Modify Extraordinary

Author, do you write lighthearted articles? You created the character of the protagonist "Ninja Turtle" vividly! ! If it's because the protagonist can't beat him, it's okay to arrange for the protagonist to counterattack and slap him in the face later to create a "contrast", but it's obvious that you have set such a big obstacle for the protagonist, and you can still be so "tolerant". It's not fun at all, so don't blame the low score. Practice more! ! Finally, no need to say goodbye! ! !

First of all, the process of the protagonist becoming stronger in this book is very enjoyable to watch. But here we go, what's the use of the protagonist becoming so strong? From my point of view, when the protagonist reaches full attribute points and learns the Void Explosion Slash, he is already invincible. So why does he learn all those messy sword skills after that? He became so strong, but in the end he didn't even have the domineering courage to say to his woman, "Come with me." How can I put it this way? I look down on him. Another problem is the female village girl. Now that I see the protagonist leaving the village, I hope that he will not meet a female character in the future. Then every time something happens, the protagonist will think of having a wife at home. This is what a good man should do, but after all, this is a cool article. Doing so will only make people dislike their wives at home more and more. Originally, the character of the wife was not designed to appeal to many people's cuteness. Not white, not rich, not beautiful, nagging, and always hiding something from the protagonist (reader). The author may think that such a character is more fleshed out, but if he cannot make readers fall in love with this character, then it will be really uncomfortable for readers to see this character dragging his feet here. In my opinion, the role of the female village girl still has no story, no cuteness, and will only hinder her. It is really difficult for people to like her. Even arranging a slightly fantasy and magical encounter for her like a female businessman would be much better. The role of the female village girl seems to be assigned directly to the male protagonist. It is always emphasized that this is the person the male protagonist has carefully considered and decided to live his whole life. I don't know about other readers, but I can't feel love anyway. Love really requires a little impulse, at least if you want to write it for others to read, it does. The author can't be a girl.

It's all because of these book reviews that I gave up on a lot of good books

The writing is too rigid, making it difficult to read clearly, and the background is unclear and there is no outline. If all of these are included, it would be rated 8.5 Points.

In how many chapters does the protagonist kill someone? Now, more than sixty chapters in, someone wants to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist still doesn't kill him? What's going on? Still an otaku haha This is a novel. I read novels where everything goes smoothly and no one dares to mess with the protagonist. Why is the novel called a novel? Because it is a fantasy without any scruples, it is called a novel. Reality is reality, and novels are novels. How is this different from reality? In addition to having the halo of the protagonist

The plane engine is started, the void radar is turned on, and the space-time shield is turned on. Start loading void matter... Start defining the current universe... Start loading the space-time axis... Start defining the current time and space... Start defining the enemy structure... Definition completed... Loading complete... Start making definition changes... Changes completed... Start erasing world memory... Start eliminating the space-time axis... Destroying the current universe... Redefining the void... Definition completed... The world has changed... To eliminate the enemy... Start repairing the current time and space... Start repairing the current planet... Start repairing current axis... Repair completed... Eliminating the impact... Impact to eliminate... Welcome to use again...

This is my first time seeing such an active author! Very surprised. No matter how good the writing is, an author who can exchange dirty words with trolls or readers in the book review section cannot be offended! But this does not prevent me from giving one star, because there are no zero stars! The bereaved rose leaves a lingering fragrance in the hand!

I just read some comments in the comment area and I have to express my own opinions. In fact, if you have a bad temper, you should write less comments. If you want to express your opinions, your tone should be more tactful or change your affirmative sentences to alternative sentences. This makes it easier for others to accept, doesn't it? And if it weren't for the existence of such people as the street writers, where would there be so many novels? If everyone is a great god, how can there be so many masterpieces? Do you think that people's innovations are endless? People will get tired, and reading too many masterpieces will cause aesthetic fatigue and become boring. However, with the support of street novels, the novel world will be so exciting and endless, making us linger and have endless aftertaste. Even great gods have never been down and out, right? But they all persevered, but what about the author who jumped on the street? They have to work harder and harder! Why? Because they all know where their shortcomings are. If their level is not good enough, they practice hard; if they are not popular, they ask for recommendations... Some people may say: Why should we persist in working hard? Let's not talk about this for now, but do you still remember whether we had a charming but bumpy dream when we were young? The falling of a dead leaf exaggerates the loneliness of autumn. I don't know how many distant dreams I have encountered in a sad autumn? Yes, there are too many helpless choices in life. Society is like a world of rivers and lakes, which always makes people unable to control themselves and speak insincerely. The most regrettable thing in life is to easily give up what you shouldn't give up, and stubbornly persist in what you shouldn't insist on. So do you know why the authors of Poujie are working hard? I would like to hear what you have to say.

Let's just have a harem, let's make do with it --A real reader should adapt to the novel rather than let the novel adapt to him

This novel has surpassed the level of a novice. It has reached the point where you can write whatever you want without even using your brain. It is all kinds of embarrassing and forced to be funny. It made me suffer from embarrassment. I suggest giving a score of 0. All novels are assigned a score.