This Martial Sage Has Two Hearts and Three Lungs

👀: This is history 🤓: I have made my own decision! 😋: So naked! 👀: You know it's a stone, why don't you avoid it? 🤓: After one escape, it has become two escapes! So why avoid it? 👇This button can summon me back to continue Akaishi

You are writing about the rich second generation. When you meet a water ghost, the first thing you do is fatten yourself up and feed it to the water ghost, right? No one else can wear your meaty outfit. If you don't go to the gym and temple to give it a try, then if you want to practice, don't go to the master and go through their safe channels and want to send another wave. The key is that the people who went into the river together were almost dead, and everyone else was brain-dead? No one came to deal with it, and the parents didn't have any idea? It is impossible for the first generation to be alert if it is so low. The first five points are too many. If you raise the expectations, you can give me a big one.

When encountering a ghost that harms him, the protagonist himself doesn't understand, so he magically goes to practice martial arts on his own, without asking his father, master, or the Zhenling Secretary to understand the situation. I have only been practicing martial arts for a few days, and I went straight up the mountain to fight against an unknown mountain. It was called practicing martial arts, but I was not prepared at all. The protagonist's money, connections, and rich second-generation body were useless. The Japanese came over to play. There was no one from a decades-old martial arts school who could fight. The protagonist, who had just practiced for a few days, came over. What happened next was a shock. I originally thought that the author was a little girl and wanted to support it, but I didn't expect that, alas, there is something wrong with it, the protagonist is still reckless, not afraid of death at all, and writes a strong climax and fan love.

After all, he is a second generation, so he has to deal with everything by himself. Shouldn't someone be called in to ask if someone is in trouble? Why go there in person? Didn't the protagonist's father retire from the army and start a business? Why don't you have any vision and take precautions in terms of force?

If you don't know how to turn, don't force it to be written. Hard turning points are confusing. If you don't have that level, don't learn from the writing methods of those great masters. Also, the protagonist's character is too popular, and there is no unique writing style. For example, if something happens, the public's thoughts coincide with the protagonist's thoughts. For example, why didn't you discuss it with your father when you encountered a water ghost? Why didn't you even meet your father? And where is the master? When it comes to the master, it is polite to call the master first, and then call the master one by one, the last name of the master, and then the teacher. Don't you think it's nonsense? Why go up the mountain just to test your own strength? In more than twenty chapters, several things happened with almost no logic, and they were forced to be written randomly.

It feels less exciting. I have read the first fifty-five chapters so far, and I feel that I should be bolder in many places. Well, this is my own fishing experience. If the author can understand it, just experience it.

Isn't that system capable of merging demon corpses? Why is it so troublesome to fuse the mandrill's heart when the water ghost can be melted directly? There is also the incident of water ghosts at the beginning, in which people on a boat drowned one after another, and their families had no reaction at all, especially in Li Kang's case. It was so obvious, and in the end no news of the ghosts spread. It would be fine if there was an organization covering it up. The Zhenling Division was no different. In the end, it was the water ghosts that the protagonist solved.

In this troubled world, the protagonist has the vision of the past life, coupled with the golden finger, he has the ability to form an army, cultivate strong men, open his eyes to the world, learn advanced technology, so that the people can live a happy and healthy life, and will not be slaughtered at will, unite like-minded people, expand the territory step by step, and finally dominate the world. Only a unified world and the gathering of all forces can cope with the troubled times in the future when demons are fully revived. Otherwise, ordinary people will basically not be able to survive in such troubled times. The population will continue to shrink. Not only will there be monsters and monsters, but also overseas countries will look at it with eager eyes. Form your own guns and govern a party. Not only can you save people, but you can also collect various resources for the protagonist. Do more with one stone!

The messy settings make it more uncomfortable the more you look at it

Fortunately at first, it was just about getting stronger. But then the fan-fic setting was introduced, which made it nondescript and boring. It's like using a fan's setting and changing the skin.