Human Evolution in Prehistoric Online Games

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After reading more than 50 chapters, I feel that the pace can be slowed down a little in the primitive society at the beginning, gradually transitioning to the tribal hegemony stage, and finally building a city to expand one's power instead of entering an imaginary dynasty like now. In fact, it is more appropriate to put it in the stage when it has just evolved into a civilized society, such as the Three Emperors. In the period of the Five Emperors, it is not necessary to have these people, as long as the social form is similar (PS: Mainly online games with themes of a certain dynasty or wilderness teleportation dungeons are almost written to death. It would be much better to just start with the rise of tribes and develop civilization step by step. You can refer to Lords of Civilization of All Realms) Now it seems that there is no connection between before and after the city was built (previously, it was tribal civilization that suddenly accelerated into a civilized society), and I personally feel a bit poisonous when I got the Jin's Trading Company from the city founding order. 1. The city founding order can completely set a task. I really don't want to say anything in that question and answer. 2. There is nothing to say about teleporting directly when building a city, but the city should not be built directly. The protagonist should organize his own manpower to develop it step by step. As for the bandits, they can just come back after a few days. 3. It's really unreasonable to ask Jin's Trading Company to borrow money. 200,000 Gold means that there are about 1,000 people in the whole city including the nearby villages. Only a fool would borrow money. When it comes to investment, the most they can do is provide some help in terms of materials. This can be regarded as respecting the protagonist. 4. Finally, there is the issue of the ratio of soldiers to civilians. The article also says that including the 6 villages outside the city, there are only about 1,000 people. So a village with 100 people is not too much. If you calculate that there are only 400 people in the city, 62 people are soldiers. The ratio is seriously imbalanced. There are various facilities and food problems outside the city, except for the elderly and children. This is extremely unreasonable. 5. There is also the military pay. Although I didn't mention how many soldiers there were, I felt something was wrong when I saw 300 gold coins. I looked at 62 soldiers later. Are the salary levels of soldiers so high?

If you find it from the starting point, collect it first. . .

The writing pace of evolution was too fast at the beginning, especially after the first evolution of Homo sapiens to Homo sapiens and then to the city building, it was really fast. More chapters should be spent to lay the groundwork. As for not reading it after the city building, there is really nothing to write in the lord article. I would say that this book went astray at the beginning. In fact, it starts with tribes and spends hundreds of chapters to pave the way for the evolution to Homo sapiens. Then it builds cities step by step through tribal mergers and educates primitive people. Then the wars between players are supplemented by dungeons of famous historical battles to recruit historical celebrities. This would be much better.

I hope to write more about primitive times

It was okay in the early stage, but it would be too fast to directly evolve into the 21st century. Moreover, such a novel is obviously not suitable for modern times and can only adapt to cold weapons. At the modern level, do you still need a city and low-level soldiers?

I saw Chapter 65 and I can't understand what happened with his father?