I'm Not a Great Guy

In a novel with the theme of showing off, the main character's role is only to be a transfer station and a machine for interpreting exercises. I even worry about whether group members will die suddenly from time to time, which makes me very puzzled. You have to say that the protagonist is so worried because he is not strong enough and is afraid that he has done something wrong to stop the group members from uploading their skills. But the problem is that after the protagonist analyzes the skills, it is obvious that the group members have benefited a lot! Why not do things that are beneficial? To say that the protagonist feels guilty, I think the protagonist also emphasizes that he is not very strong! What's more, who is to blame for his own death? It would be a lie to say that this novel is not good, but at least it looks smooth. But it was the above issues that made me suddenly stuck while looking at them. I hope the author can write better and better.

Overall it's pretty good It's just a little flawed. If you attain enlightenment and become a saint, you can easily create a low-level martial arts technique. It's impossible for group members not to know Now that he has attained enlightenment and become a saint, he can master all the techniques of a low-level martial arts plane at a glance, and it takes him so long, so there are already many flaws. There is also the Five Extremes Golden Pill. At that time, the three thousand guests of Zixiao Palace were basically Da Luo Jinxian. The Five Extremes Golden Pill obviously did not meet the requirements. There are also chat groups. People who can create chat groups are either Daluo Jinxian or quasi-sages or saints. It is impossible not to develop the function of traveling through the world. Since it is a low-end version of the prehistoric world, even if a small master creates Wujitian, it is impossible to travel through the world, because it involves the law of space, the law of time, the law of cause and effect, and the law of destiny. Secondly, the points in the Biohazard world that the main god space shuttles through are basically impossible to be that high, because the points are controlled by that main god space, and the tasks are also released by the main god space, so they cannot be that high. Just like the low-end version of the prehistoric world, it is not difficult to obtain the low-end version of Pangu. Of course, this may also be discovered by the high-end version of Pangu. It is impossible to travel through the world without any cost. Secondly, the protagonist has too many flaws. The special effects are special effects and are not like saints at all, especially in terms of skills. If Da Luo can travel through all the worlds, it is impossible for a saint to open up a small space. When the protagonist travels to the plane of Zhao Ritian, it can be seen that Zhao Ritian is a bit stupid. If sanctification is just a name, then they can't bear the pressure of time travel at all. Besides, it is just a low-end version of the prehistoric world. It is not so heaven-defying. If this is possible, then make a yarn and directly travel through the heavens and worlds to slowly improve and develop slowly. Secondly, the chat group does not have many functions. There is no positioning function, video function, voice function, or time-travel function. There is only one ban, kicking, and checking the strength. As the leader of the chat group, since the chat group can communicate with different people from all over the world, it should be easy to check their strength, and checking their strength is only a basic function. So this chat group is like a broken chat group, like a system with missing functions, and the time travel still relies on the low-end version of Wumingtian. What is the purpose of the chat group? Doesn't the chat group have special skills exclusive to the group leader? Secondly, is the protagonist traveling through a low-end version? If it is a low-end version, it is just a special effect and should not allow others to improve their cultivation. And according to the calculation in your novel, if the worlds of the group members are added up, you did not mention Zhao Ritian's world. But compared to other worlds, it only ranks second to last. A master is equivalent to becoming a saint. The one who is proudest in the world is innate. So it's still a bit hard for me to understand how the special effects of the protagonist are brought to other worlds. The low-end version of the prehistoric world can be understood by the way of heaven But the rules of operation in other worlds should be different, right? If you rely on a low-end version to travel across the world, won't other worlds reject it? It's a bit higher than the low-end version of the prehistoric world. Of course, it may also be the prehistoric era. After all, the low-level version of the prehistoric era is also the prehistoric era. There are different avenues. Three thousand worlds are equivalent to three thousand avenues. Each one is different. Also, can a grandmaster survive for such a long time? Is it okay to go without sleep for dozens or hundreds of days? It takes about 100 days to walk on the great avenue of merit and virtue. It takes seven or forty-nine days to comprehend a skill. Doesn't it consume mana, mental strength and physical strength? Can a grandmaster endure it like this? He is still a master of martial arts. I'm afraid this is not cheating. Also, in these more than 80 chapters, the protagonist only has a few opportunities to show up. After chapters 7 and 8, he will basically only appear when he is comprehending the skills, or when traveling, and rarely shows up after traveling. Then he is worse than the supporting characters. Look at the group of heroes and those group of supporting characters.

Hey, what a great book. No matter how great each character may have been, here they are all cunning villains.

So weak that a sniper rifle can kill a saint.

It's better not to write about her, her character is gone, and she's going to be vomited, (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻

You can mention your name N times in one sentence, basically from beginning to end.

The stupid group of friends quarreled every day, and the protagonist had to wipe their butts, which seemed mindless.

The average number of words in each chapter of the group chat is half of the water. Occasionally, it is okay, but the chapters are so watery that it causes reading fatigue.

Is the author Shen Zhong addicted to the poison of fighting through the sky? When did Nalan Yanran become that character? I am also convinced. Xiao Yan, the protagonist, has forgiven Nalan Yanran and you still wrote Nalan Yanran like that. No wonder there are not many comments after more than 200 chapters. Some of the comments are mostly negative reviews.

After reading Chapter 60, I found that the group leader is an idiot. He couldn't understand the operation until he finished it. Is the protagonist really the protagonist? ? ? On the contrary, the group leader is an idiot and mentally retarded protagonist.