Alliance Commentary System

Alliance Commentary System

by Dajiang Ruoyu

Length:
440Kwords180chapters
Latest:
Ch. 180Adults, Times Have Changed (Finale)
Activity:
Updated 5y agoScraped 1mo ago
15Comments
4.0KFavorites
326Fans
7.3QD Score

About This Novel

The e-sports industry in this world lacks some special flavor. The League of Legends commentary here has no passion, no touching, no classics recording the history of League of Legends, and no heartfelt words. At this time, Chen Xian came, and he took his commentary system to the altar of the league's commentary world.

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Mo Yu Xiaoxiao71mo ago

I don't feel very good personally

Write a narration. It's not well written, and there's not much sense of empathy. Let's write about the emotional line with the female protagonist. The male protagonist insists on pushing it to someone else. The writing is awkward. He obviously has feelings and has to pretend. I don't understand why the emotional line is mixed with a bloody plot.

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Holding Chang'e and Roasting Jade Rabbit_cb71mo ago

I helped you test the poison

To be honest, it's okay to write a narration, but it really doesn't make you feel involved, and those emotional lines you wrote are bullshit!!!

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Pippi Xi Lily Bing is Mine.73mo ago

I started to feel that the subject matter was quite fresh.

I saw the latest chapter, I thought it was quite interesting, but it was a bit boring and kept talking 🤗

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Money72mo ago

Brother, can you make some changes?

Is this taking us back to the dark ages? It's not easy for a newcomer to give you five stars.

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Book Friends 2024071165739972mo ago

Come on, author, maybe you will become a god

Come on, author, maybe you will become a god. Don't stop updating.

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☁️💦73mo ago

Come on, come on, come on, update update update

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A. Chen~73mo ago

Don't add Tong Xi when you explain. Chen Xian's one is better. It feels so annoying.

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☁️💦73mo ago

Come on

The subject matter is very good. Let's see if I can finish it. Come on, don't waste the subject matter.

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I've Always Been There71mo ago

It's an emotionless line-reading machine. It's not easy to read a new book. If I give it five stars, I won't read it.

It mentioned shock several times, but I don't know how the lines spoken by the protagonist were shocking. Maybe it's because I didn't feel involved, and it was just like a machine that reads lines. I felt so embarrassed when I heard it.

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Xi Chen71mo ago

It's not easy for a newcomer to give you a five-star rating. The package is not considered good. Watching this is better than watching the live broadcast and the pictures. Watching this is like a repeater with no emotions. It's boring.

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