Kamen Rider from Time Travel 5

The pace is a little fast, but overall it's okay. There are a little bit of punctuation and it's a little hard to understand, but the overall content is still very good. I hope you can add quotation marks, and then come on, the author.

I go and you delete my comment, are you serious?

Very good, it's rare to find a book that I like, Kamen Rider and Love Apartment, come on, busty brother

I would like to give the author a suggestion. When writing, express yourself more clearly. This will also be readable. Come on⊙▽⊙Oli😤

Now write Kamen Rider fanfics, Emperor Qi, King of Time, 01, just write it on Amazon. Oh my God, you want popularity but not popularity, and you want appearance but not appearance. You are still worth reading. You are the only one who is a fan of Love Five. Since the previous one was issued in the form of a card, you just write all of them directly as Emperor Qi.

Your writing is a bit rough. Please divide it into more paragraphs and add more punctuation. This is not an elementary school composition. I hope you will write well in the future.

I like both Aiwu and Kamen Rider, and I'm very interested in your book, Don't Be an Eunuch.

I can't understand anything after a string of English words.

Well, let's talk about some commonplace issues. The main thing is the narration of the story. When I look at it now, I feel like I'm reading an outline. For example, even if you're not good at describing the female rice dumpling worm, you can at least write down the process of beating the female worm for me. For example, in the end, he used Knight Kick to eliminate the female insect. You can just do this and skip the three-month process.

My eyes really hurt. I think I know why some people say that their eyes hurt after segmentation... It looks okay, but my eyes hurt~