there no men in the navy? Once the protagonist changes his body and adds some muscles, countless young ladies will secretly agree! ? And the body has limitations. Even if you are underage and practice to death, your strength will still be the same. Geniuses are more powerful, but they are also limited. It does not mean that you can become awesome by practicing hard. There are so many shortcomings. Just seeing this, it is very annoying. You can look at other fans. Write a novel again. If this is your practice book, then I didn't tell you. If you want to become a master, read more readers' opinions. Although it's uncomfortable, you have to learn from experience and improve. I'm not afraid that your writing is bad. I'm just afraid that you won't change after being criticized. You don't have to force the emotional scenes. You're an awkward group.

I really liked the fur race when I watched TV before, and I really liked the author's vision.

I am also an old bookworm. Although I am a little confused when I read it, you have to work hard!

It was okay in the early stage, and the writing was very good. I didn't expect that it would turn into a mess in the later stage. I felt so uncomfortable that I gave up the book.

Damn, I gave you my monthly pass and recommendation vote. Why are you still resuming the update? Are you ready for the Chinese New Year party?

When does the protagonist awaken his domineering power?

You can write about the transformation of the fur tribe.

I feel it's a bit too fast, so the community shouldn't be finished in more than a hundred chapters. 🤗