I Can See My Proficiency in Cultivating Immortality

Damn it, a third-level weapon refiner can still score at the top of the front, middle and back. What a fucking bullshit!

The background is that Nascent Souls often end up in trouble, and the local cultivators of more than a dozen Nascent Souls often end up in fights. It is very cruel that the ancestors of Nascent Souls form a group to rob and share resources before the other Nascent Souls are dead. . . Even after practicing Pig's Knuckle to Chapter 200, he is still building a foundation and has no advanced combat power. The first sect he joined was a loser, but the second one felt that the sect was going to fight with someone else and ran away. . It feels like all the members are mentally retarded. The plug-in has honed their skills to the point of transcendence. There are dozens of top-level magical weapons in the bag. It feels like forcing some unreasonable breakthrough tasks to urge the pig's feet to run. It takes three levels to build the foundation and three disasters to overcome with the golden elixir. The writing is so awesome, but when you look at the combat power, it feels like a Chinese martial arts.

Even if you cheat during a Qi training period, you shouldn't be able to refine the Foundation Establishment Pill. You have to be able to refine it during the Foundation Establishment period. According to what you wrote, other people can also refine the Foundation Establishment Pill during the Qi training period. Then Foundation Establishment Pills are all over the place. In other books, it takes a family to sell iron for decades to buy a Foundation Establishment Pill. What you wrote is that you can just make a few big pills by yourself. It's so awesome.

In Xiuxianwen, the protagonist's living environment is very bad at the beginning, and then he relies on himself to improve the environment step by step. From the beginning, there is no hope of life, and later he looks forward to the road ٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶

The description of the use of magic weapons in fighting is not very good. Others write about cultivating immortals by sacrificing them, or patting the storage bag, a certain shield spinning around to prevent others from sneak attacks, and a certain magic sword hanging in front of you can be activated at any time.

Dear readers, I have tried the poison, and all I can say is that it is real water, and a big one at that.

The conflict in the plot was written so hastily, killing people and stealing goods was just written off on the spot. I don't know, I thought it was a foundation-building boss. However, the previous conflict saw a Karami who was in the early stage of Qi training. The story happened around the protagonist and was designed around the protagonist. There is no logical reason at all. It is just written like this. . .

I don't know if you are fluent in reading. I feel awkward listening to books. I have read so many books. There are almost no such problems among veteran authors. They keep piling up some so-called advanced vocabulary? Are you writing for the ancients? The content of the book is almost like this: the person who did it wrote the book, it was embarrassing, it was embarrassing, it was embarrassing.

Why is it almost 80% similar to a fairy tale I've read?

The plot is not bad, but it is a bit bad to rely on killing golden elixirs to advance to the Yuanying level. Moreover, it is the protagonist who takes the initiative to kill rather than someone else provoking him. Killing aliens has no impact at all. Anyone who sees the murder and blood sacrifice to advance will feel uncomfortable. It involves implicit cannibalism. In any case, humans should not be advanced materials. This will seriously affect the score. It can be changed to monsters and sea beasts. The other writing and plot are very good.