People Are Writing Diaries in Douluo, Something is Wrong with Them
About This Novel
(The new book "People Compile Diaries in Douluo, the Female Characters Are Broken" is released) Dou Yi's world view (currently). Group: 878616457 Su Ming died unexpectedly and was reborn in the world of Douluo. He awakened the Ultimate Wood at the beginning and had a diary writing system. As long as he writes a diary every day, he can get corresponding rewards! [Ding, congratulations to the host for writing the first diary, and getting the reward, Douluo version of the method of using Wood Release] [Ding, because the host triggered the critical hit reward, and obtained the Eye Technique Sharingan] [Ding, congratulations to the host for getting...] Just when Su Ming thought that as long as he persisted, sooner or later he would be able to Susanoo the Great Buddha and reach the top of the Douluo! However, he suddenly discovered that everything was wrong with Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing, and Ning Rongrong! Xiao Wu: I'm not a hundred thousand year old rabbit! Zhu Zhuqing: It's not my fault that I can't reach my toes! Hu Liena: Impossible, absolutely impossible, how could I betray Wuhun Palace!
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Official(461)Scraped 25d ago
Could the author change it and not just call so-and-so's wife? You should write that you can meet so-and-so tomorrow or that she will be turned over to be your wife in the future or something like that. It feels low to write about so-and-so's wife. Of course, it doesn't matter. It's okay to write about it. However, a lot of diary articles call my wife so directly and it feels quite embarrassing. I'll make a suggestion for you to adopt. In the later stage, you should be more efficient in recruiting girls. Some diary articles have already reached 200 chapters. The male protagonist is still in the first blood It is best to create a first blood achievement with rich rewards to stimulate the female protagonists. It is not easy to stop being an eunuch when writing a book.
This author shamelessly gave himself five stars
①If you have any ideas, please share them here. Comments are okay, but don't be too aggressive and be more harmonious. I am a new author and I will change whatever I can. Thank you. ② Can you guys give us some advice on the diary rewards? Crowdfunding here ③ Regarding Tang San, Yu Xiaogang and other points that need to be complained about, if you have any opinions, you can mention them and the author will refer to them. After all, I sometimes may not pay attention to some points. Thank you.
Bibi Dong is actually a little bit to blame for it. This is really a bit too much. If it sounds more ugly, doesn't it mean surrendering to the enemy?
The update is too slow, and why don't you write a diary now? Why don't you talk about Hu Liena's white-eyed wolf, Douluo Dalu? Why don't Love Brain Continent, Baiyanlang Continent, and Ye Lingling integrate martial souls, and why don't Xiancao write about solving the problem of martial souls? The important thing is, Hu Liena's problem, why don't you talk about her white-eyed wolf? Why don't you write a diary anymore? Please explain it. You said reward me, and I did it. You said you wanted to chase votes, and I chased them. Alas.
Author, can you please clarify which female protagonists you want to accept? I have an opinion. I just replied to you, but I still want to say it here. If you accept Qian Renxue, don't accept Bibi Dong. I've seen too many scenes where mother and daughter take it all, and there are also things like summoning some titled Douluo. As for the older women, don't lose weight. You said that Bo Saixi looks like the protagonist is an old lady. If the protagonist was the same age as Bo Zi, I wouldn't say anything. I have a hook, right? Is the protagonist's god position ready? Is it the Dragon God, the Dragon God, or a self-created god? Well, take it less seriously, don't look at a woman who can't walk, and the character of the protagonist is not that kind of character. Author, can you write another Douluo Douluo fanfic where the protagonist is the background? The very awesome kind is even more awesome than Wuhundian, but seeing how busy your Xi is, it's quite embarrassing to see you still like this fan in the future. I'm just an opinion
Author, where are you from?
You have just written a good Chinese novel into a Japanese ninja anime novel. There are so many mythological skills in China that you can write about, and you have to choose some skills from Japanese animation.
Let me talk about it
This book is really good. I have collected everything I should. The most important thing is that in this book, Dugu Bo has become like Hai Bodong, who sponsored Xiao Yan next door. He also received rewards. Instead of getting nothing like the original book, he lost his life instead.
It's not interesting since I want to collect Oscars. My idea is that it's okay but not necessary. Moreover, most of the content of this book is about complaining. It has the most interactions with female characters. Suddenly a man comes in or the protagonist suddenly treats other male characters. It makes me feel weird, so I can only give it three stars.
Maybe the three views follow the five senses. Before Chapter 30, Bibi Dong was completely washed away. Discredit Qianxun News. Treason and surrender to the enemy have always been capital crimes. It can be said that death is the best ending. There is no doubt about this. You go and commit treason now and see what the country will do to you. Will you be the person in charge of the country? I want to eat shit. Of course, you are not qualified to commit treason. Because it's not worthy.
It was written so affectionately from the beginning, it was too fake.
There are a few time travelers who are good people. They managed to travel through a fantasy world. They can become gods and live forever. After the system is established, no matter the strength, power or beauty, there will be no shortage. When you meet a little rabbit and know it for a few days, you have to protect it and say that it can be shattered to pieces. This is nonsense. Writing novels should also be based on realistic human nature. The writing is so brainless. Now readers are not so easy to fool, and they don't like to watch Qiong Yao dramas.
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Official(461)Scraped 25d ago
Could the author change it and not just call so-and-so's wife? You should write that you can meet so-and-so tomorrow or that she will be turned over to be your wife in the future or something like that. It feels low to write about so-and-so's wife. Of course, it doesn't matter. It's okay to write about it. However, a lot of diary articles call my wife so directly and it feels quite embarrassing. I'll make a suggestion for you to adopt. In the later stage, you should be more efficient in recruiting girls. Some diary articles have already reached 200 chapters. The male protagonist is still in the first blood It is best to create a first blood achievement with rich rewards to stimulate the female protagonists. It is not easy to stop being an eunuch when writing a book.
This author shamelessly gave himself five stars
①If you have any ideas, please share them here. Comments are okay, but don't be too aggressive and be more harmonious. I am a new author and I will change whatever I can. Thank you. ② Can you guys give us some advice on the diary rewards? Crowdfunding here ③ Regarding Tang San, Yu Xiaogang and other points that need to be complained about, if you have any opinions, you can mention them and the author will refer to them. After all, I sometimes may not pay attention to some points. Thank you.
Bibi Dong is actually a little bit to blame for it. This is really a bit too much. If it sounds more ugly, doesn't it mean surrendering to the enemy?
The update is too slow, and why don't you write a diary now? Why don't you talk about Hu Liena's white-eyed wolf, Douluo Dalu? Why don't Love Brain Continent, Baiyanlang Continent, and Ye Lingling integrate martial souls, and why don't Xiancao write about solving the problem of martial souls? The important thing is, Hu Liena's problem, why don't you talk about her white-eyed wolf? Why don't you write a diary anymore? Please explain it. You said reward me, and I did it. You said you wanted to chase votes, and I chased them. Alas.
Author, can you please clarify which female protagonists you want to accept? I have an opinion. I just replied to you, but I still want to say it here. If you accept Qian Renxue, don't accept Bibi Dong. I've seen too many scenes where mother and daughter take it all, and there are also things like summoning some titled Douluo. As for the older women, don't lose weight. You said that Bo Saixi looks like the protagonist is an old lady. If the protagonist was the same age as Bo Zi, I wouldn't say anything. I have a hook, right? Is the protagonist's god position ready? Is it the Dragon God, the Dragon God, or a self-created god? Well, take it less seriously, don't look at a woman who can't walk, and the character of the protagonist is not that kind of character. Author, can you write another Douluo Douluo fanfic where the protagonist is the background? The very awesome kind is even more awesome than Wuhundian, but seeing how busy your Xi is, it's quite embarrassing to see you still like this fan in the future. I'm just an opinion
Author, where are you from?
You have just written a good Chinese novel into a Japanese ninja anime novel. There are so many mythological skills in China that you can write about, and you have to choose some skills from Japanese animation.
Let me talk about it
This book is really good. I have collected everything I should. The most important thing is that in this book, Dugu Bo has become like Hai Bodong, who sponsored Xiao Yan next door. He also received rewards. Instead of getting nothing like the original book, he lost his life instead.
It's not interesting since I want to collect Oscars. My idea is that it's okay but not necessary. Moreover, most of the content of this book is about complaining. It has the most interactions with female characters. Suddenly a man comes in or the protagonist suddenly treats other male characters. It makes me feel weird, so I can only give it three stars.
Maybe the three views follow the five senses. Before Chapter 30, Bibi Dong was completely washed away. Discredit Qianxun News. Treason and surrender to the enemy have always been capital crimes. It can be said that death is the best ending. There is no doubt about this. You go and commit treason now and see what the country will do to you. Will you be the person in charge of the country? I want to eat shit. Of course, you are not qualified to commit treason. Because it's not worthy.
It was written so affectionately from the beginning, it was too fake.
There are a few time travelers who are good people. They managed to travel through a fantasy world. They can become gods and live forever. After the system is established, no matter the strength, power or beauty, there will be no shortage. When you meet a little rabbit and know it for a few days, you have to protect it and say that it can be shattered to pieces. This is nonsense. Writing novels should also be based on realistic human nature. The writing is so brainless. Now readers are not so easy to fool, and they don't like to watch Qiong Yao dramas.
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