Am I the Only Ghost in the Game World?

The subject matter of this book is novel and there are not many routines. The writing is good and the storyline flows smoothly. The characters are outstanding and the descriptions are delicate. Two words to summarize: Excellent!

I hope the author will continue to write well and we will always support you.

No one? If no one is there, I started to get angry.

I understand you, I wish you all find a girlfriend

This book looks very good, and the characters in the novel are quite reasonable. I can't say anything to praise. I just see that the main plot of the novel may be hidden too deep now, and I haven't seen the future goals (although the three goals, ten years of Hedong and so on are quite new, but there will be a goal in each part). So far, the protagonist has no goals (Xianyu can understand), but the heroine (cat or sister?) The cat has a purpose, but it feels a bit Uncomfortable (the cat appeared suddenly, but the male protagonist was as calm as if he knew someone was coming, and there was no reaction at all "This refers to when the cat appeared") The sister's disease felt like it could dig a big hole (but don't dig a big hole, it can't be filled) Some foreshadowing is a bit inexplicable (for example, the cat has a conversation with a hidden figure. When the cat appears, you can say a few lines or two, but the dialogue feels too abrupt), and there is differentiation. Some are obvious (the descriptions of LOL and chicken fighting are too different. At first, I thought the description of LOL was specifically about LOL. In addition, the author of Gundam should like it, so I can understand that the male protagonist likes Gundam suddenly, "ah, it is still a bit abrupt"). In addition, there must be a main line or the focus of writing, Zhongzhou, the Internet, reality, and cats. These are somewhat juxtaposed, and it is necessary to slightly highlight which one is the main line (I feel that suddenly there is I have been struggling to help me, a stranger and a girl with animal ears. Although I will be very excited, I will at least be curious about why he or she would help me.) Well, these are all, if they are included in the author's outline, there is no need to change them. If not, you can think of suitable places to add later, but if you want to change the outline, you must be cautious (by the way, I feel that the author's outline may be a little detailed but the main line is very rough) PS: This is my first time writing a 20-minute long review😘

The author is great!

Thank you to the author, this book is quite interesting, but I want to ask what is going on with Lin Xiaoxiao in it. Her character is a bit disgusting. The protagonist just tortured her, and then she sent someone to find the protagonist to make him look good. This is a bit disgusting to me. Ask for answers

From the current point of view, everything is good, but the reality will return occasionally, and it will definitely return to reality later. The characters in reality, if they have not appeared for so long, may cause forgetfulness. It is okay for now, and there is no need to be too anxious. It doesn't take too long. The character creation is very good. In addition, those characters in reality have too few scenes, and It feels a bit abrupt in the novel, and the role of the characters that appear in advancing the plot is not that obvious. In addition, the author feels that when you describe the world, you pay too much attention to the description of the world. In terms of character expression, the female protagonist and the male protagonist feel that there are not as many scenes as the world. In addition, you must make a decision between the female protagonist's sister and the male protagonist, right? The tsundere cat and the cute dog feel that they will abuse the host in the future. If they really want to abuse, don't abuse them too much. It's better to be peaceful. In addition, Xiaojian is the anchor, so the interaction with the live broadcast room needs to be written. Now the main plot line has been roughly revealed, which is the cat and the dog (specifically). As for the hidden plot, I think there are two, one is the girl from the Ye family (she didn't appear in a few chapters, I forgot the name), and the other is the cat and the people in the secret. In addition, your parents of the male protagonist never come home, how do I feel about the male protagonist's father? What's wrong with my mother? Is there anything I can do about my sister's life experience... (Suddenly I feel like you have too many branches.) Write too many branches, and it will be very exciting when you finish it. Don't mess with it. I've seen someone who wrote Greek mythology. Time traveled through dozens of timelines, and the update was discontinued in the end. I guess the author confused himself. The connotation of the male protagonist should be as good as possible. Looking at it now, although he has performed well, he is still too silly (silly dog is worthy of his name). In addition, if League of Legends and chicken games are not wasted (it suddenly occurred to me that the protagonist and his sister are a perfect match. The brother who cheats the sister and the brother controls the sister, it is quite Okay) Okay, that's it. Every time I see you in such misery, I worry about your eunuch. I really don't brag, it's very well written. (Also, there may be some details that I haven't noticed. After all, I have read the novel for several years. I just glance at it and the plot and scene appear in my mind. That's it.) I will post a long comment if I have new thoughts (the night before I came back, I remembered thinking about many important things about the cat and the protagonist, and guessing about them, but I have forgotten what I thought about before going to bed the day before). I wish you a happy koi and blessings from Senior Bai.

The author is great, how many times a day do you update?

The author wrote it very well.