Mechanical Modification? I Call This Mechanical Ascension!

Mechanical Modification? I Call This Mechanical Ascension!

by Zhenwu Language

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67Kwords31chapters
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Ch. 31Ascension (End)
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About This Novel

"Do you want to live?" Yang Yin, who was seriously ill and paralyzed in his previous life, accidentally traveled to a parallel modern world of high martial arts and gained the ability to transform humans into mechanical apostles. In this era when the mechanical order was weak, he became a mechanical pioneer, founded the Mechanic Cult, and transformed the broken bodies and souls into his mechanical apostles: [Mechanical Judge: With a body of steel, he judges the evil in the world...] [Mechanical Liberator: With the power of machinery, cut off the oppression in the world...] [Mechanical Oathkeeper: Use sophisticated machinery to punish betrayal in the world...] ... "The physical body is weak and weak, and the machine soars; the spirit and intelligence are incorporated into the machine, and the data is the soul." Yang Yin led the thirteen apostles, sitting on the mechanical throne, looking through all the obstacles, looking into the sky, and suddenly said: "Join the glorious evolution together!"

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The C18mo ago

Seeing that Chapter 4 has been completed, there is still a lot of room for improvement.

As the saying goes, the three golden chapters should introduce the world view, introduce the protagonist, and point out the general direction of development. The current part of the world view is relatively bland, but it's okay. The protagonist is introduced as the starting point after arriving in this world for a certain period of time (then he must have a certain degree of maturity and cannot be a fool), and the general direction is ok. Overall you can continue. Then the fourth chapter directly introduces women and writes about sex. In the first three chapters of your mechanical ascension body robot, you gave the emotional module just for 🌿B? Why is he so shy when he has never seen a woman in his two lifetimes? What are you going to do? These four words, "mechanical ascension", are the main theme of your novel. The readers you attract are here to see women, so they are directly off the road.

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Traveler Who Loves to Read Books18mo ago

I think it's okay. This seems to be the author's first book to see the follow-up development.

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Book Friends 20230312548_da18mo ago

Please support me, it's okay, it's okay, it's okay

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A Little Idiot18mo ago

Your content is too little. Brother, I can't support you at all.

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