Elf Early Login

I finished reading the online game elf novel written by the boss next door~ Shuhuang. After scrolling through it twice, I saw this one. The writing and plot are both good Four recommendation votes are given to the author a day, so I hope it's not too few (2333) I belong to that kind of Buddhist student... I don't have much money. I will definitely pay for the first order. Take your time for the full order. You must see it until the end. But... @Author (takes out the voodoo doll) One update is not enough Let's arrange a wind fairy for the protagonist. It's best to shine. My destiny It would be good to use the team-receiving flow, tricks, parasitic seeds and other routines... But if it is made into pure output... (Hehe, that's okay too) Just arrange the plot directly in Celebi (if written) It's best before chapter 100. If that doesn't work, you can wait until chapter 150. *^_^* (The picture downstairs is from pokemmo)

Two days ago, the author of All Elf Era posted this The following is the text (｡ゝω｡)ゞMay is here. Recently, the author also knows that this period of time is too exciting. In this case, let's have some new excitement in this new month. From this chapter onwards, if you get more than 200 recommendation votes every day, an additional chapter will be added, if you get 20 monthly votes every month, an additional chapter will be added, and if you accumulate 5,000 book coins as a reward, an additional chapter will be added. (๑‾ꇴ‾๑) is not capped Then I complained about him in the comments, saying that he was Mai Shiranui's younger brother, he didn't know how to live or die, he had hundreds of chapters each, and he was trying to get unlimited chapters. Then he said in the article today Dad, I was wrong. You made me owe more than twenty articles in one day. That's roughly what it means Then I clicked on the wrong one and mistaken that book for this one In my book review below, I actually want to say that it should make that person feel a little better, and don't set the conditions so low! There are definitely many people who like Pokemon, so it would be very embarrassing for him to say this. After all, I owe more than 20 chapters in one day -_-||. As a fellow author, you should understand that this is better than the chance of repaying the debt. . . Very touching -_- I also want to remind you, 27, that if you want to play with this kind of thing in the future, don't act like him →_→ Either you really have a lot of saved manuscripts (unlikely), or you set the conditions a little higher, otherwise this will be really bad for you. Finally, I advise you Don't play like this, otherwise I can only wish you good health.

Highly recommended from the online article "Zhuangfan"

After reading a few chapters, the overall feeling is that it is nonsense and the protagonist has too much inner monologue. Some picky readers may abandon the book immediately

The settings of Lin Zhou and Fire Fox are similar to the protagonists of Elf's Global Arrival

It feels like the protagonist's IQ is as low as the Great Rift Valley -_-|| is gone

It's all retelling, always telling stories, always thinking about what to do, always reasoning, why are you going to catch elves, go on adventures, and keep talking about what's going on? It's so hot.

The background the author wrote is time travel, and there are no Pokémon in this world, so why do you still use a Japanese background after entering the game? This is a force to persuade many people to quit. A year later, when the whole world enters the game, including the protagonist's family, is it possible that they will all be called Little Japan? Why add superfluous information and just write about China? Although it is indeed created by Xiao Nippon, this is just a novel, and this place is called China

How should I put it? It's too watery, the settings are too vague, and the explanations in the front are too annoying. I just skipped and skipped reading. Some things should be buried, don't keep explaining them. Write a chapter or two to introduce them in advance, and then bury them in a pit. It's so refreshing. It has to be so watery.

What is this? I can't even pinpoint the position of the book. Let's just say it's a cool novel. You have to have a complicated plot. There's no intention of letting people read it at the beginning.