Use Xp System to Build the Devil City

I thought this xp was xing. Pi

The protagonist is a virgin, and the devil is just a fool, and the protagonist keeps thinking about having a harem, there is nothing interesting at all, I am speechless😑

Whenever the protagonist is that, that's who ((●-з)(ε-●)) That game adults love to play

This book would be good if it were a daily book, but after more than 50 chapters, it has no combat power at all. This is a dangerous different world and many people want to kill the Demon King. As I said above, if this was a daily book, I would probably give it four stars or more, but sorry, I can only give it one star here.

Poison point one: It's a bug, right? Kaa already had sketches and paintings, He asked the brave men to identify him again He must show the picture to the brave man. Then don't those who have traveled through time know that this is a motorcycle? The author's logic is illogical Should we let them identify it? But no pictures or dictation? ? Isn't this just asking a person which of the two women is the prettiest? The results are not shown in pictures, only text descriptions. Who knows One of the poisonous points I hope the author can make some modifications after reading it. (Don't say anything about keeping it secret and not being able to look at the pictures. Even if you show them the sketch of the protagonist's motorcycle, they will know that it was summoned by the hero. In this way, Kaa will know the truth) Poison point two: Also, it appears many times in the text The plot where the devil (the heroine) is called Li Muran He screamed almost every time he said a word It's very awkward. Combined with reality Replace Li Muran with someone else's name and read it. It's very awkward ["Li Muran is the strongest brave man, and he promised to help me. ["Li Muran, you are my first and most important partner," ["Li Muran, you have been thinking for too long. "Li Muran, you are too much," ["I understand the truth. But Li Muran can't change horses and food, what should we do?"] ["Really, it really happened. Li Muran, you are so strong. You are really the strongest warrior."] ["Li Muran, you are like a demon from hell. How scary."] ["Li Muran, I think there is a bright future waiting for us ahead."] ["I'm so thirsty. I want to drink water. Li Muran, give me some more water."] ["Li Muran, carry me on your back. I can't walk anymore. I saw Tarragon waving at me from across the river."] ["Li Muran, can you use your power to help us overcome the crisis? [Li Muran is still my most important first family member. I don't want to lose Li Muran. "] ["Li Muran, it's so refreshing. I seem to have turned into the wind." Not saying it's not possible, but it's too much!! Li Muran QAQ filled my mind Wait, it's only chapter 14! Poison point three: After the protagonist got the XP system, he didn't use it for a long time. I haven't even opened it, emmm... Even if a normal person knows that he has a golden finger, even if he is relatively rubbish, wouldn't it be normal for him to open it and take a look at it as soon as possible? Even if it doesn't. Also, when the protagonist is captured (at this time the protagonist does not know that the devil is an illusion), this is a matter of life and death. Why don't you open the golden finger and see if it can be saved? What if the dead horse is treated as a living horse, and the protagonist just waits for death... Later, the protagonist finally wanted to open the golden finger and take a look, but he didn't open it for the first time due to an accident. [How about playing a game in front of Bella, maybe it can ease the tense atmosphere... Of course, complaints are complaints, and there is no choice now. Li Muran can only treat a dead horse as a living horse doctor... Just as he was about to summon the system, suddenly a group of flames moved quickly towards Li Muran. Li Muran didn't dare to think too much and quickly pulled Bella to move. Result yyyyyyyyyyyyyyOn the second daywwwwwwwwwwww, the tired Bella and Li Muran were discovered by the light cavalry. Well, because of an accident, I haven't done anything for a day. I opened the gold finger and saw that it didn't last more than ten seconds? It wasn't until the heroine was about to die the next day that the protagonist turned on the golden finger with the thought of being a living doctor on a dead horse. Before opening the golden finger, there were some things that came [The previous events came one after another like a storm, leaving Li Muran exhausted to cope with it, without even a chance to breathe. Even the time to relieve oneself is squeezed out, so there is no time to study the system that is not favored. No, it's not just a matter of time. What's more important is that Li Muran is escaping. Time is like a ditch, as long as you squeeze it, it will fill up. The key is still at work in the heart. Just like Li Muran always avoids telling Bella the truth, Li Muran is also avoiding his own XP system. The reason is like a girl hiding acne on her face. This kind of perfunctory forced explanation. All in all, it's a bit embarrassing. (Really enough ink and water) [Complaints] Generally speaking, it has some minor flaws. Those who don't read books very seriously, and those who read online, would prefer a novice who can read it in a relaxed way. Also, the different world described in this one is a more dangerous one, but it feels more everyday. The male protagonist Wei Wei is a bit pretentious. The female protagonist is too silly and sweet, but many male compatriots should like this type of cute girl who is mindless, considers the protagonist wholeheartedly, has a soft personality, and has a big penis. I feel like I'm tweeting just because I'm complaining. QAQ

If you are attracted by the title, come in and say a few sentences (funny

Looking at the title, I thought it was the XP system🌝

The devil wants to kill you. You use food as a bribe and I go. Are you so stupid? Embarrassing people to death will not pay for their lives

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It should be adapted from The Demon King's Butler. Well, it's a very old comic. It's very good. But it wasn't updated and I can't find any related novels. I saw it for the first time today.