
Lord of the Abyss
About This Novel
A tumultuous year. A terrible energy storm broke out in the chaotic time and space. All the gods temporarily lost all their divine power and were forced to come to the world as saints. This is the most chaotic period in history, full of unpredictable dangers and opportunities. Powerful gods have fallen, and humble mortals have become gods. Ubiquitous chaotic fighting affects the entire multiverse. The saints are as numerous as dogs, and the witches are everywhere. Before this unprecedented period of turmoil arrived, a young man named Sauron also began his journey to another world. The new book [Super Dimension Player], a game from another world, decisive killing, pure and refreshing writing.
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Official(274)Scraped 21d ago
very good
Except that the main character is not from the chaotic neutral camp, it's perfect. (Since ancient times, there have been many miracles in chaos, especially chaotic neutrality, which is simply the perfect protagonist template)
The back part is too bad, there are a lot of introductions, I feel more tired than reading the paper.
Reading novels is for relaxation, after reading your novel. I'm in a bad mood. The main character has no strength. He doesn't fight monsters to level up and doesn't fight. Jing said a lot of useless stuff and he's always being abused.
It's too messy, and it feels like looking at an equation.
The characterization is good, but you are really verbose and explain a lot of everything. Is the author looking down on the public's IQ? Can't we understand? It's not like I'm reading a novel, it feels like I'm reading a beginner's instruction manual for a game. It's really tiring to watch. I just jumped to watch it. Also drunk.
A bookworm's reading comments
This book has been written, but the QQ reading here is incomplete. The author's text is very solid, his ideas are clear, and he does not deviate from the outline. He is a truly great author, comparable to Chen Dong, and the true words of an old bookworm.
The main text is actually okay, but after reading twenty or thirty chapters, basically half of each chapter is explained . There is too much nonsense. Many things do not need to be explained so clearly. Just a brief description of when you encounter it and what you do. If something is difficult to understand, explain it in more detail instead of explaining it all in one go.
I was attracted to the brother-sister relationship right away
It's pretty good, and the protagonist's character is pretty good too.
My name is Fang Qingyu, which means upright and unyielding, youthful and energetic, and flying in the sky. Although I was born into an ordinary family in the human world on earth, I am a [god-level talent]. I practiced Taoism at the age of five, practiced the magic [Nine Transformations of True Spirit] at the age of six, and [became famous] at the age of fifteen. At the age of eighteen, he received the inheritance of [Emperor] and has been [unique in the world] ever since. Later, he entered [Douluo Continent] and created [Peerless Tang Sect]. I have [Covering the Sky] with one hand, my cultivation is [Number One in the World], I have already become [Immortal], and I want to [Fight to Break the Sky]. Unfortunately, he accidentally entered the [Immortality Realm] and accidentally obtained the artifact [Cun Mang], which caused a huge disaster. The [Holy King] commanded the [Great Master], [War Lord], [Dragon Blood God of War], [Demon Immortal], [Dragon Ancestor], [Kunlun Evil Immortal], [Evil Lord of Another World], [Crazy God], [Mad Lord] and [Fighting God] and more than a dozen of the ultimate emperors started a [Shocking Battle] with me in [War Sky Continent], which will be called [Sky War Chronicle] in later generations. This battle was shocking. I [Nine Deaths] finally slaughtered them all at my feet, and started the feat of [Zhu Xian] [Martial Movement of the Universe]. However, [Heaven is ruthless] and attacked me while I was seriously injured. I almost lost my soul. Fortunately, [the kind-hearted God of Death] helped me and I managed to survive. Later, I walked out of the [God's Tomb], spent my whole life [seeking demons], and engaged in blood feuds [I Want to Sealed Heaven]. I created two great magical arts [Nine-Star Heavenly Art] and [Star Art] that are known to the world, and finally became the [Peerless Martial God], standing proudly in the [Martial God Space]. I am the [Proud of the Nine Heavens], my heart is like the [Purple River] flowing endlessly, and I want to create the [Wild Era] and create the [Perfect World]. You see, my life can be regarded as a [Legend], a [Mortal Cultivation of Immortality] and a [Great Sage]! ? I see that you are also of the Shui tribe's bloodline, so I will pass on the family treasures [Water Emperor Manual] and [Ji Dao Lu Bing] to you. The gods of the galaxy have the intention to send down heavenly tribulations to control the world, making heaven and earth a prison, and all living beings suffer. I am about to retreat, and I will leave behind my masterpiece "Tearing the Galaxy" in the name of me [Fang Qingyu], to give the world a glimmer of hope and a trace of Taoism. I strongly recommend [Tearing the Galaxy], and I ask fellow Taoists to give you some pointers, so that we can realize the great truth together. When the yin and yang reverse chaos, I will bring the king back to the world, and let all living beings believe in the supreme supernatural power. Together with all my Taoist friends, I will [tear apart the galaxy]!
Let's take a guess at the next book. The author said it has something to do with the last chapter, maybe with the Father of the Oak. The last chapter says that Sauron sent a seed left by the Father of the Oak to another world. Is it possible to write a story about a boy in that world who got the seed or the seed itself?
I went to several of the best priesthoods in Ultron to become gods.
Number one is the god of public restrooms! Can anyone solve the clergy conflict early? There's absolutely no violation, okay? Isn't it a little exciting to think that as long as you reach Legend and then build public toilets like crazy, you can have a weak divine power or even a weak divine power? The second place is the God of Gays. Apart from the fertility department who may beat you up, there is nothing to be afraid of, and there is no sense of disobedience at all! The third is the god of tuberculosis. Although powerful, he is a bit dangerous. All those in charge of fertility and love are enemies.
falling behind
Western fantasy can only use magicians and sorcerers as its themes. Others lack fantasy background. Although they are easy to write, they are ineffective.
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Official(274)Scraped 21d ago
very good
Except that the main character is not from the chaotic neutral camp, it's perfect. (Since ancient times, there have been many miracles in chaos, especially chaotic neutrality, which is simply the perfect protagonist template)
The back part is too bad, there are a lot of introductions, I feel more tired than reading the paper.
Reading novels is for relaxation, after reading your novel. I'm in a bad mood. The main character has no strength. He doesn't fight monsters to level up and doesn't fight. Jing said a lot of useless stuff and he's always being abused.
It's too messy, and it feels like looking at an equation.
The characterization is good, but you are really verbose and explain a lot of everything. Is the author looking down on the public's IQ? Can't we understand? It's not like I'm reading a novel, it feels like I'm reading a beginner's instruction manual for a game. It's really tiring to watch. I just jumped to watch it. Also drunk.
A bookworm's reading comments
This book has been written, but the QQ reading here is incomplete. The author's text is very solid, his ideas are clear, and he does not deviate from the outline. He is a truly great author, comparable to Chen Dong, and the true words of an old bookworm.
The main text is actually okay, but after reading twenty or thirty chapters, basically half of each chapter is explained . There is too much nonsense. Many things do not need to be explained so clearly. Just a brief description of when you encounter it and what you do. If something is difficult to understand, explain it in more detail instead of explaining it all in one go.
I was attracted to the brother-sister relationship right away
It's pretty good, and the protagonist's character is pretty good too.
My name is Fang Qingyu, which means upright and unyielding, youthful and energetic, and flying in the sky. Although I was born into an ordinary family in the human world on earth, I am a [god-level talent]. I practiced Taoism at the age of five, practiced the magic [Nine Transformations of True Spirit] at the age of six, and [became famous] at the age of fifteen. At the age of eighteen, he received the inheritance of [Emperor] and has been [unique in the world] ever since. Later, he entered [Douluo Continent] and created [Peerless Tang Sect]. I have [Covering the Sky] with one hand, my cultivation is [Number One in the World], I have already become [Immortal], and I want to [Fight to Break the Sky]. Unfortunately, he accidentally entered the [Immortality Realm] and accidentally obtained the artifact [Cun Mang], which caused a huge disaster. The [Holy King] commanded the [Great Master], [War Lord], [Dragon Blood God of War], [Demon Immortal], [Dragon Ancestor], [Kunlun Evil Immortal], [Evil Lord of Another World], [Crazy God], [Mad Lord] and [Fighting God] and more than a dozen of the ultimate emperors started a [Shocking Battle] with me in [War Sky Continent], which will be called [Sky War Chronicle] in later generations. This battle was shocking. I [Nine Deaths] finally slaughtered them all at my feet, and started the feat of [Zhu Xian] [Martial Movement of the Universe]. However, [Heaven is ruthless] and attacked me while I was seriously injured. I almost lost my soul. Fortunately, [the kind-hearted God of Death] helped me and I managed to survive. Later, I walked out of the [God's Tomb], spent my whole life [seeking demons], and engaged in blood feuds [I Want to Sealed Heaven]. I created two great magical arts [Nine-Star Heavenly Art] and [Star Art] that are known to the world, and finally became the [Peerless Martial God], standing proudly in the [Martial God Space]. I am the [Proud of the Nine Heavens], my heart is like the [Purple River] flowing endlessly, and I want to create the [Wild Era] and create the [Perfect World]. You see, my life can be regarded as a [Legend], a [Mortal Cultivation of Immortality] and a [Great Sage]! ? I see that you are also of the Shui tribe's bloodline, so I will pass on the family treasures [Water Emperor Manual] and [Ji Dao Lu Bing] to you. The gods of the galaxy have the intention to send down heavenly tribulations to control the world, making heaven and earth a prison, and all living beings suffer. I am about to retreat, and I will leave behind my masterpiece "Tearing the Galaxy" in the name of me [Fang Qingyu], to give the world a glimmer of hope and a trace of Taoism. I strongly recommend [Tearing the Galaxy], and I ask fellow Taoists to give you some pointers, so that we can realize the great truth together. When the yin and yang reverse chaos, I will bring the king back to the world, and let all living beings believe in the supreme supernatural power. Together with all my Taoist friends, I will [tear apart the galaxy]!
Let's take a guess at the next book. The author said it has something to do with the last chapter, maybe with the Father of the Oak. The last chapter says that Sauron sent a seed left by the Father of the Oak to another world. Is it possible to write a story about a boy in that world who got the seed or the seed itself?
I went to several of the best priesthoods in Ultron to become gods.
Number one is the god of public restrooms! Can anyone solve the clergy conflict early? There's absolutely no violation, okay? Isn't it a little exciting to think that as long as you reach Legend and then build public toilets like crazy, you can have a weak divine power or even a weak divine power? The second place is the God of Gays. Apart from the fertility department who may beat you up, there is nothing to be afraid of, and there is no sense of disobedience at all! The third is the god of tuberculosis. Although powerful, he is a bit dangerous. All those in charge of fertility and love are enemies.
falling behind
Western fantasy can only use magicians and sorcerers as its themes. Others lack fantasy background. Although they are easy to write, they are ineffective.
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When an unprecedented energy storm swept through chaotic time and space, the world was turned upside down and order was restored. In this environment where risks and opportunities coexist, everything is reshuffled, and only the strong can become gods. Just like the young Sauron, a legendary thief with extremely dexterous hands, he walked into the darkness with perseverance and opened his own mastery of the abyss. As a classic DND novel, this book has a full plot, complete level and world structure, and strong logic. It is very worth reading. The shortcoming is that the connection in the middle is slightly abrupt.




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