Fantasy Mage in the World of Cthulhu

Come on, please update, the theme is well chosen, I think it will be very interesting.

The Book of All Laws should be considered an artifact, but Cthulhu also has artifacts, so what does the author think of the Book of All Laws?

The plot design is very good, but are the people in it brainless? Ordinary junior high school students are smarter than the police chiefs there.

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The God who blindly eats fish wakes up with rich travel shoes

The author likes to use a group-running method to describe the story, so there is a lot of white space, and the description of the environment and characters is also very detailed. Therefore, the readability is slightly reduced, but it will also provide a very fresh reading experience. But it seems that the pace is a bit slow. The protagonist has a standard investigator character, which is difficult to evaluate in terms of quality. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I always feel that the protagonist and the whole world have some inherent barriers as a time traveler, and he is not fully integrated into the identity of Jonathan. However, it is not a shortcoming. The main problem now is that the stories are not connected very well. It can be seen that there is an attempt to bury foreshadowing and hidden threads, but the effect is not very good and it feels a bit delayed. The connection between the previous and later plots is a bit stiff and the blank space and the imagination space are not well controlled, which makes it feel stiff. At present, it is better for the protagonist to have an old enemy who pops up from time to time to promote the progress of the plot. The foreshadowing of Lester has been missing for many chapters. Although it is indeed a COC character who has an unknown and mysterious character who does not know where he has gone. However, the villain in the novel is pulled out from time to time to walk around. It still feels a bit deja vu when reading except for the fact that the world around the protagonist has stagnated. The foreshadowing of the character Dennis the Swamp is a bit far away, and the experience is basically based on guesswork. In addition, the plot has progressed to the point where the protagonist is about to break away from the first driving force for death. He caught the Star Color and used it as a battery. The magic power is not enough to drain the life within a time limit. The addition of a new driving force for the plot is needed. Personally, adding a character similar to Dr. Moriarty is quite retro. So far, there are no big problems. The writing is quite good. It would be better if the pace is faster.