I Was Contracted at the Beginning and Became the Queen's Companion Beast

I have been working hard to correct some mistakes, hoping that I can salvage them, but if I can't do it anymore, I can only stop writing, hey!

A companion beast that has been poisoned to death and someone else finally made a contract with it, and it is very good to the companion beast, so you just kidnap it and run away? And let the companion beast beat its master and seriously injure him? I don't understand this logic, I'm poisoned

In the eyes of Xiang Xueer, the five-seal spirit beast has the best luck, and there is no possibility of failure. However, she failed, which made other people also become interested, but no surprise, they also failed.

Lin Chen is a time traveler. He has been in this world for more than a month. At first, he was full of fighting spirit. Now he just wants to be a salted fish companion beast. After all, it is so comfortable 😂

Be clear about your identity and responsibilities.

It seems that Lin Chen, who has become a companion beast, has a system, but he is a little confused about what his mission is. Faced with Xiang Xueer's contract invitation, Lin Chen refused without hesitation. Is this for the mission?

As you can see, there is no one in the first row. It is written about realm at the end of Chapter 19. Regarding realm, you can also refer to the realm of spiritual beasts below. There are differences between high-level and low-level beasts and mysterious beasts. In addition. Five seals, four seals, three seals, two seals, one seal! Breakthrough, cross a realm, and then continue five, four, three, two, one, breakthrough! Then five, four, three, two, one! Breakthrough! Break through seven realms six times.

Author, don't give up. This book is very interesting. Please read more.

The plot and background setting of this book are not bad, but the details of this book..., How should I put it, is too rough. Many details are not written well, and some details that are not important but need to be explained more or less are not written. It feels like there are many pits. The pits are too rough. After reading a few chapters, this book gave me the feeling that I was reading a pirated book, because many pirated books are missing a little here, a little there, and the details are seriously missing for various reasons, which gives readers a very different feeling. I personally don't like this kind of book very much, but this book is still good. At least you can read it when you are in a book shortage. I hope that the author will come back and fill in some details in the book when he has time. I personally guess that the author wants to skip some irrelevant and nonsense things and go directly to the main line. , Write out the main development things, and omit some private things, so as to save the word count. Does this feel like you are not up to the word count? But you have to be able to control it. I feel that you are a little bit out of control, because when you write like this, the connection and emotion between the characters will not be prominent. No matter how much love, hate, and hatred there must be some development process, and The author didn't give everything to others at the beginning. He also handed over the Emperor's Sutra, Divine Secrets, and even bloodline magical powers. He really almost told the other party that I was from the earth and that I had a system. Come and grab it. Come and grab it. Moreover, the other party was the empress, a peerless powerhouse. She had the temperament of the empress to despise all living beings, and she had the insight and invariability of being an emperor. It's shocking, but the empress in this book is even younger than the little girl next door. To put it nicely, this means that she doesn't have the airs of an empress, but to put it worse, it's just mindless. So if you, the author, can't control it, it's best not to write like this. Polish the details carefully and pay attention to them. Don't make it seem like you just took out the outline. Note: These are the comments I gave after reading only three or four chapters. I don't know what will happen next to this book. This comment is just my personal opinion and has nothing to do with the book or the author. You can go to the author to find out. If there is anything wrong with my opinion, or if it causes displeasure to the author or readers, please ask the author to reply to me and ask me to delete the comment. I can delete the comment at any time, or the author himself should be able to delete the comment. Thanks!

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