
This Jinyiwei is Obviously Super Strong, but He Strokes Too Much
About This Novel
After the dream, Jianghu was no longer just two words in a book, but a big world that vividly appeared in front of Lu Hanjiang's eyes. With a passion for fighting in the sword world, Lu Hanjiang worked hard to pass the examination of a certain department of the imperial court and became an honorable civil servant. Time flies. Ten years have passed. Twenty-four-year-old Lu Hanjiang lives a life of drinking tea and paddling to and from get off work every day. Just when he is about to lose interest in this world, it suddenly becomes lively.
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Official(149)Scraped 6d ago
This book is good at everything. I just open a few small accounts, which makes me very annoyed.
The writing style is rather retro and has a feeling from more than 10 years ago. A unique kind of Hong Kong martial arts novel. So can the plot. Various characters are distinct. It can be regarded as a decisive killing. The only thing I can't stand is that the main characters are all invincible. I also opened several small accounts and pretended to be here and there. You are invincible in the game Jianghu and the world is cool. This kind of plot can be used. Don't open a trumpet, you are disgusting.
I can only say that there is a reason for the low rating.
I've also finished reading the Huangpu chapter, and the writing is still very strong👍. However, in terms of the plot, it is a bit forced to express sorrow for the purpose of giving new words, and the foreshadowing is too blunt. It can be said that after reading a few chapters, I guessed the identity of Qin Yu, and the identity of the third lady was guessed as soon as the second lady appeared. In order to deliberately create a sense of suspense, the writing is not so coherent, and the logic is also problematic. It is forcibly exciting but makes people uninterested. But overall, it is still a good article that kept me reading all night, at least more than 90% of the books. Recommended votes and monthly passes are presented.
Lu Hanjiang is no longer the original Lu Hanjiang. He has two lifetimes of memories. The memories in his mind are like a mess. He can't tell which one is real or both are real.
I always thought that the protagonist in Taibai Suicune's book was evil enough, casually destroying the world, and actually all living beings are like ants. After reading this book, I realized that it is not evil, but just a demon. Others use the world as prey and a resource to become stronger when they destroy the world. The living beings living in it are just too weak to be harmed. However, the protagonist in this book cannot destroy the world, and there is no reason to do evil. It is not harmful to others or self-interest, just for fun! ! It explains the view that human nature is inherently evil. It may still feel fresh in the beginning, but if you read it more, you will instinctively feel nauseated. This kind of extremely evil person is really terrifying.
I read Chapter 72. I haven't read much, so I didn't understand what he was going to write or say. I would reminisce for a while and then realize it. Now this chapter is about this thing, and the next chapter is about something else. I can't understand it.
The protagonist can obviously be a chess player, but he insists on playing as a chess piece when he has nothing to do. He flips the chess board when he is not having fun. He cannot be judged as a good guy or a bad guy at all. He is just a psycho. If you encounter such a person, you should stay away. I really don't appreciate this kind of person because he has no bottom line.
don't like this book
After reading the setting of the protagonist in your book, I thought you wanted to write about Jia Xu. After reading the first few chapters, I thought you were writing about Sima Yi, but later on you didn't have the writing style. Sima Yi was written as Zhong Hui, but you still had to let the protagonist drive the plot for the sake of the plot. You clearly hate the world, but you still have to enter the world. You clearly set yourself up to be invincible, but you still have to care about your identity and royal power. In fact, in the final analysis, I don't understand why a Jin Yiwei would wade into the muddy waters of Jianghu if he doesn't like Jianghu? Is it true that Jin Yiwei only targets Jianghu? Can't you find a reason to investigate corrupt officials? Can't you find a reason to do logistics? Can't you find a reason to investigate the case? After all, you are still the author, and you can't write a story without the protagonist. As long as you are involved in the case and get involved in the Jianghu, the protagonist gets out of the case, and you watch your colleagues and the Jianghu fight, is it better than your writing method? Do you know what kind of person can live a good life? If you want to be free to do your own thing, you must either let others not see you, or let others not see you. Otherwise, as long as you have your own network of relationships, what is not a "ganghu"?
Lu Hanjiang has always had a longing for the world, but he has become tired of the world during the ten years he has been a Jinyiwei. Lu Hanjiang feels that such a life is boring.
Too messy
There is no main plot, it is inexplicable, and the character of the protagonist
There are too few characters in the plot. The author uses the major case of the Qi family to lead the main plot, but the foreshadowing is too stiff and the writing is not tactful enough. As a result, there are too few characters to write about later, so I have to leave the scene in a hurry. I want to package the protagonist into a peerless master who hunts for beauty in the world, and presents the world in a style of intrigue, unrighteousness, and death or life. However, the heat is not enough, making it like chewing wax to read. Moreover, the protagonist's views are even more disagreeable. He is a mastermind behind the scenes, adding fuel to the flames of the rivers and lakes, playing around without knowing what he is doing (it seems that there is no good person in the rivers and lakes in his eyes), and the characters in the article are not vivid and interesting. Especially the protagonist, the writing is too dull, and the dialogue is really awkward. If you like dark protagonists and those who pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, you can try this book. The author's logic is okay, but the character creation is too stiff.
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Official(149)Scraped 6d ago
This book is good at everything. I just open a few small accounts, which makes me very annoyed.
The writing style is rather retro and has a feeling from more than 10 years ago. A unique kind of Hong Kong martial arts novel. So can the plot. Various characters are distinct. It can be regarded as a decisive killing. The only thing I can't stand is that the main characters are all invincible. I also opened several small accounts and pretended to be here and there. You are invincible in the game Jianghu and the world is cool. This kind of plot can be used. Don't open a trumpet, you are disgusting.
I can only say that there is a reason for the low rating.
I've also finished reading the Huangpu chapter, and the writing is still very strong👍. However, in terms of the plot, it is a bit forced to express sorrow for the purpose of giving new words, and the foreshadowing is too blunt. It can be said that after reading a few chapters, I guessed the identity of Qin Yu, and the identity of the third lady was guessed as soon as the second lady appeared. In order to deliberately create a sense of suspense, the writing is not so coherent, and the logic is also problematic. It is forcibly exciting but makes people uninterested. But overall, it is still a good article that kept me reading all night, at least more than 90% of the books. Recommended votes and monthly passes are presented.
Lu Hanjiang is no longer the original Lu Hanjiang. He has two lifetimes of memories. The memories in his mind are like a mess. He can't tell which one is real or both are real.
I always thought that the protagonist in Taibai Suicune's book was evil enough, casually destroying the world, and actually all living beings are like ants. After reading this book, I realized that it is not evil, but just a demon. Others use the world as prey and a resource to become stronger when they destroy the world. The living beings living in it are just too weak to be harmed. However, the protagonist in this book cannot destroy the world, and there is no reason to do evil. It is not harmful to others or self-interest, just for fun! ! It explains the view that human nature is inherently evil. It may still feel fresh in the beginning, but if you read it more, you will instinctively feel nauseated. This kind of extremely evil person is really terrifying.
I read Chapter 72. I haven't read much, so I didn't understand what he was going to write or say. I would reminisce for a while and then realize it. Now this chapter is about this thing, and the next chapter is about something else. I can't understand it.
The protagonist can obviously be a chess player, but he insists on playing as a chess piece when he has nothing to do. He flips the chess board when he is not having fun. He cannot be judged as a good guy or a bad guy at all. He is just a psycho. If you encounter such a person, you should stay away. I really don't appreciate this kind of person because he has no bottom line.
don't like this book
After reading the setting of the protagonist in your book, I thought you wanted to write about Jia Xu. After reading the first few chapters, I thought you were writing about Sima Yi, but later on you didn't have the writing style. Sima Yi was written as Zhong Hui, but you still had to let the protagonist drive the plot for the sake of the plot. You clearly hate the world, but you still have to enter the world. You clearly set yourself up to be invincible, but you still have to care about your identity and royal power. In fact, in the final analysis, I don't understand why a Jin Yiwei would wade into the muddy waters of Jianghu if he doesn't like Jianghu? Is it true that Jin Yiwei only targets Jianghu? Can't you find a reason to investigate corrupt officials? Can't you find a reason to do logistics? Can't you find a reason to investigate the case? After all, you are still the author, and you can't write a story without the protagonist. As long as you are involved in the case and get involved in the Jianghu, the protagonist gets out of the case, and you watch your colleagues and the Jianghu fight, is it better than your writing method? Do you know what kind of person can live a good life? If you want to be free to do your own thing, you must either let others not see you, or let others not see you. Otherwise, as long as you have your own network of relationships, what is not a "ganghu"?
Lu Hanjiang has always had a longing for the world, but he has become tired of the world during the ten years he has been a Jinyiwei. Lu Hanjiang feels that such a life is boring.
Too messy
There is no main plot, it is inexplicable, and the character of the protagonist
There are too few characters in the plot. The author uses the major case of the Qi family to lead the main plot, but the foreshadowing is too stiff and the writing is not tactful enough. As a result, there are too few characters to write about later, so I have to leave the scene in a hurry. I want to package the protagonist into a peerless master who hunts for beauty in the world, and presents the world in a style of intrigue, unrighteousness, and death or life. However, the heat is not enough, making it like chewing wax to read. Moreover, the protagonist's views are even more disagreeable. He is a mastermind behind the scenes, adding fuel to the flames of the rivers and lakes, playing around without knowing what he is doing (it seems that there is no good person in the rivers and lakes in his eyes), and the characters in the article are not vivid and interesting. Especially the protagonist, the writing is too dull, and the dialogue is really awkward. If you like dark protagonists and those who pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, you can try this book. The author's logic is okay, but the character creation is too stiff.
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Looking at the writing style, I think it is probably a new vest created by a certain literary youth author I have read. He is attracted by the literary youth and wants to change it. If the literary youth can be cured, I believe it will be very good. Let me take a closer look to see if it is the literary youth.













