Inuyasha: I Penetrate the Demon World with My Divine Gun

I'll give my book full marks, but not too much

I feel like you haven't watched InuYasha. How could Yashamaru's character be like this? He will taunt the protagonist secretly to General Inu. No matter how persistent he is, he will never go against his brother. The reason why he treats InuYasha badly is because Yashamaru is fighting with the ocelot clan and has never received the support of this brother. He has always been protecting the dog demon clan by himself, so he has a very hard time trying to get the Tetsuyasha back. He thinks that with the Tetsuyasha, he will become stronger and protect his family. However, Inuyasha takes the Tetsuyasha and does nothing every day.

Don't add special nouns, such as king-level monsters. Inuyasha only has big monsters and low-level monsters. Don't write down your understanding of monsters, and change the names randomly as if I'm not reading a fanfic of InuYasha.

Do you write according to anime or according to the laws of real physics? The former can be copied from the original work, but the latter is outrageous according to Shi Yinwan's explanation. It looks like a knife but is actually dust. So what is the concept? The distance between atoms is enlarged and shrunk, which means that the mass after shortening is terrible. Also, it is five hundred times the speed of sound, which is about the same as releasing gamma rays with bare hands. There are also poisons that dissolve cells. When the energy reaches the extreme, it can produce matter, and when the matter reaches the extreme, it can produce energy. In other words, new elements can be produced at five hundred times the speed of sound. Most of the new elements are highly radioactive, and the high radioactivity itself will collapse and dissolve cells. So fortunately Ichiganmaru died early

May I ask how you can still be so useless after living for 120 years? You can't be so useless just by exercising, right? At the beginning, a mantis cat plays with a mouse, and it takes a second. As a pure monster, the demon body is the original one. Inuyasha has always been a human body because he is a half-demon. The golden finger is the weirdest because he is the only protagonist and can teach the way of death. How does the original death god wield a zanpakutō? It is really uncomfortable to watch it forcibly. In the end, I think the protagonist deserves to be the protagonist. When he is incompetent, he waits to die. If he has some ability, he is the best in the world. There is nothing wrong with it. The protagonist is standard.

I just want to ask you, why don't you have the ability to transform? That's the monster's true form, that's his true face. Is it better to use demon power to maintain a human appearance?

Author, who are you? Guinness record is struck every minute There are 807 letters. Each Chinese character requires six letters. You can type about 134 words per minute, because you are not keeping Or, so let's calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, then use 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour Exercise, take two hours to get inspired, then peel off a small When you are in a daze, you should have nine hours to type. Yi typed 435,780 words. Calculated as 2,000 words per chapter, there should be Chapter 36, but why do you only post so much content every day? Something? To be honest, is it a deduction? None of the donkeys in the production team Dare to rest like this, the author quickly got up and coded

A born monster has no monster power, just like a person is born without vitality.

It's okay, but it's just not detailed enough, there's no sense of immersion, and there's no character description.

If the protagonist is a half-demon, he can always maintain his human form without having demonic powers, which is understandable, but if he is not a half-demon and has no demonic powers, how can he maintain his human form? I feel addicted even after finishing the first chapter.