
Dragon and Phoenix Douluo
by Goro
About This Novel
[New book: "Signing in from the beginning of Wu Dong Qian Kun" Xiao Fei is ready to start killing! ] Ma Hongjun was filled with resentment after watching Douluo Dalu. I feel that Ma Hongjun in the book is too embarrassed by his name. He stood in front of the mirror and took a look. "With a handsome face and a perfect body, there is no time when I go to a nightclub without attracting the attention of thousands of girls!" "It would be great if I could travel to Douluo Continent!"... Dreams come true, welcome to Douluo Continent! Since you think that Ma Hongjun is not good, then you go! ... The soul passed through Ma Hongjun's body, and he was no longer a fat man! The martial soul awakens, and it turns out to be twin martial souls! The first martial spirit: Dragon Soul Spear; the second martial spirit: Evil Fire Phoenix. There is a dragon soul in the dragon soul gun, which can absorb soul rings and grow. This martial soul is so abnormal! The evil fire phoenix is still the evil fire phoenix before, but the evil fire is no longer a worry for Ma Hongjun now. He believed that this was a powerful ability that thousands of men could only dream of. If people are divided into two types, then this ability has conquered one of them!
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Official(665)Scraped 29d ago
Recommended heroine
Recommended heroine Shui Bing'er, captain of Tianshui Academy in the Young Soul Master Competition, Shui Bing'er, whose martial spirit is the Ice and Snow Phoenix. From the perspective of Dou 2 Peerless, Evil Fire can be suppressed by ice and snow attributes, especially Ultimate Ice. Although Ice and Snow Phoenix is not Ultimate Ice, its spirit is powerful and has the potential to evolve into Ultimate Ice. Moreover, it is the same Phoenix Spirit as Ma Hongjun, one ice and one fire. It is a match made in heaven. The two can also develop a martial soul fusion skill. For example, the ice and snow phoenix and dragon soul gun can make the dragon and phoenix appear auspicious, and the ice and snow phoenix and evil fire phoenix can make the ice and snow nine layers of heaven and so on.
God's concept:
Original God Zhuan Tang San Xiaowu: Shura God (law enforcement), Poseidon (level one) Qian Renxue: Angel God (Level 1) Bibi Dong: Rakshasa God (Level 1) Previous Ma Hongjun: God of Fire (defeated) (level one), God of Phoenix (level two) Dai Mubai: God of War (Level 2) Oscar: God of Cookery (Level 2) Ning Rongrong: Nine-Colored Goddess (Level 2) Zhu Zhuqing: God of Speed (Level 2) ---------------- Newly conceived gods: Such as: 1. Ye Lingling: God of Life (Level 1) 2. Shui Binger: Ice Goddess (Level 2) ... God of Death, God of Wind, God of Rain Welcome to add, new characters can be created: The format is: name, spirit, god
Everyone is welcome to discuss! ! !
New book sets sail, welcome book friends! We met together because we love the world of Douluo. Douluo opened up a new world perspective for us and brought us many beautiful memories. We still remember the novelty and excitement when we first watched "Douluo Dalu". The new and wonderful setting makes people addicted at first sight. Thank you, Mr. San! ! ! This book is about taking another trip to Douluo Continent as Ma Hongjun. Of course, this is a different Ma Hongjun! Some people say that "fan fiction should be written to make up for the regrets of the original work!" I deeply agree with this point. After all, we all create derivative fan fiction because we love a story so much, so how can we bear to destroy the original work! This book, I hope, can make up for Ma Hongjun's regret and the master's regret. Let's have fun along the way in the world of Douluo! Book friends, if you have any regrets or good insights about Douluo, you can discuss them in the book review area! ! ! See you in Douluo Continent! ! !
Talk about the advantages of this book!
1. A long-term vision, unlike other Douluo fans who are entangled in whether to grab the heroine or not, and have set their sights on various female supporting characters. After all, many female supporting characters are even better than the female protagonists, but they just lack opportunities. This is very novel. 2. The setting is good. This is the first time I have seen a Douluo fan novel with Ma Hongjun as the protagonist. 3. The setting of martial souls is also okay, just one dragon and one phoenix. Although the innate soul power is level 20, which is a bit overwhelming in order to fit in with the original work, the combat power has also increased, and it does not feel that the soul power level is too suppressed. This point is handled relatively well, and the current hang up is also reasonable. It is not too big. Without the first soul ring, it will last a hundred thousand million years.
Martial spirit, soul skill, soul beast collection building:
One brain is not enough to think about. Book friends can give me some support. If you have any good ideas, wonderful martial arts, cool soul skills, or amazing soul beasts, please leave a message below! The format is: Martial spirit name + characteristics Soul skill name + description Soul beast name + attributes
Let's talk about the downfalls of this book!
1. I feel that the pair of sisters I bought was a failure. I bought them all. If they don't get married, they will definitely be criticized. After getting married, they still can't keep up with the pace of the protagonist. If they don't want it in the future, they will become scum. After all, they can have a harem, but if they can't finish it, they don't want it. If they don't want it, they will either have a harem or they will be scum. 2. I feel like the protagonist's head is green now. You said earlier that the protagonist had many confidantes in his previous life, and then the protagonist suddenly died and traveled through time. Do you think those confidantes would never marry for the protagonist? Who gave you confidence? Even if one of them is in love with someone else, the protagonist is considered a green character. Do you think the protagonist is not a green character? Therefore, the setting of having many confidantes in the previous life is considered a failure. 3. Use various people to find trouble to promote the development of the storyline. This setting is like the protagonist having a sarcastic aura. You might as well write that the protagonist, in order to become stronger, takes the initiative to find people to compete with others to enhance practical experience and practice marksmanship. This will be much more natural than all kinds of people looking for trouble. There should be some remaining failures, but if they don't affect the overall situation, I won't remember them! Finally, I want to say that I am not looking for trouble. I did not give a low rating, and I did not criticize it.
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Official(665)Scraped 29d ago
Recommended heroine
Recommended heroine Shui Bing'er, captain of Tianshui Academy in the Young Soul Master Competition, Shui Bing'er, whose martial spirit is the Ice and Snow Phoenix. From the perspective of Dou 2 Peerless, Evil Fire can be suppressed by ice and snow attributes, especially Ultimate Ice. Although Ice and Snow Phoenix is not Ultimate Ice, its spirit is powerful and has the potential to evolve into Ultimate Ice. Moreover, it is the same Phoenix Spirit as Ma Hongjun, one ice and one fire. It is a match made in heaven. The two can also develop a martial soul fusion skill. For example, the ice and snow phoenix and dragon soul gun can make the dragon and phoenix appear auspicious, and the ice and snow phoenix and evil fire phoenix can make the ice and snow nine layers of heaven and so on.
God's concept:
Original God Zhuan Tang San Xiaowu: Shura God (law enforcement), Poseidon (level one) Qian Renxue: Angel God (Level 1) Bibi Dong: Rakshasa God (Level 1) Previous Ma Hongjun: God of Fire (defeated) (level one), God of Phoenix (level two) Dai Mubai: God of War (Level 2) Oscar: God of Cookery (Level 2) Ning Rongrong: Nine-Colored Goddess (Level 2) Zhu Zhuqing: God of Speed (Level 2) ---------------- Newly conceived gods: Such as: 1. Ye Lingling: God of Life (Level 1) 2. Shui Binger: Ice Goddess (Level 2) ... God of Death, God of Wind, God of Rain Welcome to add, new characters can be created: The format is: name, spirit, god
Everyone is welcome to discuss! ! !
New book sets sail, welcome book friends! We met together because we love the world of Douluo. Douluo opened up a new world perspective for us and brought us many beautiful memories. We still remember the novelty and excitement when we first watched "Douluo Dalu". The new and wonderful setting makes people addicted at first sight. Thank you, Mr. San! ! ! This book is about taking another trip to Douluo Continent as Ma Hongjun. Of course, this is a different Ma Hongjun! Some people say that "fan fiction should be written to make up for the regrets of the original work!" I deeply agree with this point. After all, we all create derivative fan fiction because we love a story so much, so how can we bear to destroy the original work! This book, I hope, can make up for Ma Hongjun's regret and the master's regret. Let's have fun along the way in the world of Douluo! Book friends, if you have any regrets or good insights about Douluo, you can discuss them in the book review area! ! ! See you in Douluo Continent! ! !
Talk about the advantages of this book!
1. A long-term vision, unlike other Douluo fans who are entangled in whether to grab the heroine or not, and have set their sights on various female supporting characters. After all, many female supporting characters are even better than the female protagonists, but they just lack opportunities. This is very novel. 2. The setting is good. This is the first time I have seen a Douluo fan novel with Ma Hongjun as the protagonist. 3. The setting of martial souls is also okay, just one dragon and one phoenix. Although the innate soul power is level 20, which is a bit overwhelming in order to fit in with the original work, the combat power has also increased, and it does not feel that the soul power level is too suppressed. This point is handled relatively well, and the current hang up is also reasonable. It is not too big. Without the first soul ring, it will last a hundred thousand million years.
Martial spirit, soul skill, soul beast collection building:
One brain is not enough to think about. Book friends can give me some support. If you have any good ideas, wonderful martial arts, cool soul skills, or amazing soul beasts, please leave a message below! The format is: Martial spirit name + characteristics Soul skill name + description Soul beast name + attributes
Let's talk about the downfalls of this book!
1. I feel that the pair of sisters I bought was a failure. I bought them all. If they don't get married, they will definitely be criticized. After getting married, they still can't keep up with the pace of the protagonist. If they don't want it in the future, they will become scum. After all, they can have a harem, but if they can't finish it, they don't want it. If they don't want it, they will either have a harem or they will be scum. 2. I feel like the protagonist's head is green now. You said earlier that the protagonist had many confidantes in his previous life, and then the protagonist suddenly died and traveled through time. Do you think those confidantes would never marry for the protagonist? Who gave you confidence? Even if one of them is in love with someone else, the protagonist is considered a green character. Do you think the protagonist is not a green character? Therefore, the setting of having many confidantes in the previous life is considered a failure. 3. Use various people to find trouble to promote the development of the storyline. This setting is like the protagonist having a sarcastic aura. You might as well write that the protagonist, in order to become stronger, takes the initiative to find people to compete with others to enhance practical experience and practice marksmanship. This will be much more natural than all kinds of people looking for trouble. There should be some remaining failures, but if they don't affect the overall situation, I won't remember them! Finally, I want to say that I am not looking for trouble. I did not give a low rating, and I did not criticize it.





















