I Have a Game Editor

The idea is good, but the plot and writing are not very good. The worldview is a bit big and messy. At present, you have some traces of writing. Since you entrusted the development of building the world of the game, you have started to make mistakes in many places. 1: The protagonist is too downplayed and I fail to understand the meaning of what you wrote. This makes it too easy for me to feel disjointed and misunderstood when reading the article. 2: The description of the real world is very casual. Even if you are not very good at writing, you still have to write some realistic plots. Otherwise, most people will feel like they don't know what they are looking at. 3: The sense of immersion is slightly poor, needless to say anything about this. Haven't you noticed that since you've written so far, most of the plot feels like a small story or a branch collapse because you haven't highlighted the protagonist? 4: There is basically no main plot. I have been writing side plots all the time, which makes me feel like it is just like a running account. Just write some side plots in the main plot. But there are too many branch lines and there is no difference in hydrology, not to mention that the branch lines are really not that good. 5: The plot is too bland, and there is no better passionate plot that seems too boring, which makes many people think it is a running story. 6: There are basically no descriptions of each region except China. Now you need to find a good opportunity to connect other regions. The above are just personal opinions and personal suggestions. As long as the author takes these six suggestions seriously and makes corrections, it will definitely be better than now.

I'm sorry, eunuch. There are so many problems with this book. It was already exposed in more than forty chapters I have been writing until now and I have tried many methods but it is not easy to write. I'm sorry to my readers who support me. I'm really sorry Plus I really don't have enough time so I can only cut it off. The new book Age of Discovery is almost 100,000 words long and is much better than the old book. The framework is the same. You can read the new book. This book will never be finished I will rewrite it after the voyage is over Although I'm very embarrassed, I'm still shameless. Dear bosses, please post a new book. New book If I were a eunuch, I would eat the toilet

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Can you please check again after the author has finished writing? I have read dozens of chapters and the writing is very good, but the typos are really hard to understand.

I beg the dog Qilin and the eunuch for five reasons... No! Three! Just three! Otherwise, I will sue you at the Consumer Association👹👹🤡

Chapter 29 Pay attention. . . . May be. . . . Everyone is aware of some issues, but they cannot expose them. . . . You must know that every country's speech management is different. The author should pay attention to it.

I have read a novel called [Full-time Boss] before. Players can play various role templates in the game. I personally feel that it will be helpful to the author on monster templates. I recommend the author to read it and learn from it.

The legendary running account, yes, it is feasible for the system to flow to this extent.

A new year and a new beginning. Two chapters a day guaranteed to be updated from time to time. Give yourself a flag. The third update for the helmsman, the eighth update for the leader, and the fifteenth update for the alliance leader. Although I know no one will send it, I still have to say it!

My fault here is that I didn't make it clear. I have modified the beginning of Chapter 44. An explanation is given inside. All of Wang Chen's funds are protected by bracelets and hidden in virtual accounts. Transactions cannot be found in the country where the virtual account is used.