Fanatic!

To be honest! Suppressing the protagonist is a bit overwhelming! 1: Not a time traveler 2; No golden finger! 3: Having martial arts means that you cannot fight fiercely. Unless the protagonist is a martial arts genius, and he is a multiple of other people's geniuses who practice once, ten times.

Let's talk about the advantages first: the protagonist's personality is in the dark camp, which is quite innovative and good. Disadvantages: This book is completely the kind of novel written by a gangster about fan Chen Haonan, but it is covered with a layer of fantasy. At first, the character of the protagonist is pretty good, but the more I read, the more I feel that it is a description of the Hong Kong underworld in the 1990s. It is covered with a layer of fantasy, and then the name of Hong Kong is changed. The protagonist has no system, no golden fingers, and is purely aboriginal. The author has no choice but to arrange opportunities for the protagonist. He can be a teacher of some unknown and invincible boss who is about to die (after all, he is wearing a fantasy skin). He can be "accidentally" seen and appreciated by the eldest sister of the underworld by even performing martial arts on his balcony. Now that you have the opportunity, what about your strength? There is no golden finger, ok, the author directly arranges for the protagonist to be a unique martial arts prodigy. What is equivalent to teaching the protagonist a kung fu this week, and the next week he can learn it vividly and vividly. The key is that the protagonist also learns "Wolf Boxing", which is actually Muay Thai, practicing with legs and elbows, and the flesh and blood are blurred. Then the author directly arranges that if the flesh and blood is blurred from training today, apply medicine the next day, and then continue practicing. Really speechless. Finally, the protagonist is a man who graduated from junior high school, bro Oh, by the way, actually I always thought that the author was copying that one, that book that started in Suzhou, that book with that title, it also started from the Kowloon Walled City in Hong Kong, and then got involved in the underworld.,,, And another highlight is that the protagonist rises to power at the beginning, in order to highlight how awesome the protagonist is, let the protagonist kill more than a dozen people, and then say that the Kowloon Walled City has its own According to the rules, the police can't come in and have nothing to do. Then in the later stage, maybe in order to force a conflict, the police were arranged to find the protagonist in the Kowloon Walled City. Then the protagonist killed someone again, and then suddenly JC came to take care of it (just think of the scene in Young and Dangerous where the gangster was caught by JC, holding his head in his hands and shouting "Sir"), Quite speechless. Oh, by the way, the last highlight is those little gangsters, who belong to the underworld. Maybe the author wanted to express how awesome they are at the beginning. Killing people, killing people by taking drugs is very common, but there is not a single gun in the entire Kowloon Walled City. The gun appears only after the protagonist has been trained.

A bit contradictory, killing people without blinking an eye, being ruthless to his brother, doing bad things and doing good things at the same time? And you gave 1,500 out of your own pocket to this little girl? Did you kill my father? Do you really think that others will miss you if you treat her well? No matter how bad her father is, her father's blood is thicker than water, and Dorgon still passed the throne to his godson!

It's a pity that I really can't find anything interesting about this novel. I took a quick look at it. It's a novel that has no cheats and is written by a local native. I don't have any sense of immersion. I have to boldly guess whether the character has been replaced?

No? Take the liberty to ask! How many words do you have in your first chapter? 4K? Or 6k? It's okay for you to pay 6k! You won't update two chapters of 4k?

By the way, is this Shark Sister suitable to be a pony? A mouth of sharp teeth 😣

The author speaks out! Have you made up for the chapter you owed during your previous leave? I asked for leave this time, have you made up for it?

Yes, the faster the pace, the better. More, preferably this book can be read by me during the New Year.

When will the update be released? Come out and squeak twice Also! Your plot is too slow! The protagonist's status is now like that of a red stick, and he is also suppressed by his strength level! If you want to sit in the seat of the protagonist's senior sister! Unless there is a big opportunity to improve your strength! If not! It will take at least a year or two to achieve the strength of the protagonist's senior sister! And the protagonist's senior sister's strength is not yet at the first stage! Maybe in phase two! Almost reaching the highest stage of strength! Because Sister Shar (the protagonist's senior sister) wants to take the leading position, she must at least be strong enough! So I guess it's almost the first stage of strength. But I suspect there is another stage of strength above the highest stage! The protagonist's master should be in the first echelon of strength, but he is injured (should be)! Judgment based on the logic of my idea! It takes at least five to ten years for the protagonist to do whatever he wants! ! Your book has really changed a lot.

Small fights are boring. I wanted to see elephants fighting, but I ended up writing about ants fighting.