Fairy, Wait a Minute, I Just Want to Slay Demons

The author's plot rhythm control is really poor... To put it roughly, the author arranged a "competition competition" for the protagonist that everyone loves to see. Starting from the registration in chapter 60, I haven't finished the competition until the 125th chapter I have read... This martial arts competition is meaningless. It is purely for the protagonist to show off and crush everyone. But in the main line of this "tournament", the author arranged a bunch of other "main line" plugs. Half of the tourney went to the secret realm for more than ten chapters because of other things. After coming out of the secret realm, there was another game and then busy with other plots... A "tournament" requires other plots to be checked in after one battle. A tourney drags on for 6 More than 0 chapters have not yet been written, and other things that have been arranged have been partially written and not yet finished... For example, it is equivalent to a ten-minute video with eight minutes of commercials interspersed. Now that I have watched the video, it has only been played for eight minutes... I understand that the author wants to set up the plot and the subsequent plot route, but you should also control the quantity and the length of the plot. I was confused after reading these more than sixty chapters. The protagonist himself was involved in various incidents without any purpose. If I hadn't subscribed to them all, I would have really run away. 😥

It's said to be a light-hearted article, but I had a doubt when I just read it. Refining corpses can be used openly as coolies, and they can also fight. It's not illegal, and it can be used as an industrial chain. So among the corpses that came, wouldn't someone deliberately kill people and refine them?

Thank you for the seven-day free membership To be fair, it deserves a high score, but I'm afraid of comparison in everything. The story of a Taoist priest from an unpopular gym who helped the local Demon Suppressor solve a case and gained the favor of the princess, leading to his rapid rise to prominence. You see, does it feel wrong for me to say this? Even though the plot is all right, it's completely different. Okay, the princess is the one who cheats, or the one who steals from the house. The first person to establish a relationship with the protagonist is the female swordsman sister. In terms of plot, I actually want to give it 0 points. If you are not selling meat, if there is no female character, you really don't push the main plot at all. The golden finger means that as long as you slay demons, you can obtain elixirs, skills, etc. In short, it is to strengthen yourself. I can give you full marks for the emotional scenes. Don't ask, just ask and you'll be on your behalf. The overall evaluation is an evenly divided fantasy (or fairy tale) work that can satisfy your hunger.

The work is pretty good, and it's still relaxing.

Wrote 20+ chapters for a broken game? I listened to 10 chapters on the audiobook and wondered why it wasn't finished yet. I looked at the table of contents and there were still 10 chapters left before I made it to the top five.

It's okay, but the plot is a bit dragging, and the more I watch it, the more boring it becomes, and my desire to read is suddenly reduced.

I have little experience in writing articles. If there are any mistakes in the article, please point it out. The author will correct it immediately and think deeply about it, and try not to make similar problems in the future. Thank you all! Kowtow Orz!

The writing is good, and the plot is not too brainless so far. It looks like it's going to be a harem, right?

Write more plots where the protagonist has fun with women.

Good reading fluency and good writing style