
There's a Big Problem in Elf Town
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(After the completion, a new book has been serialized. I hope interested book friends will support it.) The soul travels through the city, and the Pokemon handheld device that is only visible to me cannot be opened. I finally opened it, but in the initial town there was no doctor or three families... The NPC trainer died in the grass... What should I do?
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Official(33)Scraped 11d ago
Other male protagonists received various plug-ins once they traveled through time, starting from turning on the invincible mode. However, Li Shisan... Received the great academic achievements of the original protagonist, a year of hard study and college entrance examination. But... Fortunately, I didn't go directly to the examination room after traveling through time. This can probably be regarded as a kind of luck.
Let me tell you something, starting from about chapter 150, the more I read it, the more I feel pain in my balls.
The front feels good, so two stars. The back feels uncomfortable, so there are only two stars out of five. The pacing is so slow that you want to die, and the male protagonist seems very calm, but it seems to me that he doesn't understand anything in the author's writing, and just believes what others say... Gu Wan's plot really makes me feel sick, the pacing is slow, and other plots are thrown in from time to time, which makes me feel really aggrieved. How many chapters does Gu Wan's plot have? I don't know, but it didn't get any better from chapter 150 to 220, and the male protagonist was still being led by others... I didn't read the rest of it, and I didn't have the motivation to read it anymore. I just felt sick, especially because the author directly wrote that Ye Jianxuan was not a good person, and also wrote that the male protagonist would obey others. I felt guilty. It's all gone, haha, if you clean up the name, it will be a poisonous point. After all, Gu Wan also said that Ye Jianxuan and his organization are not good things at the beginning. In the end, the male protagonist didn't care about this sentence at all. Instead, he just took whatever others said. Maybe the author also forgot what he wrote before, and the male protagonist became more and more mentally retarded. Personally, I feel like I can spray whatever I want, but I won't reply anyway.
Originally, I thought Li Shisan was miserable enough, but it turned out there was a rift in time and space. Hmm... What was it like to finally go back to ten days ago after finishing the college entrance examination? I think if it were me... Thanks to Li Shisan's good attitude.
The old cliche of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is a good subject, but it is ruined by the cliché.
First
I feel like some settings can be omitted. Only 6 elves can come out. If the intelligence of these elves is not high, it's okay. If the intelligence is high, if there are more elves, only 6 will come out at a time, won't the others be autistic? Is there a female protagonist? Single heroine or harem?
Just four skills, are you kidding me? Interesting?
Li Shisan is so pitiful. He has nothing after time travel. One year later... He still has nothing. Fortunately, he has a stable mentality and can be so calm, but this golden finger should be arranged later 😂
tell the truth
The subject matter of this book is novel and some of the descriptions are spot on. But there is one shortcoming. The killing and fighting are all written in one stroke. This may be due to the author's difficulties, but it really affected my reading experience.
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Official(33)Scraped 11d ago
Other male protagonists received various plug-ins once they traveled through time, starting from turning on the invincible mode. However, Li Shisan... Received the great academic achievements of the original protagonist, a year of hard study and college entrance examination. But... Fortunately, I didn't go directly to the examination room after traveling through time. This can probably be regarded as a kind of luck.
Let me tell you something, starting from about chapter 150, the more I read it, the more I feel pain in my balls.
The front feels good, so two stars. The back feels uncomfortable, so there are only two stars out of five. The pacing is so slow that you want to die, and the male protagonist seems very calm, but it seems to me that he doesn't understand anything in the author's writing, and just believes what others say... Gu Wan's plot really makes me feel sick, the pacing is slow, and other plots are thrown in from time to time, which makes me feel really aggrieved. How many chapters does Gu Wan's plot have? I don't know, but it didn't get any better from chapter 150 to 220, and the male protagonist was still being led by others... I didn't read the rest of it, and I didn't have the motivation to read it anymore. I just felt sick, especially because the author directly wrote that Ye Jianxuan was not a good person, and also wrote that the male protagonist would obey others. I felt guilty. It's all gone, haha, if you clean up the name, it will be a poisonous point. After all, Gu Wan also said that Ye Jianxuan and his organization are not good things at the beginning. In the end, the male protagonist didn't care about this sentence at all. Instead, he just took whatever others said. Maybe the author also forgot what he wrote before, and the male protagonist became more and more mentally retarded. Personally, I feel like I can spray whatever I want, but I won't reply anyway.
Originally, I thought Li Shisan was miserable enough, but it turned out there was a rift in time and space. Hmm... What was it like to finally go back to ten days ago after finishing the college entrance examination? I think if it were me... Thanks to Li Shisan's good attitude.
The old cliche of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is a good subject, but it is ruined by the cliché.
First
I feel like some settings can be omitted. Only 6 elves can come out. If the intelligence of these elves is not high, it's okay. If the intelligence is high, if there are more elves, only 6 will come out at a time, won't the others be autistic? Is there a female protagonist? Single heroine or harem?
Just four skills, are you kidding me? Interesting?
Li Shisan is so pitiful. He has nothing after time travel. One year later... He still has nothing. Fortunately, he has a stable mentality and can be so calm, but this golden finger should be arranged later 😂
tell the truth
The subject matter of this book is novel and some of the descriptions are spot on. But there is one shortcoming. The killing and fighting are all written in one stroke. This may be due to the author's difficulties, but it really affected my reading experience.
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More than dry food It's an interesting article. Although the protagonist Goldfinger is a Pokémon game console, the plot is more about daily life in another world.




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Personally I think the characterization is pretty good. Of course, please be prepared before watching. After all, tragedy is the most touching thing. The description of the novel is okay. Even if you have never played the game, you can still read it as long as you have a general idea. The score given is 8.6--8.8 Books are classified in Category 2.




This is a friend's book, a good elf novel. The author has a million copies to his name. Updates are guaranteed. Friends who want to follow it should not miss it!






















