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I kept insisting on seeing the people in the alleys, but I couldn't stand it anymore. Has the author become ill by writing too much about the world he traveled through? All kinds of double standards and all kinds of shamelessness. While complaining about the characters in the original drama, this is bad and that is wrong, and then he passes through it and directly abandons his wife and children. All kinds of harems are no longer scum, but perverts.

There are constant little nuggets and a bit of inconsistency. It's like a glass of water that has been left for two days. Although it is tasteless, drinking it will make you feel refreshed.

Let's briefly talk about the advantages. One star is given to innovative ideas. At least the intervention ideas in each world are not plagiarized. Except for the transgender dressing and other things, it can almost repeatedly flog the readers' three views. One star for the writer's bravery. At least he challenges the God of Harmony every time in the world. He does almost nothing without being reviewed and never changes the world. The remaining one star is purely polite, and the reader system does not allow 0 votes. Let's talk about the shortcomings. I seriously suspect that this book was dictated by AI, and AI may have been used for fill-in processing in the later period. The narrative is repeated back and forth, and the writing is full of words such as: absolutely, even more, however, but, but, just, even more, although, so, since, actually, in short, naturally, then... A straight narrative is always full of water, and "just" can be followed by any word without any reason. There is a "yes" noun, preposition, verb, adjective, such as: naturally it is, in short it is, actually it is, so it is, every chapter is filled with "yes", and the dialogue is even more embarrassing. Before denying, it must be "hum" and "hum" when angry, "hehe" when being deep, "hehe" when being calm, and the two people must add taboos at the beginning of the dialogue. Just two people, they must be talking to each other! I still need to call the other party and use my brain. Is it necessary? Don't be so embarrassed, okay? There is no beauty in the writing and no interest in reading. Being able to understand the main points in the long and repetitive narrative process depends entirely on the reader's IQ. The writing is brain-burning, so deducting one star is not too much. Besides, the embarrassing character design of the protagonist may be because the author has gone out of outline or has no outline at all, causing the character design to change almost all the time. Maybe this chapter is still about the protagonist's revenge, and the next chapter is just a bunch of "but, however, in short, and then" and then he is forgiven inexplicably after the water is passed? ! That's right, forgiven? ! It's a typical mental illness. You either insist on making fun of life, or you reach the prehistoric age, or you are so scumbag that you have to endure calamity. In short, you have to establish a personality. The protagonist now has no personality to talk about. In addition to repeating the Hong Kong routine of starting a business, most of the time you are messing around with the plot, and in order to mix up the protagonist's personality. It can be said that after reading a thousand chapters, I have no impression of the protagonist. For the protagonist's various lunatic ethics and the author's flat-footed attitude towards the plot and character, deducting one star is not too much. In conclusion, if you are most interested in the beauty of the article, you can leave. If you are pursuing the charm of the protagonist, you can leave. But readers who like the multi-dimensional world can insist on reading. After all, there are not many multi-dimensional writers who can persist for thousands of chapters. In this multi-dimensional world that keeps traveling, there are not many books that can withstand censorship, blocking, and persevere. Although the writing style is poisonous and the plot is seriously divergent (I seriously suspect that it is caused by the creation without an outline), please watch and cherish it!

Period dramas and campus youth dramas The most beautiful youth, educated youth, children of the Qiao family, beautiful days Zhenhua Trilogy, Went to School Together, Youth Pi A small parting, a small parting, a small joy I am Yu Huanshui, police honorary

The second world is disgusting. An old man travels through time, looking wretched and older at the same time. Does the author like old people? ? ? Laughing to death. Who wants this kind of time travel? Funny.

I could still read it at first, but I really couldn't stand it when I saw that there was an illegitimate child. The author thought about what era it was in. Having a child out of wedlock was not a trivial matter. The protagonist would be shot if he was found to have a wife. This kind of thing could be done without anyone noticing, and Sun Xiaoning could be sent to another place to have a child. However, the protagonist made this matter known to everyone. The writing really lacked common sense. And this kind of thing is not something that the protagonist and Sun Xiaoning can just say no to. The police can directly take the protagonist and Sun Xiaoning away.

What kind of rubbish are you writing? You are a time traveler. What are you doing living in such a miserable state? What are you afraid of? I feel sick to my stomach.

It's well written, I hope it can be speeded up

Please make more updates from the author, please please.

He does this and that no matter what happens. As an old monster, even if you don't have a superpower mentality, you won't be like this👀