
Become a God Starting from Your Natural Power
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There is no way to hate the sky, and there is no way to hate the earth. Cultivation begins with the innate divine power... The new book "After Dark!" >>Apocalyptic secret martial arts fighting, punch to the flesh, if you are interested, you can check it out
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Official(242)Scraped 11d ago
Point out a few poisonous points!
1: My father is also a master, but the family lives in a slum and cannot afford to eat? Wasn't the enemy killed by his father's friend, the monk? 2: Is Xu's a charity? You want to be an apprentice, and you'll be given your skills, paid, and provided with food and drink. When you're done, you'll leave without signing the contract?
Lin Mo looks very smart, which can be seen from many details, such as careful planning for the future, small movements after getting things, and always paying attention to his surroundings.
It was really poisonous in the early stage
The father has a strong force value, but he is reduced to the point where he almost bought his daughter. The two parents-in-law can't even afford to raise three children? Living in a slum and unable to afford food? It would be better if you just write about your parents offering sacrifices to heaven and having unlimited power.
Lin Mo was reborn. He must have been reborn in another world. The air in this world is quite good. Now, like most people, he is busy building city walls every day and pays his salary every day, which is good.
Talents and other things can still be seen, but the character of the protagonist is too petty. The fate of the Overlord, the power of the blue dragon, the capital of the Great Emperor, the Holy Soul Demon Fetus, these domineering talents have actually created a waste like the protagonist, a group of cowardice and cowardice. In the narration, every general and powerful man shed the last drop of blood for the world's war, and then the protagonist drinks tea in the back and looks after the children. , I went to the battlefield just to practice my skills. When I saw something bad, I just ran away without fighting. I was so tired that I stepped on my horse and vomited. The real king was so powerful that he didn't dare to go to the realm. Other people like him dared to go to the half-step master. Are you worthy of these talents? If you give this talent to a powerful general, you would dare to exchange the blue sky for the bright moon. If the foreign land comes, destroy it. If the country is corrupt, you will recreate the blue sky. The most annoying thing is escapeism.
Let's not talk about books first.
I read a few chapters of the protagonist. I feel like a fool. He is also a time traveler. He is like an idiot. He doesn't know many common sense issues. Also, he is not very good at speaking. He cannot speak even when he wants to. He is speechless when others say him. His IQ is also mentally retarded. He has no bright spots. He is almost a waste.
The further you look at the back, the worse it becomes. Killing people become stronger, killing people becomes stronger, and the protagonist becomes more and more inhumane. You can watch it from the front, but it's disgusting from the back.
New poisonous spots
These latest chapters are very poorly written. Your writing makes it clear that Wang Shouyi will become a stepping stone to the protagonist. An honest boy from the countryside went to the city and was deceived and bullied in various ways. After doing good deeds, he was forced to become a flag bearer of black Buddhism? Then he was punched to death by the protagonist? What do you want to promote? Are all the supporting characters written about human beings? Was it Xiao Wang who took him to the hospital when he was seriously ill or was it Xiao Wang who paid for it? He usually relied on Xiao Wang for financial support. His two sisters and his wife were also taken care of by Xiao Wang. But then he stabbed him in the back because of jealousy and petty profit? Are all the supporting characters pigs? No brains? Betray your benefactor for the greater good of Sesame? Is this how you treat your benefactor who thinks of everything for you? In the past 19 years, I have never seen, let alone heard of, someone doing such a cruel thing to their benefactor in order to make more money. The supporting characters are so beautiful and clever. Wang Shouyi's writing is also silly. He comes from the countryside, but he is not a paratrooper, nor is he a fool without any brains. This book is not unfair with a score of 6.6
First of all, there are parents and siblings at the beginning. In the future, they may be blackmailed or taken away. Let's not talk about a certain talent and a certain talent that is favored by the sect, or what kind of physical furnace. What on earth are the protagonist's parents doing? The protagonist doesn't even know what they do. But they say my family is so awesome. Then what did you teach you when you were a child? You were awesome and let your children move bricks, and their lives were threatened. Why introduce your daughter to a pork seller? It's very unconventional, okay? It is recommended that you cut off your parents, siblings and family and become a peasant orphan. After you finish practicing martial arts, you will encounter some unique martial arts by chance, and you will be beaten all the way.
A batch of garbage
It took more than forty chapters to write about returning to the Lin family, and Ningcheng was not at peace, but it took more than a hundred chapters to write about going back.
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Official(242)Scraped 11d ago
Point out a few poisonous points!
1: My father is also a master, but the family lives in a slum and cannot afford to eat? Wasn't the enemy killed by his father's friend, the monk? 2: Is Xu's a charity? You want to be an apprentice, and you'll be given your skills, paid, and provided with food and drink. When you're done, you'll leave without signing the contract?
Lin Mo looks very smart, which can be seen from many details, such as careful planning for the future, small movements after getting things, and always paying attention to his surroundings.
It was really poisonous in the early stage
The father has a strong force value, but he is reduced to the point where he almost bought his daughter. The two parents-in-law can't even afford to raise three children? Living in a slum and unable to afford food? It would be better if you just write about your parents offering sacrifices to heaven and having unlimited power.
Lin Mo was reborn. He must have been reborn in another world. The air in this world is quite good. Now, like most people, he is busy building city walls every day and pays his salary every day, which is good.
Talents and other things can still be seen, but the character of the protagonist is too petty. The fate of the Overlord, the power of the blue dragon, the capital of the Great Emperor, the Holy Soul Demon Fetus, these domineering talents have actually created a waste like the protagonist, a group of cowardice and cowardice. In the narration, every general and powerful man shed the last drop of blood for the world's war, and then the protagonist drinks tea in the back and looks after the children. , I went to the battlefield just to practice my skills. When I saw something bad, I just ran away without fighting. I was so tired that I stepped on my horse and vomited. The real king was so powerful that he didn't dare to go to the realm. Other people like him dared to go to the half-step master. Are you worthy of these talents? If you give this talent to a powerful general, you would dare to exchange the blue sky for the bright moon. If the foreign land comes, destroy it. If the country is corrupt, you will recreate the blue sky. The most annoying thing is escapeism.
Let's not talk about books first.
I read a few chapters of the protagonist. I feel like a fool. He is also a time traveler. He is like an idiot. He doesn't know many common sense issues. Also, he is not very good at speaking. He cannot speak even when he wants to. He is speechless when others say him. His IQ is also mentally retarded. He has no bright spots. He is almost a waste.
The further you look at the back, the worse it becomes. Killing people become stronger, killing people becomes stronger, and the protagonist becomes more and more inhumane. You can watch it from the front, but it's disgusting from the back.
New poisonous spots
These latest chapters are very poorly written. Your writing makes it clear that Wang Shouyi will become a stepping stone to the protagonist. An honest boy from the countryside went to the city and was deceived and bullied in various ways. After doing good deeds, he was forced to become a flag bearer of black Buddhism? Then he was punched to death by the protagonist? What do you want to promote? Are all the supporting characters written about human beings? Was it Xiao Wang who took him to the hospital when he was seriously ill or was it Xiao Wang who paid for it? He usually relied on Xiao Wang for financial support. His two sisters and his wife were also taken care of by Xiao Wang. But then he stabbed him in the back because of jealousy and petty profit? Are all the supporting characters pigs? No brains? Betray your benefactor for the greater good of Sesame? Is this how you treat your benefactor who thinks of everything for you? In the past 19 years, I have never seen, let alone heard of, someone doing such a cruel thing to their benefactor in order to make more money. The supporting characters are so beautiful and clever. Wang Shouyi's writing is also silly. He comes from the countryside, but he is not a paratrooper, nor is he a fool without any brains. This book is not unfair with a score of 6.6
First of all, there are parents and siblings at the beginning. In the future, they may be blackmailed or taken away. Let's not talk about a certain talent and a certain talent that is favored by the sect, or what kind of physical furnace. What on earth are the protagonist's parents doing? The protagonist doesn't even know what they do. But they say my family is so awesome. Then what did you teach you when you were a child? You were awesome and let your children move bricks, and their lives were threatened. Why introduce your daughter to a pork seller? It's very unconventional, okay? It is recommended that you cut off your parents, siblings and family and become a peasant orphan. After you finish practicing martial arts, you will encounter some unique martial arts by chance, and you will be beaten all the way.
A batch of garbage
It took more than forty chapters to write about returning to the Lin family, and Ningcheng was not at peace, but it took more than a hundred chapters to write about going back.
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Recommended ⭐⭐⭐, the first part is a bit imitated by Shifang, the later part is not bad, it has more than a million words, there are many books to read.




Set fan comments to 100 The problem at the beginning is huge, and I won't fix it later. The male protagonist's father belongs to a relatively large family in the surrounding area. He actually doesn't teach his children to read. He doesn't even know how to read when he is 14 years old. When he comes home and sees that his children are talented, he would rather work for other people than go back to the family. His IQ is not good to say. He has not taught literacy or martial arts for more than ten years. He is extremely poor. When he sees that his children are promising, he still pretends to be a master. It is really interesting. The patches applied at the back are also perfunctory. If a child doesn't want to go to school, the parents agree. Why should the child be the main parent? I am willing to patch but not willing to change the previous content.




The protagonist's plug-in can obtain special talents. It is considered a high-level martial arts genre. The plot is a bit cliche at the beginning, but it is interesting in the middle and later stages. The protagonist slowly grows up and turns the tide to save the sect. Later, the protagonist has BOSS potential. From a chess piece to a flag-bearer, the protagonist and supporting actors are good. Overall, it is a bit watery. Updates are not better now. 6 Points Subscribe to see individuals




You can also read it if you like "Get Out of Him". It's definitely fun. There are some pirate elements in it. It's quite interesting. The main theme is revenge. This one is considered a pure "Jiba". I didn't finish the rest of it because they were almost invincible. Two rounds of competition for hegemony are about to start. I still like to read the story of the rise of a small character in the previous part. It's more than three million words and it's a huge volume.













