Travels Through Faerûn

Writing is not easy, I hope there will be more and more good works.

After reading a few chapters, is this Faerun or Warcraft? What I hate the most is selling dog meat on sheep's head.

I would like to give some advice to the author. From my personal point of view, you see that you are writing a boy's novel and it is about war, so don't write so many emotional dramas. How can I put it this way? You are a little good at it. . . In short, the sense of immersion is not strong. I forgot what the novel was about, but I cried when I read the novel about emotions. And yours is like watching those anti-Japanese dramas, so fake. If you write about life and death between comrades, or acting to deceive the enemy, I might be able to accept it, but the reunion of mother and son you wrote is too artificial. If any book friends think that what I said is wrong, please speak up and don't scold me.

He repeatedly said that he was not a Virgin, but Mao always did what a Virgin would do. Not contradictory?

It's good. I'm looking for this kind of novel but there are too few.

Come on, don't give up, why aren't you updating today?

Can we talk less nonsense? Half of the chapter is nonsense. .

It would be better if the main character didn't have a catchphrase.

The part about Cloud Giant City was quite enjoyable, but I haven't watched it since.