I, Lin Pingzhi, Span the Heavens

Poison points provide Lin Zhennan with various opportunities to improve his strength. Lin Zhennan was not very talented in martial arts, and he also liked to expand his business. If he got a little better, the movement would be even bigger. As a result, the protagonist follows the escort agency every day and has no time to practice. Moreover, the enemy comes to him earlier, which is contrary to the completion of the cheating ability.

Poison is running wildly and causing trouble everywhere. You must be sick.

It's okay, Dudian has always wanted to develop an escort agency and forcefully insert it into the plot, but in this kind of world, developing an escort agency is actually useless.

You said that if you practice Qigong all day long, your proficiency will increase quickly. Still wandering around and not practicing any skills, is your proficiency increasing quickly? The kung fu is about the same as that of a direct disciple of Songshan. You just wander around. What do you think? You also spend lines everywhere. Why does the protagonist have such a strong sense of security and no crisis at all? If you want to give me a Shilipo Sword God, I won't even leave the gate. Also, you can't just make up a reason and tell your father the reason why your ancestors were with the Qingcheng sect? You knew the other party had bad intentions, but you still asked your father to rush to deliver the gift. Show your face in front of the Qingcheng Sect, oh, I'm still thinking about your evil-fighting sword manual.

Shennong tested poison: 1 line of text contains "..." From time to time 2. Before my internal skills have reached a certain level, I just want to go out and wander around. I am afraid that if I don't meet a master, I will slap him to death. 3. He rescued the woman who was kidnapped by the village. He felt so pitiful that he was also at fault and had nothing to say. ...Welcome additions

First of all, the time is not very clear, and the progress is too slow. It only takes two months for the skill to grow by one level. The progress is too slow. Your goal is Zhutianliu. Finally, don't use so many adjectives as they look unpleasant to the eye. Overall it's okay!

The author has never read the original work at all. He just wrote it all by himself. You have never read the original work and you are writing this kind of fanfic.

If you stick to something small, your whole family will die earlier than in the original work.

Generally, there are no bright spots. The more you look at it, the worse it becomes.

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