Douluo Uchiha Itachi

What can I say about this book? It's a bit messy. It feels like the author had no goals when writing. Let's not talk about detailed outlines. At least there must be an outline. There are also some data written in the front. Record some data to avoid making mistakes later. Just like Weasel, he can generate his own soul rings. The first one was a 999-year-old soul ring, but when he fought Dai Mubai, the second soul ring was still a hundred years old. This... I really write whatever comes to mind. There are also some dialogues that have no preface and follow-up. Just where Tang Hao left a letter, Itachi has obviously run to a hill and shouted. The next sentence is Xiao Wu looking at Itachi's expression... How was this written? There are also Itachi and Ning Rongrong, get rid of it. The first time they met was during dinner, but when Rongrong recalled it... This was forced sensationalism... Now I can see these problems, and the others are relatively good. It can be seen, but it will be a bit messy.

While the book is not popular yet, let's get to know it now, and it will look familiar to you. It's just that today's recommendation ticket has been used up, and tomorrow's will be given to this one, so don't tease me.

The main reason is that every time a woman appears, the author writes it in a flashy and gaudy way. I just want to say that you can't observe others so carefully when they appear, and they are all women. I think the author can use the situation at that time to write and analyze the situation before fighting or dialogue, and then it can be summed up in one stroke. The other is that Itachi's character in Naruto is aloof and cold, but here he is a deep-seated (expressionless) idiot (I think it's a bit similar to a woman who has never seen a woman). You can make the protagonist more indifferent without going too far (the main thing is not to analyze what a woman looks like when you see a woman, or how the woman behaves when she sees the protagonist). It allows the protagonist to be invincible and able to travel through time and space and then communicate with other worlds. I think Jackie Chan's Adventures is good because not many people write about it. The above is my advice to the author.

Have any brothers finished watching it? I only saw Chapter 43 and didn't dare to read it! I'm afraid of giving away a daughter. If I give away a daughter, it will drop another two stars! . . . Brothers who have watched it, please tell me if there is any version of "Send a Girl". I won't watch "Send a Girl" because I'm afraid I won't be able to help but curse people. I want to say that since there is ambiguity and you push it out to others, that is really poisonous! If you don't accept it, don't provoke it in the first place. If you provoke it, you'll want to send it out. . . . I know Itachi is a brother-in-law, but I don't know if he takes brotherhood very seriously. After all, he is the one who has killed everyone in his family, including his parents, except his younger brother. How heavy can brotherhood be? In addition to the younger brother who can be written more seriously, Itachi's character can be made more cold and arrogant. Don't add too much else, otherwise you will feel that you have changed the character's personality.

Zhu Zhuqing! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Emot=default,05/]

Itachi raised his head and looked at Sakura lying on the bed, "Forgive me Sasuke, this is the last time."

Have Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Susanoo become decorations? When did Itachi Uchiha become a sword god? The character is also wrong. Author, you haven't watched Naruto, right?

He has been dedicated to destroying Itachi for 20 years. Yes, like Naruto, he is buying dog meat with sheep's head.

Cough cough cough-- After reading it, I lost all my power. Cough cough cough - the disaster is poisonous to the body, cough cough cough - it can't be stopped. Cough cough cough-- Cough cough cough - cough cough cough cough cough - (Don't touch me picture) Someone is cheating

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