Genshin Impact: Double Door Opening Invites Keli
About This Novel
Traveling through parallel worlds, obtaining the strongest up master system, binding double portals, Su Han discovered that he could become stronger by inviting people from the Teyvat world to shoot videos. Keli: Big brother is a good person, and explosive bombs are art! Keqing: Master Ke's beef offal is now on sale~~~Lei Movie: Don't let me cook, I can do everything, but I can't cook... Uh, let the general do the filming of videos and so on! Kamisato Ayaka: Do you really... Really want to dance like that? But for the sake of the Great Gosho-sama, I am willing to... Nasita: Can you defeat the Order Institute just by being cute? Then I understand... Mona: Again... There is no more Maura, Su Han... How do you do the cow-horse rocking dance you mentioned last time?
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Official(12)Scraped 1d ago
Come on, author, please read this passage with me.
It seems to be quite satisfactory, but Noelle in the back is a little different from the original work. I don't remember if my memory is correct. In Yuanshen, was Noelle the one who defeated Qiu Qiuyan Helm King alone, or was it Xiao Bao? In other words, as mentioned above, she has the strength and combat experience. In this book, Noelle has become a complete maid. She can use the power of the wind pressure sword to disappear with a single wave of her one-handed sword.
Good idea, average settings
The ideas are very good and more interesting than the average fanfiction, but the character descriptions are average. Take Keqing as an example, will she be a jerk? If so, according to the original work, if she would go deep into folk life, she should not think there is anything wrong with being a bastard. If it is based on the author's personal settings, there should be explanations, and some settings are also subject to discussion, such as the cement formula. You must know that there are monsters in Teyvat. It does not mean that everything will be fine if there is a road. In general, the character settings are either different from the original work but not clearly described, or the settings are too taken for granted.
There are a lot of mistakes and typos in the first chapter
I copied it from Lu Zi, and I copied it so slowly.
Could the author try to get the girl to come over?
When will we continue to move more here? There are obviously more over there.
How many words does the author intend to write? Hope it doesn't end badly.
Six six six six six six six six six six six six six six six
I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist?
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Official(12)Scraped 1d ago
Come on, author, please read this passage with me.
It seems to be quite satisfactory, but Noelle in the back is a little different from the original work. I don't remember if my memory is correct. In Yuanshen, was Noelle the one who defeated Qiu Qiuyan Helm King alone, or was it Xiao Bao? In other words, as mentioned above, she has the strength and combat experience. In this book, Noelle has become a complete maid. She can use the power of the wind pressure sword to disappear with a single wave of her one-handed sword.
Good idea, average settings
The ideas are very good and more interesting than the average fanfiction, but the character descriptions are average. Take Keqing as an example, will she be a jerk? If so, according to the original work, if she would go deep into folk life, she should not think there is anything wrong with being a bastard. If it is based on the author's personal settings, there should be explanations, and some settings are also subject to discussion, such as the cement formula. You must know that there are monsters in Teyvat. It does not mean that everything will be fine if there is a road. In general, the character settings are either different from the original work but not clearly described, or the settings are too taken for granted.
There are a lot of mistakes and typos in the first chapter
I copied it from Lu Zi, and I copied it so slowly.
Could the author try to get the girl to come over?
When will we continue to move more here? There are obviously more over there.
How many words does the author intend to write? Hope it doesn't end badly.
Six six six six six six six six six six six six six six six
I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist?
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