Carry a World with You

I want to raise it but I don't have anything else good to look at, so I can only urge it to be bigger! ! ! ! ! I hope there will be hundreds of updates as soon as it is released (●'◡'●)ﾉ❤

Tang De was already in trouble, how could he have the confidence that Lin Jing would sell him the jade (dense fog) Probably, Lin Jing wouldn't sell it to him even if he threw it away for fun? ? ? Actually, I think it's fair to give Tang De a hard time.

It's a bit too idealistic. Basically, the protagonist can do whatever he wants. It is recommended to add a little more randomness and some suddenness in the future. Rather than one thing happening, I already know his ending. It should be more so that we can't guess what the outcome will be? Then if you write it down, it may be more exciting to watch, just like suspense. You write it and we guess. If it is like this, it will feel better. Also, the protagonist only needs one or two methods to solve the rebellion, which can bring down the opponent.

If you want the trap player to come in, the survivors will turn over the cards and play the trap if you think it is suitable!

Why are you trying to trick people and not let others know? You are like a nest of snakes and rats. Does Ma Huateng know what you are doing? I asked you to delete the previous one. If you are capable, delete this one.

Come on, come on! The group is waiting for you!

In fact, I personally feel that if this book follows the current plot, the protagonist should not be a stallion. Because of the protagonist's outstanding, handsome, temper and various interpersonal relationships, the plot is destined to be better if the protagonist does not become a stallion. The first point: stallion stories, I believe many people are tired of reading them, and although it is a novel, it feels boring to read such an outstanding person becoming a stallion. Second point: There are so many women in the plot now, and they are still so outstanding. Even if it is a novel, all women should not revolve around this protagonist. What's more, his girlfriend is still a second-generation official. According to the plot, his father is definitely not just a director. Normally, he will never let his daughter share his son-in-law with so many other women. There are other women who are all so outstanding, and they will never tolerate so many women around the man they love most. The third point: I personally feel that the plot can take the route of a domineering president. The protagonist is so good that he can be admired by many women, but he will never say that he will become a stallion. Since the protagonist will definitely become the most outstanding person in the world in the future, the plot can be transferred abroad. How can he protect his relatives and friends step by step, protect himself, or create mercenaries or get to know more outstanding people. In fact, these plots are also very attractive, at least more attractive than becoming a stallion. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it In fact, I really like reading this kind of novel, but I feel like it's a waste of such an excellent novel by becoming a stud novel. Also, thank you to the author for writing such an excellent novel.

The female college student holds gold bricks. The female college student on her thirtieth year gives away the country. The female college student gives away elixirs for three hundred. The female college student of three thousand ranks among the immortal class. The female college student of thirty thousand is fed by the Queen Mother. The female college student of three hundred thousand stands at the door of the Buddha. The female college student has three million. You have the final say in the fairy world. The female college student of thirty million has the final say. The six realms surround you. Holding the gold brick, looking at the mountains and rivers, eating the elixir, ranking among the Immortals, the Queen Mother feeding the Buddha, standing at the door of the Buddha, the six realms surrounding me

At first, you wrote that the relationship between Lin Jing and Li Mengxue was so ambiguous. Later, Li Mengxue got a fiancé. Her fiancé was still an employee of Lin Jing. You are a bit poisonous. Shouldn't it be a woman who is good-looking and has a good figure and is ambiguous with the protagonist? An exception would be if it is a single female protagonist. But if you are a single female protagonist and write so many ambiguous women, are you trying to poison it?

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on