Infinite World Comes to the World
by Literary Mistakes And False Pretenses
About This Novel
With the collision of superpowers, magic, warriors, cultivation, genetic modification, various training systems, and various professions, who can successfully reach the top? (It's not dark, it's not Gu-raising, it's not pure and infinite.) This book has been scrapped. I will try to rewrite the parts after the first world, but my mentality went wrong when I wrote it.
What Readers Think
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Official(21)Scraped 1mo ago
There is too much nonsense, gibberish, a fight must be described carefully from beginning to end, why fight like this, what will happen like this, what does the protagonist think, what does the opponent think, good guy, just a paragraph, just a variety of descriptions, (the opponent is here, should I block or not, how should I block, after blocking, and then the enemy starts to think, blocked, what should I do, jump repeatedly)
Licking the dog is a bit
Still don't watch it. . . I feel that there is no novelty in writing the protagonist. What's the point of practicing swordsmanship and having to unleash the talent of the small universe at a critical moment of life and death? Written like this, I thought he was a wise man, but he looks like a reckless man, and he wants to be reckless from time to time. If he is not the protagonist, I am afraid that even if he is slapped in the face, his body will be wiped out, right?
How to say
You can't say that the author is bad. It can only be said that the author's writing style still has room for refinement. Many content that can be expressed clearly in a few sentences is written by the author in several lines. If it is too lengthy, it will be difficult to have an in-depth reading experience. It's hard to read into it. In fact, many authors describe the setting and inspiration in too detail. The result is that you have written everything you want to express, but at the same time, it is difficult for readers to read it. In fact, many authors feel that what they want to write is irrelevant to readers. Removing redundant parts can provide a better reading experience. Authors can try to streamline their work so that it looks lighter and is easier to read.
There is too much nonsense. After reading more than 60 chapters, there is still a lot of nonsense. The more I read, the less interested I am.
Why is the most suitable profession for the protagonist to be the Swift Wind Swordsman?
It is an infinite world in itself. The author just picked a convenient one. I also think the protagonist's talents are more suitable for the Berserker Olaf. Author, if you don't improve it a little bit, it will be gone. Lifeblood is a late-stage plug-in Swordsmanship is nothing at the moment The same goes for firearms capabilities. The protagonist's own IQ is not enough At present, there is only one talent that is a cheat, but the protagonist's talent is not cool at all. Everything can only be released with fighting spirit, and the stronger the fighting spirit, the stronger the improvement. Isn't this the golden finger cheat? You have written other things very well, why do you want to make the protagonist stand out in this place? It's unreasonable You can take a look at the talents and abilities of the reincarnation paradise next door. It is very well written. I really don't want to say that the author is not skilled enough.
The subject matter of the comments is very attractive
I hope the author can write various routes to become stronger in a wonderful way
vegetable
There's so much nonsense, and the number of words is so low.
A bit average
The protagonist's first world is a team mission, but without knowing anything, the other people are obviously the protagonist's drag. The label of this book is "Straight Man". Based on the content of the book, I think the protagonist is indifferent and focuses on himself. But it was not reflected during the mission.
So-so, okay
It's a bit long-winded, too much nonsense.
Speculate the future development of the protagonist's abilities
The protagonist's vitality ability (Su Xiao's vitality in Vision Reincarnation Paradise) seems to be a combination of the five elements. Now there are wood and gold, which is more supportive. The protagonist's firearm ability seems to be used to excessively earn resources in the early stage. The protagonist's melee combat ability (two-handed sword) feels like it will be a major output. In the later stage, the resources earned from firearms will be used to cultivate this ability. I have never seen any protagonist of this type use a two-handed sword. I am optimistic about you (I have played Genshin Impact too much) The inheritance of Gale Swordsman in the latest chapter feels a bit inconsistent with the protagonist. I feel that the protagonist is more suitable for Yongen's inheritance. I made a bold prediction. I feel that the protagonist's ability system matches well with the new LOL character Samira, including the use of guns and knives.
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Community(0)
Official(21)Scraped 1mo ago
There is too much nonsense, gibberish, a fight must be described carefully from beginning to end, why fight like this, what will happen like this, what does the protagonist think, what does the opponent think, good guy, just a paragraph, just a variety of descriptions, (the opponent is here, should I block or not, how should I block, after blocking, and then the enemy starts to think, blocked, what should I do, jump repeatedly)
Licking the dog is a bit
Still don't watch it. . . I feel that there is no novelty in writing the protagonist. What's the point of practicing swordsmanship and having to unleash the talent of the small universe at a critical moment of life and death? Written like this, I thought he was a wise man, but he looks like a reckless man, and he wants to be reckless from time to time. If he is not the protagonist, I am afraid that even if he is slapped in the face, his body will be wiped out, right?
How to say
You can't say that the author is bad. It can only be said that the author's writing style still has room for refinement. Many content that can be expressed clearly in a few sentences is written by the author in several lines. If it is too lengthy, it will be difficult to have an in-depth reading experience. It's hard to read into it. In fact, many authors describe the setting and inspiration in too detail. The result is that you have written everything you want to express, but at the same time, it is difficult for readers to read it. In fact, many authors feel that what they want to write is irrelevant to readers. Removing redundant parts can provide a better reading experience. Authors can try to streamline their work so that it looks lighter and is easier to read.
There is too much nonsense. After reading more than 60 chapters, there is still a lot of nonsense. The more I read, the less interested I am.
Why is the most suitable profession for the protagonist to be the Swift Wind Swordsman?
It is an infinite world in itself. The author just picked a convenient one. I also think the protagonist's talents are more suitable for the Berserker Olaf. Author, if you don't improve it a little bit, it will be gone. Lifeblood is a late-stage plug-in Swordsmanship is nothing at the moment The same goes for firearms capabilities. The protagonist's own IQ is not enough At present, there is only one talent that is a cheat, but the protagonist's talent is not cool at all. Everything can only be released with fighting spirit, and the stronger the fighting spirit, the stronger the improvement. Isn't this the golden finger cheat? You have written other things very well, why do you want to make the protagonist stand out in this place? It's unreasonable You can take a look at the talents and abilities of the reincarnation paradise next door. It is very well written. I really don't want to say that the author is not skilled enough.
The subject matter of the comments is very attractive
I hope the author can write various routes to become stronger in a wonderful way
vegetable
There's so much nonsense, and the number of words is so low.
A bit average
The protagonist's first world is a team mission, but without knowing anything, the other people are obviously the protagonist's drag. The label of this book is "Straight Man". Based on the content of the book, I think the protagonist is indifferent and focuses on himself. But it was not reflected during the mission.
So-so, okay
It's a bit long-winded, too much nonsense.
Speculate the future development of the protagonist's abilities
The protagonist's vitality ability (Su Xiao's vitality in Vision Reincarnation Paradise) seems to be a combination of the five elements. Now there are wood and gold, which is more supportive. The protagonist's firearm ability seems to be used to excessively earn resources in the early stage. The protagonist's melee combat ability (two-handed sword) feels like it will be a major output. In the later stage, the resources earned from firearms will be used to cultivate this ability. I have never seen any protagonist of this type use a two-handed sword. I am optimistic about you (I have played Genshin Impact too much) The inheritance of Gale Swordsman in the latest chapter feels a bit inconsistent with the protagonist. I feel that the protagonist is more suitable for Yongen's inheritance. I made a bold prediction. I feel that the protagonist's ability system matches well with the new LOL character Samira, including the use of guns and knives.
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