Pirate Cyborg
by Lucky Life
About This Novel
[Comprehensive comic elements] A machete in one hand, an orange in the other, and a gun on his waist. With a lottery system that allows you to upgrade and extract various abilities after being beaten. Villian Crowe stood on top of the world and announced loudly: My title is "Steel Bone"! Light a cigarette. GIF "This is the story of a man who cannot be beaten and begins his career as the Pirate King" 1. "One Piece" - 2. "Demon Slayer" - 3. "Naruto" - 4. "Spirit Cage" - 5. "Cyberpunk Edgewalker" The plot alternates between worlds.
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There are too many messy systems
Originally, Inuyasha's half-demon was pretty good, but he had extra cells at the back, like Fire Dragon, Holy Shield Technique, Dancing Sky Technique, and the three heads and six arms were really disgusting. There were too many messy things in the system, so I just wrote whatever I thought of. One Piece originally had its own system, and it was okay to cheat. The most disgusting thing is that it's so disgusting to open it from east to west, and just draw other systems without practicing.
Everything else is okay. If it weren't for the golden lion wave, it would be better.
According to what you said, the Golden Lion at this period is almost at the level of a general. The protagonist is probably at the level of a major general at this period. It is amazing to be able to break through the Golden Lion's defense in 8 seconds, but it is outrageous if you can defeat the Golden Lion. Who can fight for days and nights at this level?
It's time to recognize the reality after writing for so long. The results of this book are so poor. Why not go back and write your yordle. If you had kept updating yordle, that book would at least be better than it is now.
My writing style is not up to par and I can't express that kind of artistic conception. It's just my personal opinion. I'm more picky about books.
Practice slowly. Writing can't be mastered in a day or two.
Not writing about yordles?
It's a double book again, but I'm still waiting for that one
Has the author changed his name?
Coming from the 48 pieces of Teigu, I suddenly realized that the author is not a lucky cat. Is this a new vest?
Overuse of double quotes is really annoying.
The biggest poisonous point, what everyone complains about the most is the Golden Lion chapter. The protagonist was holding up the sky at that time. Major General, you can even arrange for the protagonist to fall into the sea and escape. You can't defeat the Rain Style, but can you deal with the Golden Lion? Others have suffered for a while in Impel Down City, are injured, and their strength is declining, but they have the strength of the emperor's deputy. As for the protagonist, other things are okay.
Too verbose, like an old woman
Not from DC. Retreat, "Oh, I'm going to... Datang"
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Community(0)
Official(14)
There are too many messy systems
Originally, Inuyasha's half-demon was pretty good, but he had extra cells at the back, like Fire Dragon, Holy Shield Technique, Dancing Sky Technique, and the three heads and six arms were really disgusting. There were too many messy things in the system, so I just wrote whatever I thought of. One Piece originally had its own system, and it was okay to cheat. The most disgusting thing is that it's so disgusting to open it from east to west, and just draw other systems without practicing.
Everything else is okay. If it weren't for the golden lion wave, it would be better.
According to what you said, the Golden Lion at this period is almost at the level of a general. The protagonist is probably at the level of a major general at this period. It is amazing to be able to break through the Golden Lion's defense in 8 seconds, but it is outrageous if you can defeat the Golden Lion. Who can fight for days and nights at this level?
It's time to recognize the reality after writing for so long. The results of this book are so poor. Why not go back and write your yordle. If you had kept updating yordle, that book would at least be better than it is now.
My writing style is not up to par and I can't express that kind of artistic conception. It's just my personal opinion. I'm more picky about books.
Practice slowly. Writing can't be mastered in a day or two.
Not writing about yordles?
It's a double book again, but I'm still waiting for that one
Has the author changed his name?
Coming from the 48 pieces of Teigu, I suddenly realized that the author is not a lucky cat. Is this a new vest?
Overuse of double quotes is really annoying.
The biggest poisonous point, what everyone complains about the most is the Golden Lion chapter. The protagonist was holding up the sky at that time. Major General, you can even arrange for the protagonist to fall into the sea and escape. You can't defeat the Rain Style, but can you deal with the Golden Lion? Others have suffered for a while in Impel Down City, are injured, and their strength is declining, but they have the strength of the emperor's deputy. As for the protagonist, other things are okay.
Too verbose, like an old woman
Not from DC. Retreat, "Oh, I'm going to... Datang"
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