Lu Mingfei, Why Would You Slay a Dragon If I Didn't Involve You?

It was really attractive in the early stage, but after watching it, I realized that this is a love story, and the plot connection is a bit abrupt.

I have seen the latest chapter. Zero's entry point is wrong and the plot seems very blunt. Considering the property he has inherited, he is not short of money. Besides, Lu Mingfei himself does not have much desire for money. If he really has 100,000 US dollars to buy him off, I don't think he will do it. I'm happy. I wouldn't say he's a bad kid, but he's the kind of person who can avoid trouble on his own. Moreover, he encountered this situation on the first day and asked to live in your house, and you were able to agree without hesitation. To be fair, your plug-in can't make him change so much.

It's been over 160 chapters, and I haven't entered the main plot yet. It's still described as being emotionally delicate. And the group of people in the comment area who are trying to knock Lu Mingfei and Chu Zihang together, aren't they just a bunch of paper, a bunch of rotten girls?

This is a harem novel with a dragon clan. I really don't mean that the author is too good. How should I put it? There are already more than 140 chapters. It turns out that only more than a week has passed in the novel, and then one thing has been broken up for several days. It is very uncomfortable to follow the reading. I have already started to skip chapters, and it turned out that the dragon It's an unslaughtered one. It's all about romance, and it's a copy of Fire. It's like seven or eight chapters. Judging from the rhythm of the plot, it feels a bit like a eunuch. I can only watch it in the first few chapters. After all, the circuit is still very strange. After that, it starts to pour heavily, and it goes further and further away from the main plot of dragon slaying.

I posted a review of this book before and gave it four stars. Now I can't stand it anymore. It's not water anymore. It's just that the author is so immersed in the writing style that he can't get out of it. The more he reads, the more angry he becomes. It is true that Jiangnan's writing style is inherently cumbersome, and a small plot will be sacrificed for a lot of inner descriptions of characters and nonsense, but people have restraint and control. This author is obsessed with imitating Jiangnan's writing style. Just like the formula, each chapter starts with two paragraphs of description of the environment, and then the protagonist appears. He starts to make up associations from anywhere, and talks nonsense for a few pages. Then he asks the supporting character to respond to him with a few sentences, and he borrows the supporting character's response to continue making up nonsense. Just like rumination, sometimes you have to add some psychological activities of the supporting characters. Damn it, after a set of procedures, it will be over in a few thousand words. The main line is like squirming. The author also feels that he is updating more every day. He is really working too hard. In the end, I still didn't live. It's so tiring to push the main plot line, and it's not easy to follow up after accidentally pushing it too hard. Instead of causing trouble for yourself, it would be more labor-saving to write nonsense words and jokes. Enter the text into deepseek, output 1,800 versions, and pick a few changes every day to confuse readers. Wouldn't it be nice? It's just a tiger-like dog. Readers can tolerate Jiangnan Moji because he uses solid materials for his main and branch plots. The ink stains are just his appearance, just like the plate of sour vinegar when eating dumplings. Isn't it the dish of vinegar that some people really think is delicious? When I draw a tiger-like dog, I'm talking about you.

I would feel uncomfortable if the whole system punished other protagonists, but for Lu Mingfei, I suggest that the punishment be increased.

This is no better than Lu Mingfei who came back, especially those who were still sick after returning.

To be honest, when I read the previous part, I really felt that it was written by Jiang Nankai Xiaohao. From the details to the characters, it was all right. After entering the original plot, the perception began to fall off. It is not a question of whether there is a harem or not. Personally, I think it is the collapse of the characters, especially Lu Mingfei. It can be seen that the author is trying to shape the growth of Ming Fei, but the process is too hard and It's sloppy. To put it simply, the transformation of the character's personality is not achieved through key events. It relies solely on the confidence of the system to grow the protagonist, which lacks the necessary persuasion. For example, the growth of Long Simingfei is based on the entire trip to Japan and the death of Eri. This series of events is the key to the growth of the protagonist (although the old Jiangnan thief also failed, Cheng (I have grown lonely), but yes, this logic is correct. This step is currently missing in this article. Daily meat pigeons alone cannot convince readers. Secondly, the character background is lost in the process of growth. Lu Mingfei's character is very three-dimensional. Although readers are angry at him and want to slap him twice, but he is delicate and sensitive, as well as the loneliness and delicacy that he occasionally reveals. Well, it actually impresses readers very much. It can't be summed up by just saying "bad dog". This is the background of this character. No matter how much he grows, you can't write him as Xu Qian. After it was released, the author wrote him more and more oily. To be honest, it is really funny. It seems that he has returned to the comfort zone of the leading male protagonist of online novels. He started to label him in the name of growth, which is very funny. Finally, in terms of original settings, I have some ideas, but I am too hasty. The character Yu Ji is too weird. She is just a tool who is eager to explain the original plot. I feel that the author was too excited when he was imagining it. He felt that this design was really awesome and was eager to show it to readers, so he arranged such a microphone. However, I still feel that it is too hasty. These inside stories can be hidden for a while. Yu Ji's identity can also be exposed. She can appear as a mysterious person in the early stage, interspersed with the main plot to lead to one or two major events in the early stage, and then she blows up all her underwear when she first appears. I really don't understand this operation. As for the rest of the emotional line, I can only say that it can be eaten or knocked, but it is still too hasty and the first love is written as a love transaction. To sum up, I will give you a four-star encouragement.

There are so many chapters, is there any progress in the main plot? Your book is a Dragon Clan fan, not a daily love story on campus. You can use daily life as a supplement but not the whole book. Let me simply ask: What's so cool about this book? Everyone is here to see the bad boy being abused and becoming strong, not to see the scumbag fall in love. The book currently has two small climaxes, the exam and the party. You have written almost 200 chapters, and the exam results have not yet come out. In the early stage, everyone was fresh and had some fun and could tolerate it. Who can stand you being so stupid?

What kind of harem do you have in Dragon Clan? Will the single female protagonist die? The protagonist was written by you as both wanting and wanting🤢, and finally put aside the original 🐢 and turned into the scum you imagined. What is the difference between this and the malicious intention of the higher-ranking narrator in the original work? It's almost been released. It's only been less than a week in reality... Why are you writing so slowly? Really, it's all water. Do you want to write tens of millions of words? Gradually, I started to lose control. There are two female characters that I don't know how to play. In the Dragon Clan, just give me pure love!