
Douluo: What If Bibi Dong Has a Problem?
by Shan Chu
About This Novel
If Bibi Dong becomes the protagonist of the story, Although there is no deep blue attribute panel, and there is no two world-spanning lives of Tang San, But she could have a more cliched plug-in, letting an alien loser replace the deceiving Rakshasa god as her "white-bearded grandpa". God Shura was shameless and sidetracked, but Bibi Dong was determined not to follow the path of a god. Artificial martial souls, magic books, magic weapons, and holy light. . . Brand-new technology has brought about earth-shaking changes in the world of soul masters. Under this new wave, where will Yu Xiaogang, Tang San, Shrek Academy and the conservative nobles go? Zhao Wuji, you see we are easy to bully when we are young, right? Is it mediocre to dare not cause trouble? Let you know the cost of causing trouble, "Seven-page magic book! Transformation! Dark gold hole-clawed bear with soul armor attached!" The sixth soul skill is loaded, Dark Gold Terror Claw Splitting!
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Official(32)Scraped 15d ago
Bibi Dong's talents, opportunities, resources, and protection are all lacking, but it's a tragedy that she has a bad mind and is destined to be a fool!
Some thoughts on Bibi Dong as the main character
I feel that writing Bibi Dong as a main character is only suitable before those bad things happened and before meeting Yu Xiaogang, because no matter how I write after that, it will be unflattering. If you don't hate Qianjiaba, you can't pretend that something like that didn't happen. If you hate Qianjia, no matter how you describe it, it is just an act of white-eyed wolf and traitor. . . . It is impossible not to sympathize with an indescribably weak woman. Sympathy for her at this stage is like sympathizing with Wang Jingwei and other traitors. It is unreasonable. The results she gets are the causes she planted with her own hands. . . . .
Everything else is good, but there is a problem with the second part.
Everything else is pretty good, but the author has less understanding and understanding of the original work, and there are problems with the original work. After reading the content and comments, I learned that the author regards Tang San's cultivation speed as that of ordinary geniuses, and has not considered the obscure statement in Chapter 6 of the original work and the future plot at all. My guess is that Tang San himself has innate soul power and it is not low. After all, he has a physical body The Haotian bloodline and the Blue Emperor's bloodline are at least innate level seven in this world of bloodline theory. The reason why it took two years to reach the perfection of Xuantian Kung Fu is that Tang San's soul power was pure and refined, and the original innate soul power was directly purified and refined into Xuantian internal power. There is no mention of the Eight Extraordinary Meridians in the original work. The cultivation speed of Xuantian Kung is not slow at all. From Dou Er and Dou San, we can see how powerful Xuantian Kung is. Therefore, Tang San's cultivation speed is definitely the top. Regarding the secondary design and originality, the author's timeline was not well controlled. The original characters were forced to be of the same age, and Bibi Dong was awarded the title at the age of thirty-two. In addition, there was nothing in the Rakshasa test. Bibi Dong's soul ring ratio was her own. The original book said that Bibi Dong was the first person to overcome twin martial arts souls because of her strong physical fitness. Another original character is a student of Wuhun Academy. This original work doesn't say much, but the Wuhun Palace team is the top students of Wuhun Academy. There are three soul kings and four soul sects, all under the age of twenty-five (speaking of this, I have to mention the forced age. Has the author considered the consequences of Hu Hexie being raised by four or five years, and the consequence is that Xie Yue and Yan are over the age of the competition), so Don't worry about being 12 years old and level 35. There are always several soul masters under the age of 12. It's really a show. Hu Liena has been practicing fast and has been with the protagonist since she was a child. In the end, she is no better than the original little Karami. Moreover, there is a feeling that the original character has been improved and the original character has replaced the original character. At the age of 12 and level 35, isn't this the script of the saint Hu Liena?
Will Guang and Bibi Dong's subsequent relationship be lovers or friends?
Rather than saying that Bibi Dong is in trouble, it is better to say that it is a personal show of light being resurrected.
A rare masterpiece
The concise plot also contains vivid and detailed descriptions, and the concept is bold and unique.
It's a bit disgusting that the protagonist has double standards, man
It's better not to make chapter names too simple. This is fan fiction. If it's too simple, you won't be able to preview it.
The following content will make you abandon the book, faster, faster, faster, faster and more
He's just a demigod, so I don't think he's too strong. Just don't exceed the god level.
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Official(32)Scraped 15d ago
Bibi Dong's talents, opportunities, resources, and protection are all lacking, but it's a tragedy that she has a bad mind and is destined to be a fool!
Some thoughts on Bibi Dong as the main character
I feel that writing Bibi Dong as a main character is only suitable before those bad things happened and before meeting Yu Xiaogang, because no matter how I write after that, it will be unflattering. If you don't hate Qianjiaba, you can't pretend that something like that didn't happen. If you hate Qianjia, no matter how you describe it, it is just an act of white-eyed wolf and traitor. . . . It is impossible not to sympathize with an indescribably weak woman. Sympathy for her at this stage is like sympathizing with Wang Jingwei and other traitors. It is unreasonable. The results she gets are the causes she planted with her own hands. . . . .
Everything else is good, but there is a problem with the second part.
Everything else is pretty good, but the author has less understanding and understanding of the original work, and there are problems with the original work. After reading the content and comments, I learned that the author regards Tang San's cultivation speed as that of ordinary geniuses, and has not considered the obscure statement in Chapter 6 of the original work and the future plot at all. My guess is that Tang San himself has innate soul power and it is not low. After all, he has a physical body The Haotian bloodline and the Blue Emperor's bloodline are at least innate level seven in this world of bloodline theory. The reason why it took two years to reach the perfection of Xuantian Kung Fu is that Tang San's soul power was pure and refined, and the original innate soul power was directly purified and refined into Xuantian internal power. There is no mention of the Eight Extraordinary Meridians in the original work. The cultivation speed of Xuantian Kung is not slow at all. From Dou Er and Dou San, we can see how powerful Xuantian Kung is. Therefore, Tang San's cultivation speed is definitely the top. Regarding the secondary design and originality, the author's timeline was not well controlled. The original characters were forced to be of the same age, and Bibi Dong was awarded the title at the age of thirty-two. In addition, there was nothing in the Rakshasa test. Bibi Dong's soul ring ratio was her own. The original book said that Bibi Dong was the first person to overcome twin martial arts souls because of her strong physical fitness. Another original character is a student of Wuhun Academy. This original work doesn't say much, but the Wuhun Palace team is the top students of Wuhun Academy. There are three soul kings and four soul sects, all under the age of twenty-five (speaking of this, I have to mention the forced age. Has the author considered the consequences of Hu Hexie being raised by four or five years, and the consequence is that Xie Yue and Yan are over the age of the competition), so Don't worry about being 12 years old and level 35. There are always several soul masters under the age of 12. It's really a show. Hu Liena has been practicing fast and has been with the protagonist since she was a child. In the end, she is no better than the original little Karami. Moreover, there is a feeling that the original character has been improved and the original character has replaced the original character. At the age of 12 and level 35, isn't this the script of the saint Hu Liena?
Will Guang and Bibi Dong's subsequent relationship be lovers or friends?
Rather than saying that Bibi Dong is in trouble, it is better to say that it is a personal show of light being resurrected.
A rare masterpiece
The concise plot also contains vivid and detailed descriptions, and the concept is bold and unique.
It's a bit disgusting that the protagonist has double standards, man
It's better not to make chapter names too simple. This is fan fiction. If it's too simple, you won't be able to preview it.
The following content will make you abandon the book, faster, faster, faster, faster and more
He's just a demigod, so I don't think he's too strong. Just don't exceed the god level.
















