Start Living Forever by Assisting in Alchemy

First of all, for someone like me who likes fast pace, it's okay and listenable. But as soon as there is any flaw in this book, I can say goodbye in my heart. But for some fastidious or rigorous people, your book will definitely receive a very low rating. I won't talk about the other poisonous points, just the part in Chapter 30 and Chapter 31 where the protagonist refines the Yellow Tooth Pill (not this name, write a corresponding pronunciation). Even your elixirs can work on the foundation-building elixirs. Any wise cultivator! Just cast a spell or something else to control the death of the protagonist! And the plot of your book! It can't be dealt with by Foundation Establishment, and it's not invincible during the Qi training period! Where is the protagonist's life support? ? Don't tell me whether your Chunqiu style of writing can write this kind of death protection. As for the mentality and inner thoughts of the protagonist in your book, coupled with the plot of the world of immortality, those in the world of immortality are always trying to kill the protagonist and destroy the protagonist's talent! No matter how good your Spring and Autumn writing skills are, you can't write anything that makes people feel comfortable reading the novel.