Lin Zhongxian
by The Fourth Child Of The Zhu Family
About This Novel
Lin Tian, an ordinary young man from a mountain village, was unwilling to accept his ordinary fate and decided to walk out of the mountains. However, he inexplicably received the inheritance from thousands of years ago and gradually became the only sword immortal in the world.
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Official(4)Scraped 6d ago
Not bad, needs improvement.
The author's writing style is good, and the scanned scenery is very detailed, which is worthy of praise. As a reader, after reading the first chapter, there are a few things that still need to be improved. 1. There is too much description in the opening chapter, and the protagonist is not introduced in the first few paragraphs; 2. The first chapter is not attractive. The most important thing in the novel is to highlight the contradictions so that readers will want to read on; 3. There are too many long paragraphs, which can cause headaches for a reader who reads ten lines at a time. This is also something that needs to be corrected. I hope these three little suggestions will be helpful to you.
Newcomers looking for encouragement
The first time I wrote, I didn't understand anything. I know it sucks but I still want to continue! The plot may be bland or not exciting, but don't blame it if the writing is not good! This is the fantasy world in my mind. No matter what, don't criticize me, I just want to finish it well. Thank you!
Although I have only read two pages, I know it will definitely become more and more exciting in the future. A good start is half the success. Work hard and write more every day. I also hope that everyone will come and support us.
It's getting more and more exciting now, keep up the good work.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 6d ago
Not bad, needs improvement.
The author's writing style is good, and the scanned scenery is very detailed, which is worthy of praise. As a reader, after reading the first chapter, there are a few things that still need to be improved. 1. There is too much description in the opening chapter, and the protagonist is not introduced in the first few paragraphs; 2. The first chapter is not attractive. The most important thing in the novel is to highlight the contradictions so that readers will want to read on; 3. There are too many long paragraphs, which can cause headaches for a reader who reads ten lines at a time. This is also something that needs to be corrected. I hope these three little suggestions will be helpful to you.
Newcomers looking for encouragement
The first time I wrote, I didn't understand anything. I know it sucks but I still want to continue! The plot may be bland or not exciting, but don't blame it if the writing is not good! This is the fantasy world in my mind. No matter what, don't criticize me, I just want to finish it well. Thank you!
Although I have only read two pages, I know it will definitely become more and more exciting in the future. A good start is half the success. Work hard and write more every day. I also hope that everyone will come and support us.
It's getting more and more exciting now, keep up the good work.
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