Exploding the Bonds of Martial Arts, I Crush the Devil with My Bare Hands
by Anger And Ferocity Descended From The Sky
About This Novel
Zhao Ye traveled through time and looked at the bizarre and dangerous urban world. Competitors who try to take over their own martial arts schools, evil spirits who come out of the shadows to kill people, and star martial arts masters who are addicted to drugs and become obsessed with drugs under the banner of a large company. He slowly clicked on his panel... The white first-level body technique [Thin Water Step] + the blue third-level boxing technique [Breaking Rock Fist] + the purple fourth-level mental technique [Tianyi Xinliu] - stimulate the martial arts bond [Rush]. Your punches can break open Tiantai Mountain Waterfall! The white first-level mental skill [Dark Fire Power] + the green second-level body skill [Night Ghost Step] + the blue third-level sword skill [Hundred Ghost Break] - stimulate the martial arts bond [Netherworld Ghost Sect]. Under the dark night, you cut off the viaduct with a black flame knife! The fourth-level purple boxing method [Breaking Formation] + the fifth-level orange mental method [Hateful Heaven Technique] + the fifth-level orange horizontal training [Tiger Soul Added Body] - stimulate the martial arts bond [Evil Emperor]. That year, I put my hands in my pockets and didn't know what my opponent was! Visualize the sixth-level silver concept [Picture of the Extinct Sword God] to inspire a single bond [Yin Yang Great Compassion]! ... The four realms of ghosts and gods are about to be opened outside the sky. Zhao Ye entered alone and faced the endless demons, martial evils, and forbidden evils in this world. "The devil can come and I can go. Don't run away, they are coming to kill you."
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Official(3)Scraped 11d ago
Tired
The beginning has been changed many times. You always say that the protagonist's father is so awesome. Why is the protagonist still like this? OK, for the sake of logical recognition, I changed it directly. Now Zhao Huolong is away from home all year round. OK.
Why do I always think the protagonist's life is so weird? The protagonist's world has extraordinary power, right? Or maybe it's the protagonist's relatives, friends, and lovers who make me feel so strong. Why does the protagonist's environment make me feel like I'm being bullied? Is the protagonist my biological child? Are there so many idiots in the world? Is the protagonist's father strong or not? The protagonist's background gives me a strong feeling, but why does the performance in the article feel so rubbish?
The author did a good job in upgrading the protagonist, the martial arts idiot, fighting monsters, but the interspersed funny bickering between the martial arts idiot and the heroine, an innocent high school girl, is really and abrupt. You wrote the fight against monsters quite well. It would be much more comfortable if you just cut off the heroine part. Although many people now like to write funny and smooth characters. The premise of being funny and smooth is a surfer with high emotional intelligence. To play an emotional idiot and an innocent high school girl is very vulgar and unreasonable. It is better to cut off the emotional scenes. It's fun to fight monsters and upgrade without any thought😑
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 11d ago
Tired
The beginning has been changed many times. You always say that the protagonist's father is so awesome. Why is the protagonist still like this? OK, for the sake of logical recognition, I changed it directly. Now Zhao Huolong is away from home all year round. OK.
Why do I always think the protagonist's life is so weird? The protagonist's world has extraordinary power, right? Or maybe it's the protagonist's relatives, friends, and lovers who make me feel so strong. Why does the protagonist's environment make me feel like I'm being bullied? Is the protagonist my biological child? Are there so many idiots in the world? Is the protagonist's father strong or not? The protagonist's background gives me a strong feeling, but why does the performance in the article feel so rubbish?
The author did a good job in upgrading the protagonist, the martial arts idiot, fighting monsters, but the interspersed funny bickering between the martial arts idiot and the heroine, an innocent high school girl, is really and abrupt. You wrote the fight against monsters quite well. It would be much more comfortable if you just cut off the heroine part. Although many people now like to write funny and smooth characters. The premise of being funny and smooth is a surfer with high emotional intelligence. To play an emotional idiot and an innocent high school girl is very vulgar and unreasonable. It is better to cut off the emotional scenes. It's fun to fight monsters and upgrade without any thought😑
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