While the Hunt is Underway
by Zuo Ji
About This Novel
After his rebirth, Song He, who was just dawdling, was accidentally involved in a case, forcing him to use his super powers of observation to resolve the crisis. However, after successfully resolving the crisis, he suddenly discovered that the world was far more dangerous than he expected, and he seemed to be unable to stop... At the same time, when he really embarked on this path, some things were more complicated than he imagined... Song He: System, what are you for? System: I can help you target the escaped criminals! Please go catch them! Song He: Wouldn't that be very dangerous? I refuse... It smells so good! System:... Song He: Bonus! Here I come! Book Friends Exchange, 214.675/116
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Hunting the murderer - Comment on "The hunt for the murderer is in progress"
Overall, this is a rebirth of a parallel world and an urban system micro-detection story. The story is more of a farming style, with a lot of daily life, the theme is positive, the protagonist has a high IQ, has a positive outlook on life, and reads fluently. It is worthy of more people's expectations. The story takes place in a parallel world. After the protagonist is reborn, he activates the ancestral system after a death experience, and begins the road of maintaining world peace by assisting the police in arresting various criminals. The biggest cheat in the story is probably the system. This system can directly provide the location and personal information of criminals when releasing tasks. After completing the task, it will provide the protagonist with attribute points that can enhance personal attributes, as well as points that can be used to draw prizes and exchange for special items. The protagonist has a distinct personality, and what I like most about him is that he has a very upright outlook on life. Faced with the arrested criminals, the protagonist does not use his personal feelings as the criterion to determine the fate of the criminals, but rather hands them over to the police and legal sanctions. This is comforting. The author's settings for the characters in the story are also quite normal and likable. The protagonist has a good IQ and likes to use mental work to overcome various difficulties. Most people have no secrets in front of him. A second-generation man with well-developed limbs and a somewhat simple mind, he has family elders paving the way for him. A group of people's policemen with their own specialties and passions make jokes every day and it's very lively. There are some... Even though they have done wrong things, they are all excusable and have their own reasons for their difficulties, and the protagonist's way of handling them also seems very humane and appropriate. This kind of world is very similar to the real world, very resonant, and very friendly to look at. As for how it will develop in the future, let's wait and see!
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I don't have much desire to read this book. The more I read to the back,
different opinions
As far as the first chapter is concerned, why do you want people to surrender, kill people to pay debts and pay back money, and their children have not done it, so forget it if you don't help them, and you also say to surrender. For parents, the children are the oldest, and those traffickers deserve to die, and death by a thousand cuts is not an exaggeration.
Dear author, do you have any questions that need to be answered?
Since it's a murder hunt, why are there cases that happened a few years ago? Since it's a case that happened a few years ago, no one else has ever doubted how the clues were discovered. There can't be so many coincidences. I hope the author can add some murder cases, the kind of murder scene investigation. The protagonist of the case a few years ago was too simple and relied entirely on the system.
It feels very bland, does it have some exciting content?
It feels very bland, and I am a bit tired from solving crimes. I could use more excitement or touching content to spice things up.
Bland, tasteless food
Just like reading a running account, what about the detective reasoning? I've told you all the clues, why are you trying to deduce it, and the heroine who was given away by force made her heart choked up and panicked?
Not bad
You can take a look and see why so few people are watching... Is the author practicing the trumpet...
Assembly line operation
This is not a detective story. All the reasoning is like a God's perspective, and the pace is super fast. One case follows another, and it's a flowing story. It's a pity that this kind of subject matter
look! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Not bad, you can take a look, come on, author! ! ! ! ! !
The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists really make people unable to complain
It's sticky and feels a bit cheap. What age has it been? It's so coquettish, and every time I see the emotional line between the male and female protagonists, it makes me feel depressed... The author should consider not writing the emotional line next time. Licking the dog gets nothing
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Hunting the murderer - Comment on "The hunt for the murderer is in progress"
Overall, this is a rebirth of a parallel world and an urban system micro-detection story. The story is more of a farming style, with a lot of daily life, the theme is positive, the protagonist has a high IQ, has a positive outlook on life, and reads fluently. It is worthy of more people's expectations. The story takes place in a parallel world. After the protagonist is reborn, he activates the ancestral system after a death experience, and begins the road of maintaining world peace by assisting the police in arresting various criminals. The biggest cheat in the story is probably the system. This system can directly provide the location and personal information of criminals when releasing tasks. After completing the task, it will provide the protagonist with attribute points that can enhance personal attributes, as well as points that can be used to draw prizes and exchange for special items. The protagonist has a distinct personality, and what I like most about him is that he has a very upright outlook on life. Faced with the arrested criminals, the protagonist does not use his personal feelings as the criterion to determine the fate of the criminals, but rather hands them over to the police and legal sanctions. This is comforting. The author's settings for the characters in the story are also quite normal and likable. The protagonist has a good IQ and likes to use mental work to overcome various difficulties. Most people have no secrets in front of him. A second-generation man with well-developed limbs and a somewhat simple mind, he has family elders paving the way for him. A group of people's policemen with their own specialties and passions make jokes every day and it's very lively. There are some... Even though they have done wrong things, they are all excusable and have their own reasons for their difficulties, and the protagonist's way of handling them also seems very humane and appropriate. This kind of world is very similar to the real world, very resonant, and very friendly to look at. As for how it will develop in the future, let's wait and see!
😓
I don't have much desire to read this book. The more I read to the back,
different opinions
As far as the first chapter is concerned, why do you want people to surrender, kill people to pay debts and pay back money, and their children have not done it, so forget it if you don't help them, and you also say to surrender. For parents, the children are the oldest, and those traffickers deserve to die, and death by a thousand cuts is not an exaggeration.
Dear author, do you have any questions that need to be answered?
Since it's a murder hunt, why are there cases that happened a few years ago? Since it's a case that happened a few years ago, no one else has ever doubted how the clues were discovered. There can't be so many coincidences. I hope the author can add some murder cases, the kind of murder scene investigation. The protagonist of the case a few years ago was too simple and relied entirely on the system.
It feels very bland, does it have some exciting content?
It feels very bland, and I am a bit tired from solving crimes. I could use more excitement or touching content to spice things up.
Bland, tasteless food
Just like reading a running account, what about the detective reasoning? I've told you all the clues, why are you trying to deduce it, and the heroine who was given away by force made her heart choked up and panicked?
Not bad
You can take a look and see why so few people are watching... Is the author practicing the trumpet...
Assembly line operation
This is not a detective story. All the reasoning is like a God's perspective, and the pace is super fast. One case follows another, and it's a flowing story. It's a pity that this kind of subject matter
look! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Not bad, you can take a look, come on, author! ! ! ! ! !
The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists really make people unable to complain
It's sticky and feels a bit cheap. What age has it been? It's so coquettish, and every time I see the emotional line between the male and female protagonists, it makes me feel depressed... The author should consider not writing the emotional line next time. Licking the dog gets nothing
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I read it in one sitting, it was very well written.
[A] Rebirth of a parallel world, a micro-detection article about urban systems. The story is more of a farming style, with more daily life, the theme is positive, the protagonist has a high IQ, has a positive outlook on life, and the reading fluency is great. Worth the wait. This is a parallel world where the protagonist is reborn. After a death experience, he activates the ancestral system and begins the road of maintaining world peace by assisting the police in arresting various criminals. The biggest cheat in the story is probably the system. This system can directly provide the location and personal information of criminals when releasing tasks. After completing the task, it will provide the protagonist with attribute points that can enhance personal attributes, as well as points that can be used to draw prizes and exchange for special items. Compared with other similar stories I have read, what I like most about this story is that its three views are very correct. Facing the arrested criminals, the protagonist did not use his personal feelings as the criterion to determine the fate of the criminals, but handed them over to the police and legal sanctions - this made me very comfortable while reading. The author's settings for the characters in the story are also quite normal and likable. There is a protagonist here who has a good IQ and likes to use mental work to overcome various difficulties. Most people have no secrets in front of him. Here is a second generation with well-developed limbs and a somewhat simple mind. Behind him, there are family elders paving the way for him. There is a group of people's policemen here who have their own specialties and passions. They make jokes every day and it's very lively. Here are some... Although they have done wrong things, they are all excusable and have their own reasons for their difficulties, and the way the protagonist himself handles them seems very humane and appropriate. I like this kind of world, because it is very similar to our current world, so it looks very friendly. As for opinions, there are still some. First of all, I hope that this is a pure urban novel. Although there is a protagonist's system, there should be no overflowing spiritual energy recovery and strange superpowers. Reading too much of it would be a bit aesthetically exhausting. Secondly, as for the protagonist's ability to analyze people, it feels like it is still in a state of ostentation at present, and it does not have much substantive effect in catching criminals. The excitement brought by the high-IQ protagonist is slightly insufficient. I hope the author can strengthen it in future plots. In the end, I felt that the story was too farmed. As a detective story, because the system can directly locate the prisoner's distance, the story lacks many links of reasoning and judgment. In this way, every seemingly difficult case seems very simple and crude when solved, so that the story now has no climax that can make people shine. Although the reading flow of this story is very good, after reading it and thinking about it, there is nothing in the plot that makes me feel nostalgic or emotional. I think this is probably a flaw that needs to be improved for an excellent work. So... I hope that while the author sticks to his own creative ideas, he will consider my suggestions above and make the story more attractive. Wish you an early signing.
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Case system document After his rebirth, Song He, who was just dawdling, was accidentally involved in a case, forcing him to use his super powers of observation to resolve the crisis. However, after successfully resolving the crisis, he suddenly discovered that the world was far more dangerous than he expected, and he seemed to be unable to stop... At the same time, when he really embarked on this path, some things were more complicated than he imagined... Song He: System, what are you for? System: I can help you target the escaped criminals! Please go catch them! Song He: Wouldn't that be very dangerous? I refuse... It smells so good! System:...... Song He: Bonus! Here I come!
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