
Swallowing the Starry Sky: Awakening of the Heavenly Rewards System at the Beginning
by Fat Jingfeng
About This Novel
Qinhao traveled to the world of Devouring Starry Sky and awakened to the Heavenly Rewards System. Completing daily tasks will reward clay pots, as well as monthly attendance rewards. Through spiritual visualization, you can obtain heavenly points and improve your own strength. This is a story about practicing hard, saving jars, and opening jars. The way of heaven is magnificent, why not strive for it with diligence? Systematic writing, don't abuse the protagonist, don't lick the protagonist.
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Official(100)Scraped 5d ago
It looks so embarrassing
Before you can suppress everything, you want to kill this one and that one. If you are stronger than Hong, it is not that troublesome to kill them all. Can't you develop in a low-key manner first? There is a system that keeps a low profile for two years, and no one on earth can do anything to you.
Rubbish
It's hard for you to write such rubbish.
Awkward author
It's quite awkward. You are a commoner. Why did the Jia family want to destroy your whole family? They wanted to destroy you openly. As a result, the martial arts school and the country failed to deal with the bad guys and prevented you, a councilor, from taking revenge. In the end, you had to be locked up and exiled to the imperial palace. Traces, I am also confused. If you don't want to follow the original work, you don't have to write such a mess, right? The returning domain has become the world domain. There is obviously a formal way to follow it. But in the end, if you don't want to follow the original work, just think about cultivating and change everything?
Alas, it doesn't mean that your writing is not good.
I can't read 100 chapters of this book, so I can't stand it anymore. It's so frustrating. Why don't you read a book again? What kind of fanfic should you write? During that period, with the genius of the protagonist and my character at that time, do you believe that if you kill 100 times more people, they will protect you? And Hong was the emperor during that period, and he was even more powerful than the emperor. His words were imperial edicts, and Hong was a killer. Well, no matter how many people the protagonist killed, he would still be able to gain public praise in the end. As an ordinary person in that period, you participated in the trial and surpassed the existence of the God of War.
look at those names
To be honest, it shouldn't be difficult to name a novel, right? Why just get some random names? The protagonist's name and the supporting character's name are all messy names. The first impression of those names is very important to readers of novels. Even those who look hard to pronounce will not like it.
It's the same as S B. You don't know who has the bigger fist and who is more reasonable.
Very poisonous from the beginning
Well devouring the fan fiction written ten years ago, pretending to be 13 and slapping the nobles in the face. I was disgusted by those novels ten years ago. If you write like this, Luo Feng must have died early. The original God of War did not dare to use force in the base city!
Abuse main article
The author wrote Devouring as a text about abusing the main character, and added a bit of a cultivating and asking question, because the protagonist's mind cannot break through without abusing the main character. He must be tortured severely, and how can he break through without abusing the character, right? So don't read it in the original text, but read the main text about abusing the main character, and read it the same way as the Hugh Immortal novel. I can't even say it myself, it makes me sick to death
It's a completely abusive main text. It has its own fields. It's still so difficult to beat people at the same level. Then you can't just fight one against one when you participate in the genius battle. The key genius battles are for tens of thousands of people at the same level. Even with your strength, you don't even have a ranking.
Adding new characters, new plots, and new settings is understandable, but. . . . Directly changing the basic settings is too poisonous. In the original book, only the Lord of the Universe can resurrect people, so you can just change it to the Venerable. . . This is equivalent to directly changing the rules of the universe. After all, being able to resurrect people above the Lord of the Universe in the Devouring Starry Sky is a skill given by the consciousness of the universe, not a skill developed by oneself.
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Official(100)Scraped 5d ago
It looks so embarrassing
Before you can suppress everything, you want to kill this one and that one. If you are stronger than Hong, it is not that troublesome to kill them all. Can't you develop in a low-key manner first? There is a system that keeps a low profile for two years, and no one on earth can do anything to you.
Rubbish
It's hard for you to write such rubbish.
Awkward author
It's quite awkward. You are a commoner. Why did the Jia family want to destroy your whole family? They wanted to destroy you openly. As a result, the martial arts school and the country failed to deal with the bad guys and prevented you, a councilor, from taking revenge. In the end, you had to be locked up and exiled to the imperial palace. Traces, I am also confused. If you don't want to follow the original work, you don't have to write such a mess, right? The returning domain has become the world domain. There is obviously a formal way to follow it. But in the end, if you don't want to follow the original work, just think about cultivating and change everything?
Alas, it doesn't mean that your writing is not good.
I can't read 100 chapters of this book, so I can't stand it anymore. It's so frustrating. Why don't you read a book again? What kind of fanfic should you write? During that period, with the genius of the protagonist and my character at that time, do you believe that if you kill 100 times more people, they will protect you? And Hong was the emperor during that period, and he was even more powerful than the emperor. His words were imperial edicts, and Hong was a killer. Well, no matter how many people the protagonist killed, he would still be able to gain public praise in the end. As an ordinary person in that period, you participated in the trial and surpassed the existence of the God of War.
look at those names
To be honest, it shouldn't be difficult to name a novel, right? Why just get some random names? The protagonist's name and the supporting character's name are all messy names. The first impression of those names is very important to readers of novels. Even those who look hard to pronounce will not like it.
It's the same as S B. You don't know who has the bigger fist and who is more reasonable.
Very poisonous from the beginning
Well devouring the fan fiction written ten years ago, pretending to be 13 and slapping the nobles in the face. I was disgusted by those novels ten years ago. If you write like this, Luo Feng must have died early. The original God of War did not dare to use force in the base city!
Abuse main article
The author wrote Devouring as a text about abusing the main character, and added a bit of a cultivating and asking question, because the protagonist's mind cannot break through without abusing the main character. He must be tortured severely, and how can he break through without abusing the character, right? So don't read it in the original text, but read the main text about abusing the main character, and read it the same way as the Hugh Immortal novel. I can't even say it myself, it makes me sick to death
It's a completely abusive main text. It has its own fields. It's still so difficult to beat people at the same level. Then you can't just fight one against one when you participate in the genius battle. The key genius battles are for tens of thousands of people at the same level. Even with your strength, you don't even have a ranking.
Adding new characters, new plots, and new settings is understandable, but. . . . Directly changing the basic settings is too poisonous. In the original book, only the Lord of the Universe can resurrect people, so you can just change it to the Venerable. . . This is equivalent to directly changing the rules of the universe. After all, being able to resurrect people above the Lord of the Universe in the Devouring Starry Sky is a skill given by the consciousness of the universe, not a skill developed by oneself.









