I Raise a Daughter in a Parallel World

It's all poison. In the past, when I gave negative reviews, I would pick out the plot and say which plot was not good. The first three chapters of this book are full of poison.

In fact, the overall writing is good, but this is an online novel rather than a parenting experience. I read 40 chapters, all of which are about how to take care of children. This kind of thing is fatal in online novels, but I personally can't accept it.

Babies are only good-looking when they are two or three years old. There are already more than 200 chapters and they are only four months old😙

There are many nursing issues

To be honest, even if the child's mother dies, the person you should choose for a child is a nurse. How much do people pay to you? And he is also the most qualified stepmother. Because she is the child's mother's best friend. She obviously said she was beautiful... You have money yourself. Why still prefer Bai Fumei? At first, I pushed the nurse to Shang Yan, and later to Ouyang. I'm really convinced. This is a poisonous article. Let's just say the male protagonist is poor. There is nothing wrong with choosing a white, rich and beautiful one. But I am a copywriter myself. Lots of wealth. There are too many poisonous points. Not interesting

Are you teaching me how to take care of my children?

Cute baby writing should not start from birth, but should start from the cutest age, around 3-5 years old. Your content has nothing to do with the title of the book. I can understand the author's desire to show off his daughter and parenting knowledge. But I think most of the people who come in want to see the pretty little girl rushing towards you and calling her daddy, rather than pulling a poop on you. At the beginning, you can jump to the time when your daughter is about 3-6 years old and then take over the past. You can set her identity as a well-known novelist, and then use her daily life with your daughter as the main line, or you can directly set your daughter to be in the kindergarten class, with cute children and funny children in her daily life, and her career line as a branch line, etc.

The parenting knowledge put me off. The book is actually quite good-looking and I like the style. But there are too many aspects of parenting that I skipped through.

Not bad, please update more every day

Many entertainment novels are full of poisonous points. As soon as I enter the comment section, they are all complaining. There are really no good books to read. Is it so difficult to write entertainment novels? Nine out of ten good entertainment novels I have read are unreadable. If you don't know how to write, just copy it! Models like Full-time, Midas, etc. Are popular for a reason. The main thing is to avoid poisonous points, the routines should not be too vulgar, and the other thing is to have fun. The fun should be natural, the fun should be reasonable, and there should be no rigid routines and all kinds of awkward fun just for the sake of fun. You still have to be careful when writing novels. After all, the competition is so fierce, so just write whatever you want.