Douluo: My Martial Spirits Are Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue

I am a time and space administrator. There are currently 500 time travel quotas. I will give you a free time travel quota for Q1.

The more I write, the more biased it becomes, and the more I write, the more outrageous it becomes. Especially when the system says to run away at first and then says to hang up and restart, can your plot be at the crash point? The power of the plot is getting more and more outrageous. I really hope the author writes it carefully. It becomes more and more outrageous later on. It feels like a world of fantasy small waterways is written as the best in the world. Where does the power of creation come from? Void or Chaos? After Dou Er's God Realm War ended, even a little bit of void could barely hold the God Realm to pieces. Why didn't you write the power of Creation if you didn't just destroy the Douluo Realm with your little bit of creation power? Instead, it was written as a creation god like MC who is weaker than him. What made him resentful about Huo Yuhao was that he was not valued for his own efforts, but you chose to write a character like a certain god king. Also, it was false to say that you wanted to avenge your mother. Have you really read the original work seriously? There are two worms and one person crazily brainwashing you to persuade you not to be blinded by hatred, but you didn't mention a word. They really didn't take revenge in the end? It's no different when writing about Hu Liena. Did you really use your brain? If you drag Dou Yi Hu Liena into Dou Two, what will happen to Hu Liena, the God of Love in the God Realm? Are you creating a parallel time and space? Is there really such a thing as parallel time and space in the small world of Douluo Realm? If you can't continue writing, you should just go straight to the pig horns. The more you think about it, the angrier you become. In a rage, you rush to the God Realm and kill Tang San. Anyway, your combat power is completely destroyed.

Can the heroine be replaced? If you look at the current Peerless Tang Sect, they basically have the heroine Jiang Nannan, the heroine Jiang Nannan, the heroine Jiang Nan. Can you please stop making the heroine Jiang Nannan and give her something new? Don't want Wang Donger either. Anyway, just don't need these two. You can replace them with others. Anything else will do. I am annoyed by these two. You can replace them with Snow Emperor or Wang Qiuer. Just don't change these two. Don't want Tang Ya, the head of the Tang Sect, either. In fact, Silver Dragon King Gu Yuena can do it too. I can give you a five-star review, but I beg you to replace them. O living Bodhisattva of great kindness and compassion! As long as the heroine is not Wang Donger, Jiang Nannan, or Tang Ya. Any other heroine will do. Don't even look at it. Nowadays, the heroines are basically the three of them. You can change your mind or change the characters, or add one or two more characters. Anyway, as long as the heroine is not the three of them, it will be fine. I'll give you a five-star rating after I'm done. I can even reward you with two thousand yuan.

Because I found that none of the books you wrote were really finished, and basically all of them were either unfinished or eunuchs.

The writing is really disgusting, the protagonist said that he must act in a high profile, Xu Sanshi has been chasing the protagonist's own fiancée, and then the protagonist fights with Xu Sanshi, paving the way for three chapters where the supporting characters despise the protagonist and ridicule the protagonist, and then after the fight starts, the protagonist has three hundred thousand year soul rings but they don't light up (Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue have the strength of Titled Douluo in the protagonist, and there is also the eternal armor given by the Goddess of Destiny, which can completely overwhelm others with force), even if they fight with bare hands, they can obviously fight directly. Xu Sanshi was seriously injured, or beat him until he couldn't get out of bed for dozens of days, but the result was only one punch. After being beaten, he still faced the protagonist, humiliated and said harsh words, and the protagonist pretended to be calm and not caring. It feels aggrieved, useless, and uncomfortable. The protagonist still thinks that he is very high-profile. He is insulting his fiancée because he is too proud of you. The protagonist is still there as an audience. This book is perfect💩

I'm giving you the four-character battle armor. Come on, come on, come on.

The author should not write that kind of trivial article. Although it is not very good, it is really uncomfortable to read. Although it is a misunderstanding, it is really poisonous.

Don't engage in that kind of domestic drama, where misunderstandings, misunderstandings, misunderstandings, and ultimately the heroine and the supporting role play together. I still want to see the protagonist accepting Jiang Nannan

The author thought of two soul beasts, both of which are reasonably suitable for angel martial souls (some were found on Baidu). The first Holy Light Flame Lion King, cultivation level: 190,000 years. Soul ring skill: skill effect. The first soul skill: light and fire body protection, which can protect himself and other teammates. The increase in soul skills will also increase the number of people protected. The second soul skill: Holy Light Destruction: Holy light surrounds the body and begins to accumulate power. After charging up, rush towards the target at extremely fast speed. When hitting, an extremely powerful holy light explosion is formed, causing damage to the target. The effect of evil soul masters and dark attribute soul masters is doubled. Soul Bone Skill: Holy Light Possession: The body awakens the divine attribute, and the attack is increased by 100%. All damage caused by the Holy Light Possession is difficult to be healed. All control effects on the body are reduced by 30%, and all mental damage is rebounded. Continuous Flashes of Holy Light: The Holy Light condenses the clone of the main body, reducing the overall speed by 30%, and the clone has the full power of the main body. The clone blends into the environment and is undetectable. When the main body hits the target, the clone shines together, applying multiple times of power to the hit site, causing extremely strong damage. Before the clone completes the attack, the target is adsorbed in place by the holy light and cannot move. The second one is Blue Silver Emperor, soul skill: Sanctuary Blue Silver Emperor: a top healing plant-based martial spirit with light attributes that can exorcise evil spirits, suppress evil spirits, and heal injuries. In the natural sanctuary area, all plants within the area are contaminated with light elements, perform sacred photosynthesis, and generate the energy needed by the body and friendly groups. Holy Blue Recovery: The surrounding soul power gathers towards the target on its own, restoring part of the soul power instantly, and the soul power recovery speed increases by 50% for a period of time. Soul Bone Skill: Blue Silver Flash: If there is a good place with Blue Silver Grass within a certain range, even if there is only one Blue Silver Grass, you can teleport directly to that Blue Silver Grass.

The author's process should not be too cruel, just a little bit is enough. In fact, Jiang Nannan's inner thoughts are those of most fantasy heroines. In those fantasy novels, the heroines with talent, strength, and background have men who want to share themselves with other women. I won't talk about other fantasy novels. Take Fighting to the Sky as an example. The reason why Gu Xun'er can tolerate Medusa and Xiao Yan being together in the end is because Because she and Xiao Yan are actually married, and Medusa gave birth to a daughter for Xiao Yan. Without these two conditions, it is absolutely impossible for Rengu Xun'er to share her man with other women. After all, one must be gifted, strong, and backgrounded, so why should she share her man with other women? So don't say it's poisonous. I've seen plots more poisonous than this before.