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Brando can also be said to be an Internet-addicted boy who is too involved in the drama. What about this protagonist? Is the gesture of licking Miya so disgusting? After being stabbed, I was lucky enough to get the Dragon Knight System, and I still want to say that Miya gave it to me? You've only known this woman for a few days, so falling in love at first sight isn't such a cheap thing, right? Moreover, in the front, he was clamoring about how to avenge his teammates, but then he turned into an indecisive weakling? If you cooperate with your teammates, they will all die in vain.

Why do my sisters' books have such poor scores? Does Qidian like those cool articles that insult the readers' intelligence so much?

It's a pleasure to read this novel, and it's so elegant at all times. It's not like the usual routines of those lower-level novels. The protagonist is invisible but not out of style, and his thoughts and actions reveal the innocence of a big boy. It's really used to the extreme. The supporting characters are full of personality without being stereotyped. The enemy's IQ is always online and has its own characteristics. The suspense setting is exquisite and complete, and the world view is complete. It is revealed bit by bit, and the logic is smooth and human. The animal motivations are very natural, but it is a pity that it is slow to catch on (compared to my best friend, it is slower, and occasionally I have the feeling that I don't understand it and suddenly realize it after a while, because the author has added rigorous settings (some parts are difficult to understand) and complicated details in the novel to enhance the sense of immersion, but in fact, science fiction movies are more effective. After all, movies and TV shows can be passed at a glance, but in novels, this is really a long paragraph of text). But those who like to watch it will simply not be able to stop!

I don't understand the use of always writing about how beautiful women are. Can you please be more mature? I know there must be someone to carry it

When I was reading book reviews, I saw that many book friends were talking about the character of the male protagonist, so as a person who likes this book, let me defend it😘. First of all, game novels are different from otherworld novels. People's emotions based on virtuality and reality are different. Haven't many gay people have read the memes about being submissive in reality and attacking hard on the Internet? Compared with the other two parts of Fei Yan Da Da, Eta's game part is much less, which is only used to price combat power and skills. And from the past dozen chapters, it can be seen that Eta's world has actually changed from a game to reality, and there is a reflection between the lines. Also, the protagonist of this book is a growth stream, not a cheating stream where he is fighting against the sky and the earth, so there will be a process of transformation. If you follow the story from the first chapter to the present, you can clearly see that Pig's Feet's character and approach to dealing with things are different from the original. Also, pay attention to the settings. The reason why Pig's Feet enters the Star Gate is because Pig's Feet admires the Forerunners. He treats the world after Star Gate as a world rather than a game, so his character is not as decisive as the game's Pig's Feet. In addition, Pig's Foot is eighteen years old, which is the age when he has just entered college. When you first entered college, did you do everything neatly? Didn't you slowly learn to improve your abilities? Otherwise, what do you expect a half-grown child to do, kill decisively? Of course, if I didn't say that someone like eight years old is invincible, I really can't comment on that article. Finally, if you have any friends who have different opinions, please leave a message. However, if you are well-founded and pointless, forget it. I don't want to ruin my good mood.

I just finished reading Chapter 35. I am worthy of being a veteran author. His skills are among the best I have seen in the past ten years. However, this article contains too many professional terms, second-time veteran jokes, and too much attention to detail, which has diluted the image of the main characters. Coupled with the over-the-top time-travel settings in games nowadays, many newcomers with a casual mentality will yawn and change the channel after seeing the first ten pictures. Even an old bookworm like me only lasted through more than 30 pictures after watching it for the second time... What should I say? At the beginning of this year, the focus is on novelty and provocativeness... Skills and so on often have to wait until later to be slowly revealed 😅😅😅

First of all, the writing style of the author of this book is absolutely top-notch among the online writers I have seen. My definition of good writing is that the things written by the author give me a strong sense of involvement, as if I am personally there. When I read the article, I do not think of the "writing style", and after reading it, I can think of the scenes or characters in the novel instead of the sentences (prerequisite is to read it carefully). The detailed description of the scenery or characters in this book always impresses me. When I first saw the introduction of this book, my mind quickly showed Etalia - this magnificent, magnificent and fantasy continent. Of course, this is both an advantage and a disadvantage. Excessive environmental descriptions and character details will make many people who are accustomed to the straightforward language of today's online novels feel cumbersome. Coupled with the difficult upgrade settings, (Although this can effectively avoid the collapse of combat power caused by too fast upgrades in the middle and later stages), it also affects people's motivation to continue reading. These factors will make the pace of the book seem particularly slow under the huge world view and numerous story lines depicted by the author. So the problem arises. After people are used to online novels that can be read quickly and get refreshed quickly, they will naturally feel uninterested when reading this novel. I read other comments. The reason why many people abandoned the book is about the protagonist's attitude towards Miya and the protagonist's character. Before commenting, we should first clarify what kind of person the protagonist is, and then see whether his behavior is reasonable. There is a saying that goes well, "Many people cannot appreciate good works, not because they know too little, but precisely because they know too much." , Use your own code of conduct to evaluate the protagonist too much, and cannot let go of your own prejudices. If you read the book in this way, you will naturally feel disgusted. (This book is worth letting go of your prejudices.) The protagonist of this book, Fang Lu, is a sixteen or seventeen-year-old boy who is optimistic and strong but still in the ignorant stage of love. Miya is just a passerby in his life. After knowing this, there is nothing to dislike. Wouldn't it be a pity if I gave up this book because of this little thing? Finally, I feel that reading and reading carefully in your free time is a good choice to relax your mind. Even if it is not easy, you can also learn from the author's description of scenery or characters. Of course, everyone's preferences are different. If you really can't stand it, there is no need to force yourself. Just change to other books.

This one is far different, maybe it's my personal preference.

Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it~ This novel is not like ordinary novels, the writing style is outstanding. But I feel like there is a problem with my storytelling ability. First of all, this book gave me the feeling that there was something wrong with the story setting, and the addition of new settings gave me a sense of violation as the story progressed. On the other hand, the whole book gave me the feeling that the author had conceived the outline in advance, but when writing the story, he seemed to follow the outline and write the story in order to advance the plot. Like playing part of a console game, going from one mission to another. The mission is just for you to play better, and this book feels like it is just for the author to better write what he wants. There are problems with the connection and explanation of the story. The style of this book is a bit like a mystery, but the mystery makes me feel very smooth when reading the story, and the plot is very reasonable. When I calm down and read it, I feel that the characters created by the author should indeed do such things. However, this book gave me a sense of discomfort from time to time during the reading process, and even some plots gave me the feeling that the author's thoughts were not comprehensive and he was making judgments. All in all, I feel that the author did not think fully when setting up the story (writing the outline), and the subsequent writing of the story felt a bit like filler. In addition, I feel that the author's writing skills are insufficient, and how to control a story well and how to connect it is not good. The author writing this kind of book can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the online literary world. But this kind of story that is close to classic literature is difficult to control. To be honest, there are not many writers in the online literary world who can write it well. Most other authors of this kind of story are not strong enough in writing and cannot control it well. (And the requirement for a certain amount of daily updates for online articles increases its difficulty.) Looking at it critically, I can only say that this book is only above the passing line. (Of course it may be a matter of my personal taste)

If you had this kind of protagonist setting a few years ago, it would have been fine, but now bookworms are generally 28 and older. Who would like or have the patience to watch a boy's process from childishness to maturity? It's definitely not popular