Covering the Sky: Starting from the Sky-swallowing Magic Jar

Always talking about cause and effect in cultivation is bullshit. If there is no golden finger, you will care about the cause and effect. If you don't fight, don't try. "You will have no achievements until you grow old and die. In the world of cultivation, if you grab resources, you will either die or you will live." Which big shot doesn't grow by grabbing resources. Whose fist is the truth? Even if he saw the jealous treasure in prehistoric times, he would still snatch it away. Those who practice are not killing tens of millions of people with sticks in their hands.

To be honest, this book has almost made up for all the regrets in the original work. It is worth reading. After finishing Zhetian, you can write about the perfect world, and after finishing the perfect world, you can write about the Holy Ruins. In short, this is the most enjoyable Zhetian harem fanfic I have ever seen. Don't forget to add the ruthless emperor in the end. To be honest, the other female protagonists are not very impressed. It doesn't matter if they are included or not? But the ruthless emperor must be married, because he is the soul of the book Zhe Tian. The protagonist did not retire the ruthless emperor, so he felt regretful, and Liu Shen. To be honest, it doesn't matter if other heroines are included or not, but these two must be added, because these two are in the novel and anime. As long as you have read the novel or anime, as long as you like the characters in it, these two will basically become the two-dimensional goddess protagonists. As a big stallion, if these two do not accept your invitation, the official document will be in vain.

Although Princess Shencan helped the protagonist a lot, Princess Shencan left immediately and treated the protagonist as a filial junior. It was too arrogant. She was just a holy king, not even a great sage, and could not even be the core protector of her ancient prince. But the protagonist also saved the life of Princess Shencan, and also gave her a bunch of holy fruits and sacred springs. Princess Shencan was just a holy king, and it was impossible for him to show her his own scriptures even if he fought against the Buddha. This kind of kindness was too great, and the protagonist was too humble. The protagonist's chaotic body and imperial weapons are almost as good as the ancient prince. The result is so pleasing, which goddess cares about the protagonist's licking.

My biggest feeling now is that the author's writing skills are obviously not enough, and there are big problems in the plot design. I don't know why others read this book, but anyway, I came here for the harem. Look, do the people in the harem have a role? Now that the Yaochi Saint has inexplicably stopped snatching her, what do people like Zixia and Yao Xi count before? The original Yaochi Saint is a piece of shit. This body of sunflower water is obviously your second design, and the talent is just like that. You also got a purple girl and there is a high probability that you will not accept the dragon girl. Are you saying that the dragon girl and the others have a strong desire to seek the truth? Haha, I am really laughing to death. What's so hard about marrying people like Dragon Girl? If you directly take the initiative to challenge all the children of the ancient emperor in Beidou, defeat them in the same realm, show the secret of military characters to restrain the emperor's soldiers, and then let Gai Jiuyou hold the emperor's soldiers to suppress Beidou, and use race as a threat, will people like Long Nu not marry? And the Princess Shencan you created earlier has basically collapsed now. The daughter who wrote Zhulong before has not filled in the hole yet. I don't know what she is doing. The best way to deal with Princess Shencan is that she felt her emotions for the protagonist when she was in retreat to break through the Great Sage. She did not dare to face this, and she happened to sense the breath of the royal blood of the Shencan clan, so she ran away. Although this is not a clever approach, isn't it better than letting her go without any foreshadowing and now the character collapses? The rhythm of the plot and the creation of the characters can be said to be a mess, like 💩. This is my evaluation. The protagonist's strength progresses too fast and I can't write about it later. I can understand it, but you will allocate the plot of the protagonist to Ye Fan later? All I can say about Jiang Ruoyu and others is haha, you can't write a protagonist who guides girls? You can't write about getting along with Zixia and the others? You can't write about Princess Shencan's encounter in the Yuhua Temple? Can't you start with people like Jiang Tingting? I had to write a little bit here and there, until the character of the main character was not obvious at all, and the characters of Princess Shencan and others collapsed. Really, this is my evaluation. There is also the issue of Cao Yusheng's name. With the protagonist's current strength, as long as the inheritance of the ruthless lineage is not exposed, there is no problem at all. Why doesn't the innate holy body Tao Fei use his own name? You have to use other people's names to feel happy, right? And you are still trying so hard to win over people like Wang Teng. To be honest, I don't know what the use is. The battle between the emperors and the emperor is bloody and cruel. Are people like Wang Teng worth your efforts to win over now? When you become a saint later, those who become emperor will naturally move closer to you, instead of you talking a lot of things out of nowhere and giving the Nine Secrets of the Emperor Scripture, why, do you want to influence them? Haha, what a mess, don't you have enough of those strange beasts in the early stage to form a clique? People like Wang Teng will naturally move closer to you in the middle and later stages. Do you need to be a dog now? What's the point of collecting them? To fight a Ziwei, you can push it evenly with the imperial soldiers. Do you need them? I really don't know what to say, this is my evaluation. The plot, rhythm, characters, and selling points are almost all broken down. The combat is also a mess and I can't find anything exciting, so what should I watch?

There are few and beautiful harem stories. But why does the protagonist keep helping Ye Fan? The protagonist owes the empress karma and just pays it back in the future. Now it looks like the protagonist is helping Ye Fan conquer the empress. Does Ye Fan have to be the empress' brother?

Salted Fish commented on "Zhatian: Starting from the Sky-Swallowing Magic Jar" in QQ Reading · Chapter 4: The Sky-Swallowing Magic Cap The Sky-Swallowing Magic Jar is not considered number one. After all, it was only made with the body of the first life. Not counting Ye Fan's later period, the number one ranking is the Immortal Killing Sword Formation one against four. The number two should be the Void Mirror, which is about to become an immortal weapon. Emperor of Heaven is an honorific title, not the name of the combat power system, and do you really think that the Heaven-Swallowing Devil Jar has not been practiced again? Even if the Emperor of Heaven is of a certain level, you still have to say that the Wushi Bell is an immortal weapon in order to praise the empress. The Wushi Bell will become an immortal weapon directly. The ruthless person in his first life is on the same level as Wu Shi. A list of gods is equivalent to his own right hand. According to Wu Shi's level, he is not inferior to ordinary imperial soldiers. Therefore, the Wu Shi Bell and the Sky-Swallowing Magic Jar are most likely to be on the same level. Then the Void Mirror bathed in the blood of many supreme beings is not as good as the imperial soldiers of the first life of the ruthless man. The first life of the ruthless man probably has not yet embarked on the path of the mortal immortal. The God-Emperor said just think of me as a waste. The Immortal Emperor is revered as a god. Can't you understand the meaning of the name God-Emperor? There is also Qingdi, even though his brain was twitching, he ran to open the fairyland alone. And who can withstand the Immortal-killing Sword Formation of Lingbao Tianzun? Stop bragging about the empress without any sense. Emm, this book friend, I am just talking about the expressiveness of the imperial soldiers in the original work of "Shading the Sky". 1: The original work of Zhe Tian, ​​fairy weapons: Fairy Bell, Desolate Tower, Bronze Fairy Palace, Empress Fairy Sword. (The Immortal Heavenly Sword and the Wushi Bell became immortal weapons later on.) Two: You said that the God-Emperor also has Heavenly Emperor-level combat power, but the original work did not show it. Just because the God-Emperor became the Immortal King in the Holy Ruins, you cannot say that he is invincible in the human realm. These are two concepts. The description of the God-Emperor in "Zhe Tian" is that he is lying dead all the time, and his imperial soldiers are not outstanding. The God-Emperor's clothes are just the performance of ordinary imperial soldiers. Three: The Heaven-Swallowing Magic Jar was made from the body and spirit of the first life of the ruthless man. It has the strongest expressive power in the dark turmoil. The Immortal-Slaying Sword Formation you mentioned cannot activate on its own, and the original work of Wu Shi Zhong did not show it to be very powerful. Not to mention the Void Realm, it is far behind Qinglian. Four: In the dark turmoil, both Qinglian and the Zhuxian Sword appeared. The Sky-Swallowing Magic Jar was almost the same as an ordinary imperial soldier before the empress' shadow appeared. However, Qinglian was on the same level as the Immortal Heavenly Sword, and the Immortal Heavenly Sword was very afraid of it. The sky-swallowing magic jar shatters the immortal sword. Five: The Emperor of Heaven can be said to be both combat power and realm. This is the same as the Quasi-Immortal King. The Quasi-Immortal King is just a peak true immortal. The Emperor of Heaven can steadily kill the perfect imperial figures. The ruthless man killed several Imperial Holy Spirits in his first life and was able to break them into immortal cauldrons.

In an incomplete world like Zhetian, there must be very few causes and effects, otherwise the forbidden emperors would not have launched the dark rebellion. Giving things to others, that thing, and pleasing others all say cause and effect, cause and effect.

See Chapter 432. I really can't bear it anymore, either the men will let the women go or they won't! Then some old Ziwei saints who planned to kill the male protagonist shamelessly wanted the elixir after realizing that they could not defeat the male protagonist? ? The point is. The male protagonist actually gave it to them like a fool... I really couldn't stand it 😒 And the author of some characters in the original work also changed it! For example, Gai Jiuyou, Ye Fan, Empress, Wang Teng, Ji Zi, their characters in the original novel are not like that😎 Sometimes the male protagonist cannot even defeat these villains. And when the forced pretense fails, some inexplicable people will always come to save the male protagonist... Is the author still living in 207? Isn't this too cliche? And the most disgusting thing for me is that the author keeps making the male protagonist effeminate. What does it mean to be handsome? That's just because he is more handsome than the average handsome guy. But in the author's understanding, what does it mean to be more beautiful than a female fairy? I really vomited. Author, can you write? Have you read the original novel? The biggest poisonous point is Ji Biyue. I feel sick when I see this woman. In the original novel, there is only an ordinary supporting character who plays a minor role, but the author deliberately turned her into a pseudo-chaos body? No need to guess, I already knew that I was going to join the male protagonist's harem again, right? The funniest thing is that the male protagonist said that this woman can reach the peak of quasi-emperor in the future? How disgusting! Don't kill women when you meet them, don't kill men when you meet them... What else can you say about following your heart and imitating the Great Emperor Wu Shi? Thoughts are clear? I can't bear to kill too much 🤮🤮🤮🤮😎 And there is another big problem, but basically all the women caught by the male protagonist did not betray the pig's feet! They all fell in love with the male protagonist inexplicably. Haha, it's so fake. If the male protagonist didn't have the resources, strength and background, do you think they would cuckold you? 😎What's a little bit poisonous is that the male protagonists are so confident that they won't betray them😱I feel like I'm more handsome than the universe and I vomited! There are more than 30 women. As long as the male protagonist dies, I don't believe that no one will secretly eat this book behind the male protagonist's back. There is another reason why I don't want to read this book. It is that I talk about cause and effect every day, and then help Ye Fan... I have no intention of quitting.

Is this author sure he has read the original work of Zhe Tian? The Heaven-Swallowing Magic Jar was broken into pieces by the Empress herself and fused to her mask and fairy sword. The Heaven-Swallowing Magic Jar is just an imperial weapon. It's pointless to brag about it. What's more, what is the body of the Heavenly Emperor? Emperor of Heaven is just a title of honor, not a realm. The first three chapters almost persuaded me to quit. I admit that the empress is very talented, but there is no need to brag about it. She lived five lives before Ye Fan became emperor. The highest level in the whole story of Zhetian is only the Red Dust Immortal, and she does not even reach the level of the Quasi-Immortal King. The follow-up is a follow-up. Does it have anything to do with the original work? Don't just let the whole Immortal King come out at every turn. The entire text of Zhetian revolves around one "immortal", Immortal King? What do they know?

Female protagonists: An Miaoyi, Yan Ruyu, Qin Yao, Yaochi Saint, Yao Xi, Yang Yi, Princess Shencan, Immortal Queen, Jiang Tingting, Ruthless Emperor