Prove the Pinnacle Again
by Huang Liang Meng Zhuang Zhou
About This Novel
In the parallel world, countries are in chaos and then restored to rule; martial arts are prosperous and then peaceful. "Chinese people know kung fu, oh hehe hehe~" - a talk show host. "A certain Tai Chi master was knocked down by a fighting enthusiast in 10 seconds. The master claimed that he had no use of his internal strength" - a certain newspaper. Qin Zhan put away his mobile phone and turned off the TV. "System, we will practice for another two hours today!" "The pinnacle of national martial arts, let me prove it again!"
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Official(15)Scraped 1d ago
Too procrastinating
The author's setting for the protagonist is to "talk a lot". When the system speaks one sentence, the protagonist can say ten sentences. To be honest, this setting is not pleasant, because it sets a threshold invisibly, because the reader must first endure the protagonist's rants before he can continue reading. However, reading the novel is not "a must for you." For example, the first chapter is just the dialogue between the protagonist and the system, with no other content. The second and third chapters are filled with a lot of trash talk by the protagonist, and the remaining content is only about doctors and hospitals, which are not nutritious. If you write it this way, with all due respect, not many readers will be able to read it. If the system says something, the protagonist will say a lot of non-nutritious content. If the supporting character says something, the protagonist will talk a lot of rubbish, and there will be very little remaining content. So here's the question, author, tell me, what do readers want to see? Do they want to see the protagonist running around talking nonsense? What modern novels want is "clean", the author is telling a story, and the reader can clearly understand what story the author is telling, rather than "the protagonist telling" the whole story. The three golden chapters are all taken up by the protagonist's talk. If the reader knows what you are talking about, it is a miracle. Hey, let's go back and rewrite.
What's going on with QQ reading?
Does QQ reading even have ads? Difficult to do
Do you know what you are talking about?
In the first chapter, he was poisoned to death. He had no idea what he was talking about. The protagonist was talking to himself.
what was written
What did I write? It was a mess. I couldn't stand it after reading the first one, and I didn't even know what you wrote.
The author is considering reshaping this book. How about sorting it out? Maybe it will get better
Can't watch
After reading fifty chapters, the author ruined a good story!
Pig's feet are the emperor of complaints, right?
Damn it, I want to kill you! The biggest failure!
grass
Who dares to say who understands it? Those who understand it are definitely knowledgeable people and awesome. . . . . . . . . . (Broken sound)
Author, I'm back! I'll give you a reward in a few days. Will there be more updates?
Author, I'm back! I'll give you a reward in a few days. Will there be more updates?
So awesome!
It's really amazing. I didn't expect you to have written more than 1.2 Million words. Come on!
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Official(15)Scraped 1d ago
Too procrastinating
The author's setting for the protagonist is to "talk a lot". When the system speaks one sentence, the protagonist can say ten sentences. To be honest, this setting is not pleasant, because it sets a threshold invisibly, because the reader must first endure the protagonist's rants before he can continue reading. However, reading the novel is not "a must for you." For example, the first chapter is just the dialogue between the protagonist and the system, with no other content. The second and third chapters are filled with a lot of trash talk by the protagonist, and the remaining content is only about doctors and hospitals, which are not nutritious. If you write it this way, with all due respect, not many readers will be able to read it. If the system says something, the protagonist will say a lot of non-nutritious content. If the supporting character says something, the protagonist will talk a lot of rubbish, and there will be very little remaining content. So here's the question, author, tell me, what do readers want to see? Do they want to see the protagonist running around talking nonsense? What modern novels want is "clean", the author is telling a story, and the reader can clearly understand what story the author is telling, rather than "the protagonist telling" the whole story. The three golden chapters are all taken up by the protagonist's talk. If the reader knows what you are talking about, it is a miracle. Hey, let's go back and rewrite.
What's going on with QQ reading?
Does QQ reading even have ads? Difficult to do
Do you know what you are talking about?
In the first chapter, he was poisoned to death. He had no idea what he was talking about. The protagonist was talking to himself.
what was written
What did I write? It was a mess. I couldn't stand it after reading the first one, and I didn't even know what you wrote.
The author is considering reshaping this book. How about sorting it out? Maybe it will get better
Can't watch
After reading fifty chapters, the author ruined a good story!
Pig's feet are the emperor of complaints, right?
Damn it, I want to kill you! The biggest failure!
grass
Who dares to say who understands it? Those who understand it are definitely knowledgeable people and awesome. . . . . . . . . . (Broken sound)
Author, I'm back! I'll give you a reward in a few days. Will there be more updates?
Author, I'm back! I'll give you a reward in a few days. Will there be more updates?
So awesome!
It's really amazing. I didn't expect you to have written more than 1.2 Million words. Come on!
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