Alliance: Internet Addicted Girl
About This Novel
A talented e-sports girl was reborn in a parallel world. At the invitation of professional players, she set foot on the professional arena and began her journey to punch in the LPL and kick in the world championship. Many people have different reasons for playing professionally. Chen Yaoyao from Renmei Luziye is very simple. She just wants to be beaten to death by everyone, or beat everyone to death! Lol professional writing.
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Official(32)Scraped 4d ago
book-knot
No more nonsense, let's go directly to the topic, as follows: Positive points: The plot moves quickly, just like a high-speed train! Bad points: 1: Short and weak! 2: There is no plot at all (really, there is no plot, it is played from beginning to end) at least add some daily life! 3: The description of the comparison process is not detailed! 4: The content is completely invisible. The protagonist emmmm uses routines or restraints to fight, but TM crushes him everywhere (nonsense, no matter how strong your routines are, he is still the younger brother before that version. Even if you develop it, it is impossible for the opponent to explode within a few minutes of the fight →_→) 5: Bugs can be seen everywhere (mostly from the cheers of the audience) 6: The plot connection is not clear, it is RANK in one second, and it is trial training in the next second (just one sentence), It's less than ten chapters into the training match, and after a few more chapters, it's straight onto the LPL, and there's no queue for the LDL, and the process is a huge jump. 7: The title is not clear, the title of the article is: Internet Addicted Girl, emmmmm I understand that professional players are all Internet addicted teenagers, but apart from the games, what else can be said about Internet addiction in this article, it seems that it is gone! You can change her name to the number one female player in League of Legends. I think this is more clear than that internet-addicted girl. Suggestion: Appropriately add some daily or game descriptions to make the game description clearer and reduce bugs (if you don't understand, you can ask your book friends, don't use the current jokes to reveal them at the time, that is inappropriate.) The plot links can be optimized, and don't make large jumps. The above is just a personal opinion, what do you think →_→
It's weird to watch male videos. .
As the title says, it would be weird to vote for a male channel. . .
Recently some female video authors can't survive anymore
There has been a sharp increase in this kind of articles recently. I beg you to go to the female channel. The male channel is really not suitable. You used to read a lot of articles and now you want to come back?
Shouldn't the title of this book be from a female channel? Why are you here?
That book is very good. I recommend you to read the female channel.
Ma Liu update
Update once a day. Are you really 6? Can we be more generous?
You'd better go back to the place where men's videos are played.
Don't run around, the editor is stupid, why would you put a book like this in a male channel?
If you don't like watching it, just go away. No one is begging you to watch it. Also, is this a female video? Go and see for yourself, this is completely different from the female channel, isn't it just a different heroine? It was originally a cool article, why should I look down on girls? A bunch of garbage, just tell me how much you charge.
Why is this on a male channel?
Shouldn't it be on a female channel? Sad
Come on, it looks good
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Community(0)
Official(32)Scraped 4d ago
book-knot
No more nonsense, let's go directly to the topic, as follows: Positive points: The plot moves quickly, just like a high-speed train! Bad points: 1: Short and weak! 2: There is no plot at all (really, there is no plot, it is played from beginning to end) at least add some daily life! 3: The description of the comparison process is not detailed! 4: The content is completely invisible. The protagonist emmmm uses routines or restraints to fight, but TM crushes him everywhere (nonsense, no matter how strong your routines are, he is still the younger brother before that version. Even if you develop it, it is impossible for the opponent to explode within a few minutes of the fight →_→) 5: Bugs can be seen everywhere (mostly from the cheers of the audience) 6: The plot connection is not clear, it is RANK in one second, and it is trial training in the next second (just one sentence), It's less than ten chapters into the training match, and after a few more chapters, it's straight onto the LPL, and there's no queue for the LDL, and the process is a huge jump. 7: The title is not clear, the title of the article is: Internet Addicted Girl, emmmmm I understand that professional players are all Internet addicted teenagers, but apart from the games, what else can be said about Internet addiction in this article, it seems that it is gone! You can change her name to the number one female player in League of Legends. I think this is more clear than that internet-addicted girl. Suggestion: Appropriately add some daily or game descriptions to make the game description clearer and reduce bugs (if you don't understand, you can ask your book friends, don't use the current jokes to reveal them at the time, that is inappropriate.) The plot links can be optimized, and don't make large jumps. The above is just a personal opinion, what do you think →_→
It's weird to watch male videos. .
As the title says, it would be weird to vote for a male channel. . .
Recently some female video authors can't survive anymore
There has been a sharp increase in this kind of articles recently. I beg you to go to the female channel. The male channel is really not suitable. You used to read a lot of articles and now you want to come back?
Shouldn't the title of this book be from a female channel? Why are you here?
That book is very good. I recommend you to read the female channel.
Ma Liu update
Update once a day. Are you really 6? Can we be more generous?
You'd better go back to the place where men's videos are played.
Don't run around, the editor is stupid, why would you put a book like this in a male channel?
If you don't like watching it, just go away. No one is begging you to watch it. Also, is this a female video? Go and see for yourself, this is completely different from the female channel, isn't it just a different heroine? It was originally a cool article, why should I look down on girls? A bunch of garbage, just tell me how much you charge.
Why is this on a male channel?
Shouldn't it be on a female channel? Sad
Come on, it looks good
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Official(3)
Bianwen, but not pretentious, lol game article. Although I don't play lol, it's quite interesting to watch.
Colaji. . . It's you.
Game writing, the career path of top laner in LOL, female protagonist, recommendation index two stars, you can read it in the book shortage
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